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TomiChara — K4RK4t.... 1T HURTS [NSFW]
Published: 2011-07-05 05:19:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 764; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 1
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Description Lying beat to a pulp alone in a room isn't fun.

Especially if you're dying.

If you remember anything correctly, you got pretty much tortured by a psychotic clown, and then your friends came to the rescue & went off to deal with him.... leaving you behind...

You arn't quite sure where you are, or how much blood you're loosing. But its not a good amount. You try to get up, atleast to a sitting position, but something horribly wrong. It feels like something is missing off your face. You try to feel out whats wrong. It might be easier to tell if you wern't blind, but in this case, it wouldn't of helped that much.

You were missing an eye. Not the best thing to discover, no? But judging by the circumstances, you think its better that you can't see. You know, with the blood and such... You seem rather calm... in the fact that you are on the border of DEATH. It also feels like you're drugged. ugh.
"TEREZI?"

That voice sounds all too familiar.

"K4R...K4RK4T?"

It was hard to talk without feeling like coughing up blood.

I suddenly felt a grasp on my shoulders, and a familiar scent by my nose. The crabbiest bastard but the one person I want right now.

"ARE YOU ALRIGHT?"

Him coming, finally snapped me out of the daze.... something I wish he hadn't done.

"K-K4RK4-...."

"TEREZI, YOU SENSLESS BITCH DON'T YOU DIE ON ME."

"W3LL 1 DON'T H4V3 MUCH OF 4 CHO1C3 NOW DO 1? 1 C4N'T H3LP IT 4T TH1S POINT."

"BUT THAT DOESN'T MEAN THAT I CAN'T, GOD FUCKING DAMMIT."

He dissapeared for a moment and came back, and immediately wrapped my face with cloth.

"NO MORE PEOPLE WILL DIE, DO YOU UNDERSTAND ME? TOO MANY PEOPLE HAVE DIED BECAUSE OF MY ARROGANT AND IMMATURE SHIT. AND I DON'T THINK I COULD BARE TO STAND THIS BULLSHIT LIFE WITHOUT SOMEONE I HAD THE SLIGHTEST FEELINGS FOR."

"1'M TIRED K4RK4T. 4ND TH1S W4S 4N 3XCUS3 FOR 4 FUCKING L1FE. DON'T YOU UNDERSTAND THAT... 4ND NOW ALL I WANT TO DO IS REST."

"NO, NO NO NO NO FUCK NO. DON'T YOU FUCKING LEAVE US."

At this point, are was gasping for air. It felt like my body just refused it. Deep down I didn't want to die.

"K...K4RK4T 1T HURTS."

At this point, Karkat was pressing me up against him, and it left like I was in a dark cave, and Karkat was the only warm thing. It felt good; besides dying, that is.

"K4RK4T C...C4N 1 G3T SOM3TH1NG..... O-OFF MY CH3ST?"

"LIKE WHAT"

"1 F33L HORR1BL3 FOR K1LL1NG VR1SK4 3V3N THOUGH W3 WOULD H4V3 D13D 1F 1 H4DNT. SH3 M1GHT H4V3 B33N 4N 4RROG4NT B1TCH BUT SH3 W4S ST1LL 4 FR13ND 4ND 1 KNOW 1T SOUNDS STUP1D. SH3 BL1ND3D ME 4ND CR1PPL3D T4VROS."

"PLEASE, FOR FUCKS SAKE, GET THE THE POINT."

"1 W4NT YOU TO PROM1S3 M3 TH4T 1F SH3S SOM3HOW 4L1V3, OR YOU M33T H3R 1N 4 DR34M BUBBLE TH1NG T3LL H3R.... TH4...T 1M SORRY."

The pain was growing intensely. I would be happier if I just died then. Please... just DIE. I was missing an eye, covered in blood, my ribcage cracked, and who knows what condition my legs are in right now.

"AND I WANT YOU TO PROMISE ME, TEREZI, THAT YOU WILL LIVE."

Even though I couldn't see or smell right then, I could tell that he was crying. Did he really care for me that much? Just what was going on in his head?

"YOU KNOW 1 C4NT FULLF1LL TH4T PROM1S3."

"PLEASE...."

"JUST L3T M3 R3ST. YOU ST1LL H4V3 J4CK TO WORRY 4BOUT. 4ND YOU H4V3 TO H3LP TH3 K1DS."

"PLEASE TEREZI. YOU DON'T HAVE TO DIE. YOU CAN'T DIE NOW. NONE OF US HAVE EVER ACCOMPLISHED ANYTHING. OUR LIVES HAVE BEEN POINTLESS, BORING AND DIFFICULT. HOW CAN YOU DIE KNOWING THAT?"

This was it. I was getting to my final moments. I was scared. A part of me wanted to die, but another part wanted to stay here with Karkat. And he was right. I havn't done anything with my life. But it was too late. I was coughing up blood, and there was a hole in my head.

"K4RK4T.... 1 TH1NK TH1S 1S TH3 3ND."

"PLEASE. TEREZI. DON'T GO. PLEASE."

"....DON'T....D-"

It was cold again.
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Comments: 16

pixel9191 [2012-07-24 22:02:49 +0000 UTC]

All the tears.
All of them.

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lillakronis [2011-09-14 09:56:17 +0000 UTC]

WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?!
Also, I love you.

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TomiChara In reply to lillakronis [2011-09-15 00:08:59 +0000 UTC]

augh im SORRYYYYYY
i didnt try to

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lillakronis In reply to TomiChara [2011-09-17 11:06:28 +0000 UTC]

Well you did.
Now there is no going back.

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drag0n0verl0rd [2011-09-11 14:29:50 +0000 UTC]

I shed a tear at the ending.
In fact, several tears.

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Orange-Explosion [2011-09-11 02:29:10 +0000 UTC]

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TomiChara In reply to Orange-Explosion [2011-09-11 02:32:17 +0000 UTC]

Nao ur makin meh cwyyyyy

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Orange-Explosion In reply to TomiChara [2011-09-11 02:37:05 +0000 UTC]

its so sad

but its so good

i just.. i cant

/runsawaysobbing

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TomiChara In reply to Orange-Explosion [2011-09-11 02:38:01 +0000 UTC]

nuuuuuuuuuu
come backkkkk
i have cake!!!!

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Orange-Explosion In reply to TomiChara [2011-09-11 03:46:51 +0000 UTC]

/comesback

/eatscake

:'D

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GhostlyStatic [2011-07-05 17:31:29 +0000 UTC]

brb crying forever

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NeonKia [2011-07-05 15:18:45 +0000 UTC]

I started crying, and I WILL cry if this actually happens. *gestures more tears*

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gummyRhino [2011-07-05 15:03:14 +0000 UTC]

the only error i see is that is changes from 2nd person to 1st person halfway through...
but other than that THIS IS AMAAAZING *u*

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TomiChara In reply to gummyRhino [2011-07-06 01:24:13 +0000 UTC]

I noticed that right when I uploaded it.
I was like "AUGHHHHH"

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Ryuusi [2011-07-05 13:00:07 +0000 UTC]

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I personally think it fits perfectly to this.

But in any way, it was a great story to read, sad, but it was definitely good.

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TomiChara In reply to Ryuusi [2011-07-06 01:23:40 +0000 UTC]

*Reads while listening*....
._.
*cries*

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