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Published: 2015-07-01 04:04:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 7981; Favourites: 89; Downloads: 0
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OK HERE WE GOI thought I should get this out of my system too. I've also had this in my folder for over a month orz
As for update speed, I'm not completely sure how that'll go yet because it's summer and I have an abundance of time (at least for another month). I'm gonna play it safe and say monthly updates (for main updates like pages), with the best case scenario being every two weeks. But again, I'll have to see how it goes, this is my first time doing anything like this.
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So, that's Zinnia's mother/sister right? Dragon type. Similar shirt design. She is related to Zinnia I'm positive.
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Well that's a possibility ^^
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Looks really cool. I love your style <3
Can't wait for the next update.
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oh very interesting and i can't wait too read more so update soon please.
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this looks really interesting !
i cant wait to see whats coming next
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Color me intrigued!
I've been waiting for some great ORAS 'lockes to come around!
+Watch!
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Whoa, this looks awesome. A floor devouring people and an awesome art?
I want more! ;D
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Whoa this looks awesome! Definitely looking forward to seeing more of this! eue
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She got taken! No wonder the Salamence is so confused, and looks like someone's got a certain mark on them too. Interesting stuff!
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Your art is just gorgeous, you definitely caught my attention!
Also, I love the fact that you've already added not one, but two secret languages just in the prologue! Can't wait to see what else you've planned!
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Thank you!
I originally thought it might've been overkill to have two. Did it anyways.
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Okay you hooked me.
I love the art style, a little question[suggestion maybe?] at times the speech bubbles don't have an arrow pointing towards the person talking, I mean on this page it's safe to presume it the chick talking, but what if it wasn't and it was telepathic messaging and such, I know it most likely isn't that but, I would suggest putting the arrow line to the speaker, or doing the connecty line from it to the other bubbles; that connecty line can even go behind the character!
Sorry I rambled, really lovely page though! Can't wait to see more!
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Good >u>
Yeah, I can see how it can get a bit confusing. It'll be easier now that I figured out a better way to make the speech bubble arrows. And I'll definitely be making it clearer when there's more than one person in the scene! Rambling is fine xv
Thank you for the feedback, I appreciate it!
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This looks really cool and the art is amazing! Looking forward to more~
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Woah what an opening! You have had me hooked on that blob(?) taking that girl. I look forward to seeing more of this nuzlocke!
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Why Not-So-Nuzlocke? Did you put some mercy rules into your run?
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Yup XD I added exceptions to the main two rules. I actually have the ruleset here but I'll be posting it officially too.
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whoa! Great art and a great start for the plot! I'm really curious to see what happens next! +o+
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Hmm. People being dragged into the floor. Seldom a sign of good things to come.
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ovo!!!
This looks great!!!
I am so happy right now <3
I cant wait for more!
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Thanks!!
Aaaaaaaaa I'm happy you're happy XD
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And let me just say, your paneling is amazing!
So much skill uvu
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Well I'm doing a bit of studying (aka skimming a bunch of Marvel comics I've had XD) and looking at other webcomics on the web and that's helped a ton!
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Oh that is really cool!! You must have learned so much from them
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