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tod309 — Manga Holy Bible pg. 2
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This is the second page from my Manga Holy Bible. This page shows the creation of the atmosphere and the creation of the second day. It also shows the creation of land.Little Known Facts:
Some creationists speculate that a canopy of water existed over the earths surface sometime in the past.
Ancient writings in Mesopatamia discribes a "celestial ocean" in the sky.
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I also like that you make God's words in red cause it shows Jesus is God and I will always believe that and I try to show that to people too!
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I feel like panel two should have shades of blue/orange/purple/pink in the sky to show the transition of morning and evening suggested by the word box. Maybe something like this [link] or this [link]
I suggest making the waves less uniform too. Like this [link] I know it's tricky doing water. It's pretty tough rendering water. Instead of uniform "v's" you can see here that it's a lot of criss-crossig diagonals. But this is only ONE example since water takes on so many shapes.
I think the foam in panel 3 is done pretty well but I wish I saw more water drainig off the land in a bigger panel. That had to be a massive occurence!
In the final panel, I suggest darkening the mountains against the sky and fade the shading towards the bottom to make the land look darker and the sky look brighter. It will bump up the contrast and make the image look more catching.
Is that a cumulus storm cloud on the top right of panel 1? Niiiice.
BTW. you are using color pencils, which is my favourite medium. FTW! Keep going, you can only go up from here.
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You're right. The waves do look too uniform. And mountains do need to be a little darker. Glad you mentioned it.
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You're welcome. Keep up the great work
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