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Published: 2018-06-08 03:30:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 1651; Favourites: 107; Downloads: 7
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Description "Who's there?"

Hey everyone! 

This felt like it took forever, playing with the lineart and boy can I say this one gave me one hell of a hard time. But I think I achieved the atmosphere I wanted! This came a little after the last piece called "Remnant" where I gave some thought to the other part of the group and their struggle. Enjoy and here's a small excerpt based of the idea ;D


The floor around Sans crumbled and he took a few steps back, long enough for Alphys to throw a bit of magic in the air. It exploded into a bright light, Frisk shielding his eyes in time and making Sans screech , recoiling and curling further away. Alphys barely caught Frisk as he fell and the two continued their run. "You have slipped past me for the last time human!"

Frisk grabbed Alphys's hand tighter as she turned around and headed into a large room. As she began to shut it, Sans gripped the edges of the door, struggling to get inside as the tendrils coiled and writhed. "Come on now....do not make this difficult...." Alphys trembled, grabbed Frisk, and shot a hole in the wall. The two ran towards it just as Sans pried the door open. Exhausted, the two ran down the hall, slamming several doors shut and then finally hiding behind one once Sans was out of sight.

"A-Alphys....is....is he gone?"

"Shh...." Alphys shushed Frisk as low, slithering noises sounded on the other side of the door. "Don't make a sound....no matter what...." The two waited, their breathing quiet as the noises ceased on the other side. Is....is.....he gone now? The door was slowly pushed open and Frisk struggled not to let out a small whimper. Tears fell down Alphys's face as she held the child close, a skeletal hand slowly creeping along the edge of the door. No no no no no.....

"Come out, come out wherever you are~...." Sans's voice echoed in the room as the two did their best to calm their frantic breathing. Tendrils slunk into view as the two moved closer to the wall and the door. Sans's head slowly peeked through, his blue and yellow eye flashing in the darkness. "It's no use hiding from me, little human. I can find you easily....that is, once I have your other friends..."

Paps and Undyne?! Frisk made to move but Alphys kept a firm grip on him, shaking her head.
No...she's right....he doesn't have them! They're the toughest monsters I know!  Sans gripped the door tighter, making the metal crack under the pressure.

"Very well then....here or not, it matters not. I know where they have gone....I will find them." He retreated from the door and both of them let out sighs of relief.

.....If you guys liked that small read DEFINATELY check out the rest here!

Remnant Part 2Remnant
Frisk slowly opened his eyes, his head throbbing. Where.....where am...I? He shivered and attempted to move when his arms were held back. Huh? His arms and legs were strapped down to a sort of table and he struggled against the restraints. He was in a plain, white baggy sweater, the feeling itchy against his skin. "Ngh.....gh! C-Come on...."
"You will not get out of those anytime soon, little human child." Frisk froze as a voice spoke close by, cold and quiet. A large, tall black figure seemingly made of melting shadows loomed next to him, his purple eye glowing in the darkness. "I suppose in most cases, it would be polite to introduce myself...but this is not most cases."
"Who are you? What did you do to Sans?!"  Frisk snapped, his soft eyes hardened by his Determination. "Why did you attack my family?!"
"You humans are far to loud." The figure sighed and a tendril held up an unconscious Sans. "If you mean him....he is sleeping right All thanks to my good friend !! She writing the content and I'll be illustrating all four parts . Thanks everyone for sticking around and I promise more to come!
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Comments: 19

Iovena [2019-06-01 21:51:12 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I love the expression of pure panic on Alphys' face. It's possible to nearly feel the fear of her and Frisk. Very well done!

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TMTnova In reply to Iovena [2019-06-01 22:40:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for that comment! It truly made me smile to know that you appreciate my work and effort. It means a lot so thank you

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Iovena In reply to TMTnova [2019-06-01 22:51:38 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome! It perfectly fits the story

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Sydelergy [2018-06-17 17:29:04 +0000 UTC]

absolutely amazing!!!   

but terrifying...   

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TMTnova In reply to Sydelergy [2018-06-17 20:44:08 +0000 UTC]

<3 lol thank you that made my day, truly :3

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Sydelergy In reply to TMTnova [2018-06-17 21:00:30 +0000 UTC]

I'm so glad!
You are so very welcome! Keep up the good work   

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SansFangirl4life [2018-06-08 08:40:05 +0000 UTC]

...........NOPE!!!!! *Flees*

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Holmesit [2018-06-08 04:53:13 +0000 UTC]

creepy.... is this a nightmare!sans type AU? (with the tentacles?)

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TMTnova In reply to Holmesit [2018-06-08 04:55:26 +0000 UTC]

Lol to be honest the thought did come up, they do look similar, mostly the tentacles and fear aspect of this Sans is due to being possessed by Gaster. At least thats what the plan is for the most part but I do concur, the possible similarity in Nightmare!sans did come up as a thought when I was drawing this

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Holmesit In reply to TMTnova [2018-06-08 05:02:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh! I guess maybe that is where they got their inspiration.
I only just noticed the animated glowing eyes in your profile picture. XD

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TMTnova In reply to Holmesit [2018-06-08 14:52:38 +0000 UTC]

LOL! yeah they're kind subtle

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winry7405 [2018-06-08 04:10:20 +0000 UTC]

Ooooooh, creepy. Great job coloring, didn't expect it to be so dark, the green light just adds to the eeriness.

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TMTnova In reply to winry7405 [2018-06-08 04:11:40 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I was hoping it would set the mood do you feel it needs to lightened up a bit tho? Still a smidge conflicted if I’m going to be honest

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winry7405 In reply to TMTnova [2018-06-08 04:15:09 +0000 UTC]

Hmm. Is the room supposed to be dark? I'm in the process of reading the story, but haven't reached that part yet. I don't see anything wrong with it being dark though, unless you want to show more details.

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TMTnova In reply to winry7405 [2018-06-08 04:19:36 +0000 UTC]

Well it’s in the true lab, so there really shouldn’t be much light, I just worry that due to it being dark it may seem like I’m coping out on details when I don’t intend to. I don’t know why but something just feels off and I know it but I don’t know what.

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winry7405 In reply to TMTnova [2018-06-08 04:23:49 +0000 UTC]

The background is very simple, so it's OK to keep it dark and concentrate the light on the characters. If you want to lighten it up, you'll want to add something, like cracks in the wall, some electronic devices, textures, etc. It's up to you.

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TMTnova In reply to winry7405 [2018-06-08 04:27:16 +0000 UTC]

Mk I’ll consider it for sure, thanks bud I appreciate the help

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winry7405 In reply to TMTnova [2018-06-08 04:29:25 +0000 UTC]

Glad to be of service, hehe. It looks great already anyway.

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TMTnova In reply to winry7405 [2018-06-08 04:56:00 +0000 UTC]

<3 thank you X3 you're awesome

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