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Description It was like seeing the whole universe in one little clearing, a million galaxies woven like Christmas lights and tinsel around a perfect Christmas tree; each luminescent sprite a gaseous Giant, a burning star of one thousand different light frequencies and unimaginable colours. This was all a human’s descriptive capacity could muster of the scene whilst their pupils dilated in wondrous transfixion, as each twirl of an inhuman body, with their twig like limbs and slender jaw lines, and each non chalant flicker of a powdered wing, sent a thrill of electricity through the onlookers’ veins.

Not the pixies of regular stories and not the new pixies of the horror stories that were now becoming fashionable in the human world, these People belonged neither to the tales of traditional folklore, nor to a modern child’s nightmares. These pixies were neither solid nor transparent; they held within them a jagged glimmer, a light that twinkled, unfolded and refolded in consistent randomness. They danced to the vicious pulsing of their dark hearts, and moved in inhuman ways, smothering both their partners and themselves with their magnificent wings; sliding fluidly around their neighbours in exotic, frenzied madness. It was as if they were all really the same being, links in the same twisted chain; one entity of various colours and wavelengths in a spectrum of conflicting light and dark, day and night, good and evil.

Their wings were of splendid varieties and markings, smattered with unusual symbols, personalised designs and unyielding colours, as if liberal artists had come and melded onto these perfect bodies everything in the world that was beautiful and useless. One female looked as though she had doused her body in glue and then run through a burning window, the shattering glass becoming one with her. It now clung to her blood stained form like a death veil, her wings a collage of broken shards, twinkling with her every movement; tears of her flesh lifting slightly in the subtle twilight breeze.

Another pixie appeared as though she had been drowned in some past life: so blue and frail was her skin. Her wings were black and skeletal, and it seemed impossible to the uninvited guests that she should ever fly. But she did. With a sadistic laugh at a fellow, drunken pixie dangling drunkenly from a branch, she spun high into the glittery air and was gone. It was strange and dark how easily they ignored one another’s pain, and when one fell and was crushed under the ritualistic dancing of their people so that their wings bent at ugly angles and their squeals manifested above the drone of accumulating body heat, none of the other pixies made any move to help. The cocktail of drugged laughter, hungry dancing and excessive drinking continued in what Shiza thought to be a slideshow of moral decay.

Her thoughts were interrupted as something thick and wet began lowering itself, sluggishly, down the side of Shiza’s face. The girl gave out a strangled gasp and lifted her hand to inspect. “It’s just brew,” the goblin at her side said without turning to look at her, “If you stand under a night flower, you’re going to get brew on you.”
Aware of the position of ridicule she had found herself in, she hurriedly stepped out from beneath the seeping bud. The glue like substance was now tangled in her hair but her attempts to wipe it away left her looking more dishevelled and feeling more foolish. “Leave it, and don’t eat it,” the goblin snapped, turning to face her this time. Shiza could hear the tone of annoyance in his normally deadpan voice and this made her flush without knowing why.    

The scene before them was simultaneously horrifying and stunning and the four of them stood there transfixed. Only Aiman, the goblin boy, stood looking with relentless disgust until dawn grew wider over the land, and bodies, caked in glitter of many dimensions, began to let out awful squeals and crumble into dust before their dance partners. The sight made Mir scream, Aiman’s hand locking over her mouth in a swift swooping motion. A pixie, who had been lying, dozing provocatively over a large mossy root, which had somehow thrust its way free of the soil, jerked her head towards the direction of the scream. Her eyes shone hideously and turned black with her acknowledgement of the trespassers. She rolled over, her back arching, and out from her spine five bone coloured blades began slicing through her porcelain skin, now sadistically etched with raw red veins. Small fangs appeared inside her tiny red mouth, and ugly yellow claws sprang from her delicately crafted nail beds. She used these now to quickly saw around one of the blades, yanking it viciously from her back with an eruption of flesh that instantly healed, and held it threateningly in front of her in preparation for her attack. Beside her Shiza could feel the disturbance in the air as Aiman strung three arrows into his bow and let fire. A sticky yellow substance that had inked the tips of the arrowheads spattered her as it flew, singing, into the belly of the pixie, who flew backwards from the force. Roaring now, the pixie stripped her body of the arrows. It was as if the arrows had been articles of clothing she had got tired of and had decided to throw away. Her wounds healed quickly. Shiza could see a purple, horrible rage seize up inside the pixie’s eyes as they cast themselves upon their enemy one last time. They gazed with loathing at Aiman’s bow, but not at Aiman, and they smiled mockingly at Mir’s wide open eyes, then they blinked twice as they passed over Shiza but, like with Aiman, they didn’t seem to register her. They lingered longest on Kite’s white, boyish face, and a hungry interest briefly consumed the fiery rage. And then her eyes clouded over, and the Pixie staggered backwards tripping over the large root she had previously lain upon, and then, in a burst of blinding light, she dissolved.

There was no scream from Mir this time. Instead she fainted ungracefully into some nearby moss and decaying night flower before Kite could catch her. Shiza blinked, and turned around to Aiman who stood straight-backed, looking at the spot where the pixie had vanished. “Did…What...Are they all dead?”  She asked, unable to find an appropriate line of questioning other than this.
“No,” The boy replied coldly “…Unfortunately.”
Shiza decided to ignore the snipe, focussing instead on the incredulous nature of what he’d said. “Not dead! But I just saw them burst like party balloons stuffed like Christmas turkeys with too much helium! How they could not be dead?” But Aiman didn’t answer for a long time and so her question hung, like criminal, in the misty dawn. Behind her the sun was finding its place between the fluffy looking clouds and the rosy pinks and watered down oranges could be seen bleeding into the watery blues and purples of the fading night. The atmosphere glowed palely now: the absence of the pixies allowing it to take on a purer state.  All that could be heard, if you had well adapted hearing, was the slow formation of condensation on the forlorn and weary leaves, and the closing of the night flowers.

“That’s how they return,” The goblin answered finally, walking closer towards where the last pixie had exploded into a thousand iridescent particles of light. Crouching, he ran his long fingers across the damp earth.
“Huh?” This time it was Kite that had asked the question. He was kneeling beside Mir and had placed her head on his lap, “She’s a bit worn out by all this…err, excitement,” he said when he saw Shiza gazing at the two of them.
“Yes,” Aiman replied “It’s a sort of teleportation method by human description.”
“Can’t be too comfortable,” Shiza murmured. Aiman turned to her; his face composed, and said, “No. It’s quite painful actually, not that you’d ever know.” He turned from her then and walked off into the forest. He expected them to follow, which, after Kite had heaved Mir onto his shoulders, they did without pause until the sun had reached its highest point in the sky and a steamy haze had begun to rise from the sizzling banks of mud that formed their path. The forest had transformed and taken on a barren quality. The embarrassment on Shiza’s face, however, remained unchanged.
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Comments: 29

RoughShadowDregan [2009-05-22 20:40:41 +0000 UTC]

I liked it!. Though it is a little lengthy, you manipulate words with exceptional skill, and it is very tantalizing. I don't know if you were going for it, but you keep using similies and metaphors pertaining to Christmas, so it leaves a lingering atmosphere of the holiday in the passage.

As a begining, I think it could work with a little alteration, because it does have a feeling of midstory by the last couple paragraphs...

In all honesty, I'm still confused by the pixies. I'm tempted to try and draw a coupld of teh ones you discribed, but their actions and not-deaths don't make much sense to me, but I'm sure some of that would be further explained in more writing.

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toffeetree In reply to RoughShadowDregan [2009-05-22 21:13:42 +0000 UTC]

Thankyee!Yes i agree about the length. I know where i could cut it if i wanted it to be purely a bit of fantasy prose, the question is, ultimately: prose or story? It would be a long story if i was a story - i've pretty much worked it out in my head. i even think i have a prologue lying around somewhere...hopefully figuritively lying around on my desktop, and not on a scrap of paper in my room. i hate transporting script to print, the neck work involved is ridiculous.

well, your in luck! i am completely unemployed at this moment so i can give you the 411 on the pixies.
basically, pixies in this world are ugly decaying things. they basically reflect the seven deadly sins, lust, envy, greed etc. Goblins are actually the "good" guys, if you like. they can't exist in sunlight, they explode and return under ground. exploding is their method of transportation. also, they cant see goblins. some ancient protective spell. Shiza, the protagonist, happens to be part goblin.
Mir and Kite, Shiza's friends, are human but i think there is something about them too. ??? not sure yet. haha

if i find the beginning ill put it in my scraps and you can plough over it whenever your free. it will clarify a few things perhaps...

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RoughShadowDregan In reply to toffeetree [2009-05-22 21:28:38 +0000 UTC]

I know what you mean, but sometimes writing it down on paper is the only way to no lose it... but it still gets lost.

I'm a little confused. Are there four or five members in Shiza's party? Sometimes it felt distinctly like four, but I feel like I've gathered five names that I simply can't remember... Or are there six? Seven? *counts on fingers* Shiza, two human friends, one goblin, one other... Five?

I will probably come back to you on the fairies then. What do they wear?

I will keep an eye out for the begining then, I'm excited to read it!

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toffeetree In reply to RoughShadowDregan [2009-05-22 21:36:29 +0000 UTC]

Hmm. i'm gunna hazard a scientific guess at four...no wait. yeh. just kidding. its four. shiza, kite, aiman, and i think i called her Mir, if i didnt then me refering to her now as mir is probably what confused you. for that i apologise.

skin. thats it. no clothes unless specified, and only then, organic things, occasionally plastic. they're scavangers.

okay! awesome. ill going prologue hunting. if its on my comp. it shouldnt take long. if its in my room. well. you'll still be a DA member a year from now, right?

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RoughShadowDregan In reply to toffeetree [2009-05-23 05:49:07 +0000 UTC]

I have no ida what numbers I got from where, honestly. Four sounds okay.
-I'm going to assume that 'z's are regularly 's's there in the UK, because I keep finding words that look misspelled to me, but it's almost like a rule... (I'm looking at 'apologize' right now, and this/that's how I'd spell it.)

Yeah, okay. I'll have to try and doodle some of your pixies then, they sound like a lot of fun. Now I don't have to worry about folds!!

I should be kicking around here for a while, so I certainly hope so!

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toffeetree In reply to RoughShadowDregan [2009-05-23 06:08:12 +0000 UTC]

haha. nope, no need for folds. thats so cool of you.
what do you think of the name Shiza?...i'm having second thoughts...
umm.oh geez, i don't even rememember. i rely on my word processor for typos and the 's' and 'z' formulations... i do know that i spell grey 'g-r-e-y' and not
g-r-a-y... and c-o-l-o-u-r , that way... lemme try. " i apologise" . yep. i use esses.

though sometimes my word processor is saved on american english instead of british english. so my works are shifty culture-wise.
so if i wrote it with a 'z' thats probably the reason.

yeh.im not up to much. re-wrting the beginign of the clearing cus the one i found sucked balls. i shudder at the memory...

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RoughShadowDregan In reply to toffeetree [2009-05-23 06:23:15 +0000 UTC]

Well, inspiration comes from the nooks and cranies (do you have any idea where that phrase came from? I don't), and usually not from the giant night perfect scuplture posing in the center of teh room. I like to tilt the world a little you could say. I'll let you know when I get them done, then evenutally post them here.

Shiza sounds like a good name. To me, it's: sharp, crisp and bold; something new, perhaps dangerous; sublte and fine. (I feel like a dictionary... Oh well; common these days.)

I honestly don't know how 'grey' is spelled any more... I use 'grey' when it's cold and 'gray' when it's warm... What difference does it make? I don't like 'colour' though personally, it makes me gag when I try to say it. Wierd, rather stupid, I know.

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toffeetree In reply to RoughShadowDregan [2009-05-23 07:35:49 +0000 UTC]

wow. interesting thinking in respect to the word grey. who knew one little word could have such a variety of potential.
nooks and crannies. i have to say no, to that. though it sounds a bit "pinch nosed" english to me.

okay. not to harper but, Shiza or Aliya?

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RoughShadowDregan In reply to toffeetree [2009-05-23 18:31:09 +0000 UTC]

I must laugh at the name 'Aliya' and by the time you finish reading this, you'll understand. It has nothing to do with you. If you did not know, the name "Aliya" means 'accender' in Japanese, I think it was. To me it is a very leathal name, violent and volital, very much because I have a character for an rp I'm doing with ~Ephah who was given at birth the name 'Myrameth' (aka Mimi), was taken into the Guard and 'rewriten' as 'Aliya', then slipped into the bloodlust and became 'Chaos'. She's a nut case, but one of my favorite characters I've ever writen.
So, Shiza sounds more level headed than Aliya, mostly because of the character I created with that name.

(I won't tell you what to name her because she's your character. I will only suggest names and/or tell you what the name means to me.)

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toffeetree In reply to RoughShadowDregan [2009-05-23 20:51:34 +0000 UTC]

woah. she sounds awesome. i think i'll take a peek
no, i didnt no. thanks for the info though, thats really interesting.
normally im quite symbolic, in a lot of the other stuff im working on, which i havent posted cause theyre way too prone to random modification and iv got enough to do anyway, ive spent ages scrolling through name databases stocking up on names with symbolic meanings beind them. so usually i know a lot about names, but with this story i was just looking for something attractive yet not girly...independant.

its funny that aliya should mean that to you.i understand why through your explaination however to me it just sounds pretty haha.
and i came about it because i knew a girl called aliya (american/arab), really pretty and blonde. i never knew it was japanese. thats interesting too. i wonder if the arabic meaning is different?

i actually know someone called shiza. i can't remember but i think it might actually be the shortened form of something else. i'll check with her and see if their's a meaning behind it too.
thanks for the support

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RoughShadowDregan In reply to toffeetree [2009-05-24 01:29:23 +0000 UTC]

As to which ever one you're gonna 'take a peek', Eph's a little ahm....confused you could say, and having computer issues. I've only put one literary thing of Chaos up, and a couple sketches, all of which are in my scraps, if that's what you're trying to look up.

Glad to know I could be of help!!

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toffeetree In reply to RoughShadowDregan [2009-05-24 07:14:36 +0000 UTC]

ah. no, i thought that Ehp was the link to your work. i got a bit confused when i was directed onto his page haha.
so...to the scrap yard! that's what i'll have a peek at.

by the way what are you really working on at the moment? and why arent you posting shit up!?. i'm realy curious about the "top hat" story, it seems dark and slightly, dare i say it, erotic...well, seductive anyhow.

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RoughShadowDregan In reply to toffeetree [2009-05-26 23:56:58 +0000 UTC]

I'm really working on a piece called Rainfall (actually, I just finished it yesterday). Aside from that, I'm trying not to get a varience and to stay where I am. I've been writing up a few character sketches (for the main character in Rainfight, Chaos, Top-Hat fellow and some old phogey who talks to spiders... (just came up with him today as a spur of the moment), and a dragon profile), trying to keep my blogs updated and keep my friend Namanda-chan in atleast mediocre spirits (since her boyfriend just broke up with her, but they got back together two days later). Oh, and keeping house while my mom tries not to kill every one of us while Papa's away.
Just a little busy... I'll get something posted as soon as I can; I'm glad someone's so anxious to see what I'm up to! I'll try and work on When the Impossible HAPPENS for you.

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toffeetree In reply to RoughShadowDregan [2009-05-27 04:56:44 +0000 UTC]

haha. well done for finishing Rainfall!
Yeah hun, i totally want to see your work; but don't drive your self crazy for my sake - holding down the fort is not an easy task, i know.
glad to hear from you again though

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RoughShadowDregan In reply to toffeetree [2009-05-27 07:51:14 +0000 UTC]

I'm flighty. I can not get on for a week and it won't mean anything more than my inbox is full and I found a pretty peice of paper. Don't worry about me until you don't hear from me for more than a week and a half to two weeks. That's when I'm having difficulties geting on.

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toffeetree In reply to RoughShadowDregan [2009-05-27 08:26:27 +0000 UTC]

i'm here to vent to if you need; i know what difficutlies getting on are like.
i like pretty paper. and pens, goddamit pens are awesome; notebooks with clasps...and metalic boxes, and stupid little coloured glass stones.
anything that exudes the feeling of the quaint, or mysterious captivates me; doesn't matter how useless they are, or how unnessesary they are for me to have.

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RoughShadowDregan In reply to toffeetree [2009-05-27 08:39:01 +0000 UTC]

I have a fancy for feathers myself, and I'm prone to picking them up off the ground wherever I find them... Some people freak out about how they're covered with germs and all that crap, but i'm tooy busy studying the filaments or pretending I can fly with my wings of three feathers to usually notice or care.

I'll keep the venting thing in mind, I might just randomly pop up with some rant at no one that you might actually enjoy to read. I've had a couple that people actually liked and they asked me where my inspiration came from.

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toffeetree In reply to RoughShadowDregan [2009-05-27 09:25:31 +0000 UTC]

awesome rant away.
lol. yes, i have some feathers in a draw in my old room. and you reminded me, when you brought up the bit about germs, of when i was a kid and picked up and dead bird to cradle. i was hoping that somehow i could nurse it back to health.
my mum freaked out a bit, but left me to my own devises.
i put it down once i saw the ant load under its wings. it was pretty gross, that.

and randomly, that story has reminded me of sitting in the same spot the bird incident occured with a plate of toast smothered in crunchy peanut butter. one of the pieces had a thicker spread on it and i figured i would save that one 'till last, as you do. it was more special, and i'd have its taste last on my tongue.

but during my consumption of the first slice i knocked the plate off my lap and the "better" slice fell face down onto the floor.
it was my first experience with dramatic irony...

i just thought you might be interested

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RoughShadowDregan In reply to toffeetree [2009-05-27 09:36:37 +0000 UTC]

Sad day... Poor bird, nasty ants, loss of a good piece of paenut-buttered toast... *shaking head* Sad day.
Still, that could make for great inspiration for a character sketch or a short short story.
*suddenly perplexed* What did I write for my short short...? Oh yeah, it was The Talking Game. That one was fun.

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toffeetree In reply to RoughShadowDregan [2009-05-27 10:11:09 +0000 UTC]

lol
you're right. it really could. that thought had briefly penetrated my mind momentarily as i pressed the send button.
and i also thought how chatting with you always makes me think of "sleeping" memories. the ones that are there in your subconscious, they're just waiting for a reason to be brought forward into your awareness.

short story for english?

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RoughShadowDregan In reply to toffeetree [2009-05-27 10:18:17 +0000 UTC]

Well, the sooner they're out here in the open the sooner we have dozens of tales to spark our imaginations.

Creative Writing. It's up here on dA somewhere...

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toffeetree In reply to toffeetree [2009-05-23 07:37:12 +0000 UTC]

haha. and i feel the same about "color" only because i feel it is improper. which is foolish. otherwise it is a good deal more symmetric

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4dreamcastonly [2009-05-22 13:14:48 +0000 UTC]

I have not the mental capacity to finish this, but from what I read, i really love it. good luck with whatever you decide to do with it! ^^

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toffeetree In reply to 4dreamcastonly [2009-05-22 13:28:02 +0000 UTC]

too long?

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4dreamcastonly In reply to toffeetree [2009-05-22 14:22:13 +0000 UTC]

well, don't take offense, It's a struggle for me to read anything longer then 3-5 sentences. took me a whole year to read the second harry potter book.

Maybe it's short?

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toffeetree In reply to 4dreamcastonly [2009-05-22 14:41:26 +0000 UTC]

haha. i'll keep that in mind in my reply
well the second HP was kindof shit in relation to the others.
so don't feel flustered.
however, that makes me feel pretty honoured you attempted reading my work.
no hard feelings (oo. 5 lines. right on the mark!)

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4dreamcastonly In reply to toffeetree [2009-05-23 04:55:45 +0000 UTC]

lol. ^^ indeed!

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toffeetree In reply to 4dreamcastonly [2009-05-23 05:19:59 +0000 UTC]

woahwoahwoah! does this indeed mean you worked up the courage to finish? *fingers crossed*

or does it mean you agree the 2nd HP was a bit rubbish?

lol

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4dreamcastonly In reply to toffeetree [2009-06-15 17:27:30 +0000 UTC]

if I find enough time, maybe both!

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