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Description Just wanted to do something a little more meaningful than my usual deviation

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GeneralHelghast [2014-09-05 23:18:18 +0000 UTC]

Excuse me, but why do you equate individualism with insanity and lonliness? Are you saying that being in a group where you have be the same as them is the only thing they tolerate? You honestly think that this is still high school? Without individualism, creativity and innovation would have never occured and we would still be nomadic, cannibalistic cave people worshipping pagan idols. As for racism, I think its one of the many evils behind collectivism. In collectivism, if you don't do like the rest do or if you think differently from them, then they shun you and brand you "evil" and "oppressor" when its actually the collectivists that are the oppressors.

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EmptyJacket [2011-06-13 01:51:56 +0000 UTC]

Found this online and had a hell of a time tracking down the artist. Why do you include 'insanity' and 'illogical' ?

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tokarnia In reply to EmptyJacket [2011-06-13 18:36:42 +0000 UTC]

Just my way of seeing it. Of course I'm referring to the "individualism" in a way that REALLY deteriorates social relationships. Anyway, that's not thaaat deep, it's really superficial. :]

Online? where?

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pica-ae [2010-04-13 11:37:50 +0000 UTC]

better late than never

i like the idea of the whole design with the i going thru all words
and i think it looks very good, standing alone

the effects on the different words dont look so good tho

i am not a big fan of the dropshadow. and that the red words have no shadow and are more transparent makes them step back a lot. changing the color alreday differs the 2 parts of the text, changing the effect looks a bit odd.

another thing is that "illogial" and "individual" dont fit to the rest of the words. they should be nouns as well. maybe try "illogic" and "i am an individual". that would be better
Also "individual" shoul be of the same text size like the rest of the words... cos the i has a way thicker line was the rest of the word and that makes it very uneven.

well, i hope this could help you bit

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tokarnia In reply to pica-ae [2010-04-13 20:16:07 +0000 UTC]

helped
and a lot

Always nice to get your work reviewed


thanks

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pica-ae In reply to tokarnia [2010-04-14 07:03:43 +0000 UTC]

glad to hear

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Fabrikken [2010-02-13 02:02:38 +0000 UTC]

Nice job, but loose the drop shadow it looks tacky. Maybe have the line going right to the edge of the piece?

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tokarnia In reply to Fabrikken [2010-02-13 02:21:27 +0000 UTC]

Seriosly? I thought drop shadow was so cool
By line u mean the red I? To the edge is like the upper edge or the bottom edge?

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Fabrikken In reply to tokarnia [2010-02-13 14:36:13 +0000 UTC]

It can be if use in the right way and right place, but here it just looks like the default settings.

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tokarnia In reply to Fabrikken [2010-02-13 15:22:41 +0000 UTC]

Ok, thanks for the heads up

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