Comments: 11
BJbear2001 [2008-05-09 10:52:38 +0000 UTC]
I for one, actually appreaciate the blunt, dark lines that cut off the flow of the picture across her front. I think that the blunt lines and box like pattern keeps the focus of the picture around her facial features, braided hair, back, and arms. The effect of doing this is that the chest becomes less important, just as a modest, buxxom girl like Lenaick would treat that feature less importantly because she would be used to living with her features every single day of her life! The gradient in the background does wonderfully for her because my eye is drawn to the lighter color, emphasizing her face again. Wonderful composition in my opinion!
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Steeljaw68 [2008-02-10 10:36:16 +0000 UTC]
She's very cute..
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Chip43 [2007-03-12 17:30:09 +0000 UTC]
nice job, you should color more art
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Kokayi5 [2006-11-13 21:34:49 +0000 UTC]
Your character is good. I like her. But I was thinking. These days it's cliche to have the little school girl look. Why not show her traversing the wilderness as a drifter. Or give her a job description and she a series of picture of her run-ins at work. Just for example...
One other thing, if Lenaick is a lesbian. Then maybe she her on dates with her partner or coming to see her.
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ReeannaSephiroth [2006-11-08 17:50:11 +0000 UTC]
This is cute, her form and drape of cloth. The blunt dress front though and print... I dunno they don't seem to flow right. I stopped looking around her form when I get to that squareish panel that has the buttons. Maybe if it were softer there, it go with the softer print you have going on. It's obivous you like that period of clothing, but I think some curvy designs upon her would lighten this up. The tassels are cute. A little more of that eyelace would be nice.
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Nebelstern [2006-11-07 11:50:47 +0000 UTC]
oh - very beautiful. actually breathtaking. you should color more drawings with photoshop.
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Atariboy2600 [2006-10-23 20:05:16 +0000 UTC]
God I love her face^_^
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Akemi-Rei [2006-10-12 22:33:36 +0000 UTC]
Adorable expression.
I think her hair could use more texture, since the rest of the drawing has so much texture.
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