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Published: 2008-07-15 00:19:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 2947; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 4
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Description Mirage casually flicked off another piece of dust and want back to staring out the window. He didn't care who you were, school was absolutely dull and boring. Today was actually a good day outside, considering the horrible weather they had been having, and Mirage had hoped that his lessons could be held outside.

"Mirage!" He was snapped back to attention when his teacher slammed the data pad down on the table.

"Wha-?" His teacher sighed.

"High society mechs do not say 'Wha-' like some uneducated, low life scoundrel. Further more, we do not ignore a mech when they are talking, that is rude!"

"Bu-"

"Ah ah, I am not done. You cannot slouch even in private, it leads to very bad habits. Now continuing on with you lesson-"

"Right... I was wondering if-"

"Mirage! When someone is talking, we do not interrupt."

"But you just-"

"Very well, what is your question."

"Couldn't we do the lesson outside? It's really nice out and... um...," Mirage faltered under the stern gaze of his teacher, "I'm guessing that's a no...."

"Your guess would be correct. We do not go outside, it is so... ugh words do not describe how utterly repulsive it it."

"It's not 'repulsive'!"

"Yes it most certainly is. No talking back and do not contract your words. Each on needs to be crisp and clean and contracting them will slur your speech."

"But-"

"No more." Mirage flopped against the back of the seat, arms crossed.

"So much for no interrupting." Mirage mumbled .

"Excuse me?"

"Nothing."

"That is what I thought... and do not slouch!"


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"Mirage, please do not flick your energon."

"Sorry." Mirage mumbled; his mother shook her head.

"Finish your meal, are guest will be arriving soon."

"It's Grandfather, why do you act like he's one of your business partners."

"Do not talk back to you mother Mirage."

"It's true." Mirage flipped his utensil, a drop of energon landed with a 'plop' in the middle of the table. "Oops...."

"Mirage!"

"What! It didn't deactivate anyone!"

"That's it!" Mirage flinched as his father slammed his hands down, "You'll go to your room and you're not allowed to come out until our guest arrives!"

"Fine, whatever!" Mirage diliberatly knocked his bowl over, the energon spilling everywhere.

He stormed out the their eating area, surprising the servant bots in the surrounding areas and to his room. Mirage flung the doors to his room, marched over to his bed, and flopped down. He hated this; to many rules, no fun, for Primus sake he couldn't even go outside! Mechs in his own class pushed him down; mechs below him didn't even give him chance. He didn't have friends, he didn't have his own group... to him, he was untitled.


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"Raj... come on 'Raj. You don't want to miss your Grandfather do you?" Mirage slowly flicked on his optics; an aged mech was in the younglings view, a huge smile on his face.

"Grandfather!" Mirage flung his arms around the mech's neck.

"Hey, good ta see ya 'Raj!" the youngling was pulled back, "I hear someone got into trouble."

"Oh, yeah.. um."

"Ha, you're fine 'Raj!" Mirage laughed as his Grandfather playfully tapped on his helm.

"Um.... Sir and young master?" a servant spoke softly, "Your presence is wanted in the entertaining area."

"Oh rubbish!" the servant jumped at the Grandfather's remark, "I'm spending quality time with my grandson. Come Mirage."

"B-but... won't we get in trouble?" Mirage asked as he was pushed past the still stammering servant.

"Primus no! You're with me, I'm sure they'll understand."


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"...You sure this is a lesson?"

"Of course! This is a lesson on how to hold your high grade." Mirage carefully took the cube of the darkest energon he had see. The Grandfather took a giant swig, giving a huge sigh of contentment.

"Come on 'Raj, take a swig."

Mirage eyed the cube, the brought it to his lips. If it was intentional or not, his Grandfather tilted the cube back forcing Mirage to drink more than he wanted. When the cube was empty, Mirage was able to bring it back down; every fiber was tingling making the youngling feel on air.

"Hey bring another round over here!"

"W-wha?"

"This is your lesson 'Raj, you have to sound like a normal mech."

Soon Mirage was slumped over the table. He felt like slag but also like he was flying.

"Come on 'Raj, sit up." The Grandfather attempted to sit the youngling up. Mirage, however, kept going until he fell to the floor, legs still on the stool.

The last thing he remembered was mechs gathered around him, laughing.
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Comments: 94

ShootingStarza [2012-03-26 01:59:11 +0000 UTC]

...
poor Raj

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Yondercat [2008-07-23 17:25:24 +0000 UTC]

ok, so I feel a little guilty as to saying I'm not into this so I came back and started to read. It's actually quite good. I feel sorry for Mirage. Who wants to act so proper and all? spelling is great

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toons-rule In reply to Yondercat [2008-07-23 17:32:13 +0000 UTC]

it's fine, if you don't like my story, that's fine. to each his or her own! XD But I'm glad to hear (or read) that my spelling is getting better.
Yeah, Mirage gets to have no fun! He can't even go outside.

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Yondercat In reply to toons-rule [2008-07-23 17:46:59 +0000 UTC]

I would not like to live like that but I do like it after reading all the chapters.

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toons-rule In reply to Yondercat [2008-07-23 17:56:27 +0000 UTC]

I know it's a bad thing to do, but you are doing a very kind thing... I'm not that kind. XD
Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. XD

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Yondercat In reply to toons-rule [2008-07-23 18:03:28 +0000 UTC]

your welcome ^^ well sometimes I'm not kind but I like trying to help others out

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toons-rule In reply to Yondercat [2008-07-23 18:04:30 +0000 UTC]

XD Kind and modest! XD

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Yondercat In reply to toons-rule [2008-07-23 18:57:29 +0000 UTC]

heh, not all the time. I have my bad days. When I was a teen, I was on this other site where I used to cause trouble but I've learned from my mistakes so I know what most teens are capable are doing. Say if someone steals and they say they wont do it again they will. I've never stolen anything but it's not right anyway. i've had a couple of my stories stolen before. that first time, I almost cried.

i'm sorry, i love to talk

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toons-rule In reply to Yondercat [2008-07-23 19:16:37 +0000 UTC]

Dang! I'm sorry... how do people steal stories?

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Yondercat In reply to toons-rule [2008-07-23 19:22:33 +0000 UTC]

it's real easy on the internet. several ways to do it. all they have to do is select the whole story and copy it and then past it down onto something and make it their own. that's one way. then there's ctrl alt c

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toons-rule In reply to Yondercat [2008-07-23 20:55:05 +0000 UTC]

ok, i'm so keeping an eye on things.

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Yondercat In reply to toons-rule [2008-07-23 21:09:06 +0000 UTC]

yeah. im paranoid about someone putting it on another site. but then again, I;m always paranoid

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toons-rule In reply to Yondercat [2008-07-23 21:55:04 +0000 UTC]

How 'bout this. I'll watch your back and you'll watch mine. XD

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Yondercat In reply to toons-rule [2008-07-23 22:16:48 +0000 UTC]

gladly I'll do.

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toons-rule In reply to Yondercat [2008-07-24 00:40:17 +0000 UTC]

Alright. *gets in defensive mode*

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Yondercat In reply to toons-rule [2008-07-24 14:09:08 +0000 UTC]

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ilovethestinger [2008-07-20 03:35:48 +0000 UTC]

good job ^^

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toons-rule In reply to ilovethestinger [2008-07-20 03:41:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you! XD

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ilovethestinger In reply to toons-rule [2008-07-20 04:02:20 +0000 UTC]

lol welcome ♥ i like it alot update soon pweaz ive gots and idea for a fic......

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toons-rule In reply to ilovethestinger [2008-07-20 15:49:37 +0000 UTC]

oooo! Can't wait! XD

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ilovethestinger In reply to toons-rule [2008-07-21 01:09:17 +0000 UTC]

yep its a armada jetfirexstarscream i hope you like it your the only real person i care about giving me reviews of corse other comments are much appriciated i just kno you better than i kno ne1 else on here other than a choice few

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toons-rule In reply to ilovethestinger [2008-07-21 01:13:00 +0000 UTC]

I haven't watch armada, but I'm sure I'll love it. your stuff is amazing.
XD

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ilovethestinger In reply to toons-rule [2008-07-21 01:19:52 +0000 UTC]

awwwwww thanks so much my good friend ^^ i love yours though you put a lot of thought into it and thats wat i like you dont just write slop you write some kick ass stories ^^

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toons-rule In reply to ilovethestinger [2008-07-21 02:39:41 +0000 UTC]

aw, thank you! XD That really means a lot coming from you.

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ilovethestinger In reply to toons-rule [2008-07-21 04:36:29 +0000 UTC]

well i wouldnt say it if it isnt true and i really mean wat i say.....

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toons-rule In reply to ilovethestinger [2008-07-21 18:32:15 +0000 UTC]

well good! you're a very honest person then. XD GO YOU! XD

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ilovethestinger In reply to toons-rule [2008-07-21 23:09:14 +0000 UTC]

well if your not honest then nobodys gonna believe you ya kno????

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toons-rule In reply to ilovethestinger [2008-07-21 23:24:47 +0000 UTC]

exsactly! XD ...hope I said that right.

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ilovethestinger In reply to toons-rule [2008-07-21 23:54:36 +0000 UTC]

yea i get wat you mean lol ^^

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toons-rule In reply to ilovethestinger [2008-07-22 00:03:39 +0000 UTC]

ok, good. really didn't want to confuse you.

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ilovethestinger In reply to toons-rule [2008-07-22 00:34:44 +0000 UTC]

lol you dont kno wat confusion is until you start talkin to me or try to figure out wats going on in my head...

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toons-rule In reply to ilovethestinger [2008-07-22 00:53:17 +0000 UTC]

...to true. XD

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ilovethestinger In reply to toons-rule [2008-07-22 17:48:49 +0000 UTC]

hey!! lololololololololol you kno me to well ^^

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toons-rule In reply to ilovethestinger [2008-07-22 21:18:53 +0000 UTC]

Of course, I've been talking to you for a veeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyy long time. XD

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ilovethestinger In reply to toons-rule [2008-07-22 21:51:09 +0000 UTC]

yes you have lol gosh i cant even remember wen we started talking you have become my best friend ^^

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toons-rule In reply to ilovethestinger [2008-07-22 22:32:58 +0000 UTC]

*blushes* Awwww, you. XD you're my best friend too.

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ilovethestinger In reply to toons-rule [2008-07-23 17:54:45 +0000 UTC]

lol awwwww that means alot, really it does..... ^^ ♥

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toons-rule In reply to ilovethestinger [2008-07-23 18:03:05 +0000 UTC]

*jumps* yay! XD

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ilovethestinger In reply to toons-rule [2008-07-23 18:10:14 +0000 UTC]

heehee so were do you live like wat state???? i live in west virginia...

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toons-rule In reply to ilovethestinger [2008-07-23 18:12:10 +0000 UTC]

Illinois... the cornfield state. bleh. XD

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ilovethestinger In reply to toons-rule [2008-07-24 01:31:11 +0000 UTC]

couldnt b any worse then here XP

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toons-rule In reply to ilovethestinger [2008-07-24 12:57:27 +0000 UTC]

what do you have?

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ilovethestinger In reply to toons-rule [2008-07-24 18:24:16 +0000 UTC]

wat do you mean??

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toons-rule In reply to ilovethestinger [2008-07-24 19:20:33 +0000 UTC]

...I'm thinking this is where we were talking about where we live. I told you about Illinois, and you live in West Virgina. what there?

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ilovethestinger In reply to toons-rule [2008-07-24 20:14:13 +0000 UTC]

i live in charelston ke the capitol city....... nothing is here its just a big srzville just a buch of trees..... and rocks.....and squwerls that r afer my friend erin......

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toons-rule In reply to ilovethestinger [2008-07-24 21:52:22 +0000 UTC]

Awww, they like erin. XD

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ilovethestinger In reply to toons-rule [2008-07-25 01:44:51 +0000 UTC]

lol yea thats why theyre trying to kill her lol

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toons-rule In reply to ilovethestinger [2008-07-25 01:55:38 +0000 UTC]

exsactly! XD

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ilovethestinger In reply to toons-rule [2008-07-25 02:09:25 +0000 UTC]

is this about the squrils??? lol man the really follow her i swear lol

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toons-rule In reply to ilovethestinger [2008-07-25 02:10:58 +0000 UTC]

Yep... it's all about the squirls. XD

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