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Published: 2011-02-09 06:01:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 875; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 9
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ADDED CAPTAIN MAIM.
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WHO IS UBER MANLY, BUT YOU CAN'T TELL FROM THIS PICTRUE BECAUSE I SUCK AT DRAWING MANLY MEN.

once again... COLOUR CHECK PLEASE. I THINK I MESSED IT UP AGAIN.

The sword is totally suppose to eb bigger than that, but GNNN I WANTED HIM TO HOLD IT LIKE THAT AND IT WAS THE ONLY WAY MY TINY MIND COULD MAKE IT WORK.
fuuu i gotta practice drawing muscles. and bald men. CAUSE I NEVER DRAW EITHER. But maim is awesome.

IM SORRY I DON'T MEAN TO MESS UP YOUR CHARACTERS SO MUCH ;A; But i can change anythign if i screwed up. lol. just let me know.

one of the arms was suppose to be silver-y... but iwasn't sure which one D:
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I looked at another pci and i think i know how i screwed the arm thign up.
BUT I'LL FIT IT TOMOTOW CAUSE IT'S LATE AND IM TIRED. sorry. long comment is stupidly long now.


FACKING
HERE>>>>>>>>>> [link]
ONE OF HIS BIG AWESOME CHARACTERS THAT HAS PROBABLY BEEN COLOURED WRONG BY ME.

Well i know his shirt is suppose to be a lighter blue underneath, but in a note he said the vest was mahogany (I still can't hear that word without thinking DBZ abridged) and i was like, "IM STUPID" so i made the vest darker, and then therefore made the shirt underneath darker because the lighter shirt clashed with the dark vest i coloured on. GNNN.

But yeah. I can change th colours easily so just let me know whut i got wrong and i can fix it up xD

I HAVE TO DRAW ALL HIS OTHER CHARACTERS NOW. BUT I STILL HAVE PICS I OWE PEOPLE. and that pic i have to colour. and the growing list on fanarts i will never get finished.

damn i ramble too much. I forgot what I was even suppose to be talking about here.
I'm going to go eat more sweethearts.

HOPE YA DIG. Hope i didnt do too much scrweing up


god i feel liek im going to explode and sugar is going to flly everywhere.


Dieman is DIEMAN'S OC.
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Comments: 43

Dieman [2011-05-03 01:36:12 +0000 UTC]

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ToastSamurai In reply to Dieman [2011-05-03 02:52:06 +0000 UTC]

SHSSSHHFDHHHH I STILL GOTTA FIX THAT DAMN ARM...

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Dieman In reply to ToastSamurai [2011-05-03 08:42:22 +0000 UTC]

It doesn't show up in your gallery's main folder though... T___T

I was going to say (and I'm surprised I didn't mention it before) that I love how you did Dieman's shoulder, it's the newest version of the pauldron I'd stopped drawing on him for a while, I guess I was surprised to see that. Most people don't draw the pauldron, let alone this version of it.

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Dieman In reply to ToastSamurai [2011-05-03 08:06:40 +0000 UTC]

No better opportunity to do so than now! I mean, it's worth trying again with some of the stuff you've learned since then, correct?

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Dieman [2011-03-05 09:42:58 +0000 UTC]

I still love this so much <3

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ToastSamurai In reply to Dieman [2011-03-06 15:08:46 +0000 UTC]

LOL. ur awesome.

BUT GNN. DUDE WHEN IM NTO LAZY OEN DAY I WANNA FIX MAIM'S ARM. srsly the whole elbow-bely button thing WAS SO HELPFUL. I use it all the time nwo and my people's arm are liek normal sized. lololo. i was always afraid of drawing them too long before.

BUT NOW IN THSI PIC IT'S LIKE .____. MAAAIM'S ARRRMMMM. GNNN.

so dude. now that it's like a thron in my eyes im gonna like. FIX THAT STUFF UP.

but THXXXXX.

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Dieman In reply to ToastSamurai [2011-03-06 22:05:13 +0000 UTC]

If it's anything like it is for me with Illustrator it wouldn't be too hard to fix. All I do is select the lines and resize, but I don't know if it works that way for you in Photoshoop. Well I hope it's not too difficult to do?

Aww I'm so glad that little rule helped you out! I TAUGHT SOMEONE SOMETHING OMG

GET THAT THORN OUT OF YOUR EYE MAN, THAT SOUNDS BRUTAL

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AngelicAdonis [2011-02-12 15:41:38 +0000 UTC]

Thats pretty awesome! Very nice drawings!

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ToastSamurai In reply to AngelicAdonis [2011-02-12 16:15:38 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^^

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AngelicAdonis In reply to ToastSamurai [2011-02-12 16:16:19 +0000 UTC]

No worries!

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AlliaSterling [2011-02-12 00:55:41 +0000 UTC]

WHOA

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ToastSamurai In reply to AlliaSterling [2011-02-12 16:18:43 +0000 UTC]

A;; gnn thanks

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AlliaSterling In reply to ToastSamurai [2011-02-12 20:05:08 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome XD

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Dieman [2011-02-11 09:01:12 +0000 UTC]

You're so awesome x3

Yeah, the arms are screwed up but that's okay, I'm not even concerned about it because MAIMMMMM DFDAFDSFGGADGSDSJSDFSD but fix them arms, man xD

See, the thing about his sword is exactly that: it defies logic. His super ability is strength, so he can lift and swing that 4-1/2 foot sword as though it were a regular sized thing. That's why he's so dangerous (well, obviously not the only reason). Still, your "slim edition" Maim is awesome too, I think the downplayed muscles make the giant sword even more impressive. oh, and he's got those tags on his pants on both sides. x3

I'm really liking the texture on the sword though, great work. Like I actually sat and looked at it, it's hypnotic and detailed and ASDDFHSHJ

I know you're just being silly when you come down on yourself for your art, because you're better than me in some ways AND YOU MUST ADMIT THISSSS. Seriously, I like your art. I'm not perfect either, but we're improving! DERP PEPTALK

I WANT TO FAVE IT ALL OVER AGAIN

/another massively awkwardly huge comment

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ToastSamurai In reply to Dieman [2011-02-11 16:13:29 +0000 UTC]

-FIXES SOME STUFF UP-

I switched the silver part on the arms, but I'm not really sure what's suppose to be happenign with the straps (the refeence pic was a bit small (FOR MY PUNY MINDDD~) and i suck at details -flail- you can also kick my ass and tell me what I did wrong )
and nbdhfgnksd Im having so much trobule with this getting-arm-the-right-length thing ;A; TIME TO LOOK UP SOME TUOTIALS.

GNN I WAS TOTALLY TRYING TO MIMICK HOW YOU DID THE SWORD CAUSE YOU MADE IT LOOK SO BADASS >.> Though I don't think mine turned out as awesome (also i just put my random immaginary colours in there xD)

DERP PEPTALK. yeey.
Right you are. IMPROVEMENT! GROWING ARTISTS! -hi5-
Not everythign is going to be perfect in the beginning I suppose. BUT I WILL STRIVE FOR IT.

s'okay thsi page is totally full of akwardly long comments, what's a few more?

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Dieman In reply to ToastSamurai [2011-02-11 21:18:37 +0000 UTC]

Well, my rule for arm length is elbow to the bellybutton, wrist at the bottom of the crotch of the pants. Women are just a bit different but that's just because they're put together differently than boxy men. But yeah, tutorials taught me that, just try to find a good one!

I'm not sure what straps you mean... do you mean those tags on his pants? Yeah, as long as they're below the knee I think you've got them down fine. I should really enable downloads on those character sheets, seeing as they're that high of resolution and so damn detailed...

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ToastSamurai In reply to Dieman [2011-02-11 22:50:02 +0000 UTC]

no i emant the belts on his arm (lol i shouldn't have said "straps", that's kind of a general term)

BUT SHYEAH. That's actually pretty helpful. I always made my wrists happen aroudn the hips, but I haven't looked at it ina while (hips are probably a bit too high)
SO OSM. It's much easier when you can refer to another part of the body to get things into proportion better ;A; ~ thanks

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Dieman In reply to ToastSamurai [2011-02-11 23:35:03 +0000 UTC]

Oh well you got the belt right, no worries. It's just there to slow down blood flow to the stump... not that he needs it, he doesn't bleed for long.

But yeah, he's got a short arm happening there xD

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darknataku17 [2011-02-11 07:04:49 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh~ You added Maim! I love both of them~ <3 I noticed your colouring and lines are cleaner. c:

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ToastSamurai In reply to darknataku17 [2011-02-11 16:01:30 +0000 UTC]

I knoww! they're so awesome : 3 <3
GNN. THANK YOU SO MUCH >.> ! I've been trying to clean-up my art a bit : >

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darknataku17 In reply to ToastSamurai [2011-02-11 16:08:27 +0000 UTC]

ikr? <33

Haha, you're welcome! Don't worry, your hard work is noticable. XD

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Kroutons [2011-02-10 01:54:30 +0000 UTC]

Your lines are looking cleaner in this picture~

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ToastSamurai In reply to Kroutons [2011-02-10 05:55:29 +0000 UTC]

thanks : >

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AngelicAdonis [2011-02-10 00:38:43 +0000 UTC]

Cool beans, I like the arm! Well done!

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ToastSamurai In reply to AngelicAdonis [2011-02-10 01:13:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

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AngelicAdonis In reply to ToastSamurai [2011-02-10 02:24:53 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome man!

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Nomaki99 [2011-02-09 23:46:53 +0000 UTC]

aww! he pretty!!

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ToastSamurai In reply to Nomaki99 [2011-02-10 01:13:04 +0000 UTC]

haha thank you!

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Nomaki99 In reply to ToastSamurai [2011-02-10 01:15:42 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome! notes?

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Dieman [2011-02-09 06:24:17 +0000 UTC]

GHHHHUUU WHY MUST YOUR COLOURS BE SO GOOD, TOAST-DONO

I like it a lot, it's so good <3 You've drawn him totally on-character. The dark shirt looks better with the dark vest, I approve of this colour edit!

I don't know what I've done to deserve free fanarts, but HAPPINESS

I should send you candy so I can get you all sugared up and you'll keep drawing for me x3 I'll probably wind up giving you diabetes though.

On a "critique" note, you might want to be careful with your foreshortening on arms, because they can wind up looking a bit short... BUT WHATEVER MAN, I STILL DRAW ARMS LIKE CRAP SO WHO AM I TO SAY

I'm going to look through your gallery and pick a character of yours to draw to thank you for this and your comments and general awesomeness <3 <3 <3

I like his smug smile, he looks like a jerk here (which he kind of is at times). xD

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ToastSamurai In reply to Dieman [2011-02-09 06:45:40 +0000 UTC]

OH GOD I JSUT REALISED I FORGOT TO CLEAN UP THE COLOURING ON HIS SLEVE ;_______; -runs off to fix-

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Dieman In reply to ToastSamurai [2011-02-09 06:47:49 +0000 UTC]

GAAAH HAHAHAHAAA

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ToastSamurai In reply to Dieman [2011-02-09 06:49:07 +0000 UTC]

SH IT'S TOTALLY BEEN FIXED. it was always like that if anyone asks.

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Dieman In reply to ToastSamurai [2011-02-09 16:17:08 +0000 UTC]

Nice choice on the pants colours, too. I was just thinking about that. I always kind of pictured them like that, it looks good and is totally what I wanted!

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ToastSamurai In reply to Dieman [2011-02-09 16:37:06 +0000 UTC]

oh daymn. I'm glad I wasn't sure if i made them dark enough ;A; ! I'M TOTALLY RESEARCHING A GOOD POSE TO DRAW MAIM IN. Hopefully should have it either finished or mostly finished todayyy ;A;

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Dieman In reply to ToastSamurai [2011-02-09 17:04:58 +0000 UTC]

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Dieman In reply to ToastSamurai [2011-02-09 14:02:35 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I don't even remember anything. Looks GUUUD

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ToastSamurai In reply to Dieman [2011-02-09 06:41:48 +0000 UTC]

lol yeah I wasn't sure if i should have made him look smug or jsut like "IM AWESOME" or whut. ;A;

OMG I KNWO;A; i've been having trobule with limbs in general. (it's all this anime. I'm scared im going to draw them too long after watchign clap stuff or whatever luuul. so im prolyl over correcting myself)

BUT THANKS I SHAL KEEP THAT IN MIND


BAW. YOU DON'T HAVE TO DRAW ME ANYTHING
But gnnn Eden is my fav. character (if y wanted to draw somethin >.>)
Or rather he's the only OC i still frequently use. The rest of them are form abandoned stories xD lul. -FAIL-

BUT ANYWAY.
Glad i didn't mess it up too much then D: yeeey.!
njfngdk

I like neevr eat candy so it's like i eat 5 candy hearst and IM BOUNCING OFF THE WALLSSS ;A; and i still have a whoel box left.... bdgj

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Dieman In reply to ToastSamurai [2011-02-09 16:10:36 +0000 UTC]

Well, smug is more likely, he's not entirely fond of himself so he wouldn't say that he's awesome. But he does look down on people at times.

Clap stuff?

I was actually going to draw Eden, so there you go! It'll be a joke picture, him doing something silly.

That's it, I'm seriously sending you a truckload of candy. VALENTINES DIABETES EVENT

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ToastSamurai In reply to Dieman [2011-02-09 16:35:33 +0000 UTC]

FFF IT'S MY DAMN TYPING. lol. i meant "clamp". like Tsubasa and xxxHolic and all that, where the limbs are like "I'm sitting across the room but i can still poke you".

ah i see i see! I'm kind of getting a better picture of this dude now. THEY ALL SEEM LIKE THEY'RE GONNA BE SO AWESOME TOGETHER!

Omg yey joke pictures all around.

HOLY SHIT MORE CANDY. I'D DIE OF HAPINESS BUT ALSO OF DIABETES, AS YOU SAID. Or of doing something incredibly stupid in my hyped-up state. I ALREAYD STARTED EATING MORE TODAY ;A; I can't help it they're just sitting there on my desk, all open and staring at me.

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Dieman In reply to ToastSamurai [2011-02-09 17:09:45 +0000 UTC]

I figured you meant Clamp, but you can never be sure! Clamp is an animation studio, correct? Like Pierrot or 4 degreesC?

CANDY!!

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ToastSamurai In reply to Dieman [2011-02-09 20:31:39 +0000 UTC]

I think it's something like that.

iirc it's a group of girls who started off as a doujinshi group that ended up making comics (OR SOMETHING.) I guess it's a stupid, i've never actually looked into it xD

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Dieman In reply to ToastSamurai [2011-02-09 20:35:24 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I remember reading that somewhere and was like WUT DOJINSHI GROUP LULL

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