ZiskaJa [2016-07-09 08:18:49 +0000 UTC]
In this painting you chose a very interesting contrast between what in my opinion is a rather creepy subject matter and very light an natural colours.
You have good control of watercolours as a medium. The shading of the hand and the face are very well done. The only minor point there would be, that the lower lip looks a little twisted on the right side.
The colours of the background are very vibrant and I really like how you blended them.
I think the painting looks a little bit, as though you may have photografed it when it was still wet, at least there are a few reflections, that I don't think are part of the original painting.
It's interesting how you chose the darkest place in the painting to place your signature. That's very unusual, I usually look for a light spot, so the signature is actually visible.
All in all this is a very nice painting!
This critique was written for Inspiring Creation.
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