ANiteOwl [2010-01-23 21:09:12 +0000 UTC]
Oh my gosh! Clara is a dancer in a nightclub! I definitely didn't see that coming but it doesn't seem entirely surprising given what we know about Clara's personality. And I say this with all the affection I can muster. Once Severus had mentioned that Linsolm owned a nightclub, I had hoped that Wraith and Voldemort might pay him a visit...and here we are! The very idea of Lord Voldemort, the darkest wizard in a century, stepping inside a nightclub is absolutely hilarious! I couldn't help but to laugh. On a slightly similar note, I wonder what Wraith meant when she said that Gavin would know the nightclub building very well. Hmm...that one simple statement has so many implications, but I guess I'll have to wait to find out.I may be over-analyzing this but is Clara slightly interested in Wraith? I'm assuming that her sexual orientation has not changed from that of the story The Raven Mage and I was simply curious. I also liked that she complimented Wraith's appearance. I think she could use that little boost. Wonderful chapter! I loved it from beginning to end! Nice name for nightclub by the way. Keep up the great work and be sure to update soon!
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