HOME | DD

tomoyo696 — artificial

#dark #surrealart #surrealistic #watercolor #watercolorpainting #watercolors #watercolour
Published: 2016-07-04 18:37:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 414; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 0
Redirect to original
Description Watercolor on paper
Related content
Comments: 5

ZiskaJa [2016-07-09 08:18:49 +0000 UTC]

In this painting you chose a very interesting contrast between what in my opinion is a rather creepy subject matter and very light an natural colours.

You have good control of watercolours as a medium. The shading of the hand and the face are very well done. The only minor point there would be, that the lower lip looks a little twisted on the right side.
The colours of the background are very vibrant and I really like how you blended them.

I think the painting looks a little bit, as though you may have photografed it when it was still wet, at least there are a few reflections, that I don't think are part of the original painting.

It's interesting how you chose the darkest place in the painting to place your signature. That's very unusual, I usually look for a light spot, so the signature is actually visible.

All in all this is a very nice painting!

This critique was written for Inspiring Creation.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

tomoyo696 In reply to ZiskaJa [2016-07-09 13:09:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the critique :-D I was painting rather quickly and loosely hence the mistakes in shading and brighter spots the work was dry when I photographed it I usually don't like to place my signature in a way that it is too visible because I don't want it to draw attention away from painting
Ps. Here I used knife to do white reflections on branches

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

kragnarok [2016-07-04 22:21:39 +0000 UTC]

Lovely use of colours and atmosphere. (:

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

tomoyo696 In reply to kragnarok [2016-07-05 04:49:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

kragnarok In reply to tomoyo696 [2016-07-05 10:30:55 +0000 UTC]

(:

👍: 0 ⏩: 0