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Published: 2010-05-21 01:03:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 1375; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 0
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Question for you guys: Am I improving in my art? (I'm still working on it, but I think I'm getting better.)Proportions are still my bane.
But I'm working on them, and hopefully they're better then they were before. I've been checking out a lot of art tutorials and practicing, and I shall continue to practice!Sincerely,
Toppsy'
PS. Glowing edges are fun to draw. X3
Audrey/Ira (c) ToppsyTurvy of DeviantArt
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Awesome! I quite love it!
**((And as for the advice for improvement, I agree with Rea. x3))** But I'm seriously in love with how this looks. :]
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Thanks so much! TT3TT *glomp*
I've been working hard, and am HOPEFULLY improving xD But I still REALLY need to work on proportions. O_O They are the bain of my existence... that, and feet. Feet are evil.
But thanks so much! :33333
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You're very welcome! *is glomped*
Good good, bwhahahahhaha. Feet can be mighty evil, but a very good friend of mine kinda shoved me into a bat into liking feet...So thus, you must like the problem area in order to fix it!
That's how came to see it as!!
KEEP WORKING HARD N YOU'LL GET THERE.
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Aye aye, caption!
I shall try my best! *epic fist pump*
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Looks good. You're actually one of the few people in this Group who can draw a properly proportioned body, which is apparently more rare than I'd thought.
For the drawing itself, its very good. The first thing I can notice wrong is the shading is a little off [the hair visible behind her head should be much darker than the rest] and you seem to have had a little trouble designating a light source. Then, she also looks a little off balance, like she's about to fall over [that is unless she's leaning against a wall or something, but since there's no background, I can't tell].
Other than that, I guess you could just work on developing the character itself more, fleshing her out, that kind of thing. I hope this helps.
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Thanks. 
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Looks good. You're actually one of the few people in this Group who can draw a properly proportioned body, which is apparently more rare than I'd thought.
For the drawing itself, its very good. The first thing I can notice wrong is the shading is a little off [the hair visible behind her head should be much darker than the rest] and you seem to have had a little trouble designating a light source. Then, she also looks a little off balance, like she's about to fall over [that is unless she's leaning against a wall or something, but since there's no background, I can't tell].
Other than that, I guess you could just work on developing the character itself more, fleshing her out, that kind of thing. I hope this helps.
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Many thanks! ^_^ Do you have any suggestions on how I can improve?
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nope! since i'm not very artistic myself i don't think anything i offer you would help
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Super awesome hair! The rest of the coloring is nice too... I would call this your best so far, and I think it looks better colored than in pencil.
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Thank youuu! ^_^ <3 What do you think I should work on? (I think the proportions are kinda wacky)
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I wouldn't worry so much about the body and proportions but work more on your face's.
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^_^ Do you have any suggestions on how I can improve?
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No i don't you are far better than me so i don't know what to say lol... like your charas design tho
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your art is definitely getting better! it's really good! but if I may- I have a few suggestions if you would like to hear them.
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Many thanks, and I would really like to hear your suggestions so I can improve. ^_^
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mmkay! first off- the shoulders are a tad wide. Girls tend to have smaller shoulders (and they usually slope, but in this case that's not very relevant). Secondly- the area where the forearms slope into the wrists is a tad wonky. The arm gets thinner, but it doesn't necessarily curve that way. Lastly- hips on females are curvy, but they don't exactly jut out like that, the human body is full of both gradual curves and extreme curves, but in this case, the hips are an area of gradual curves. Remember, girls are soft, their body is soft, and their curves are soft.
THAT'S ALL I HAVE TO SAY. I know it was long, but it's all for the sake of improvement right? xD but despite everything I have to say, this is REALLY good. Trust me, it's a lot better than some of my friends' art.
So keep up the good work, and remember, you can only improve
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Thank you so much for the help!! 
And thanks. ^_^
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Thanks! ^_^ Do you have any suggestions on what I can do to improve?
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Nah!
Not really.
I think you doin awesome.
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Thanks so much! Do you have any suggestions on what I can work on?
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Welcome! The pose is a little off. o.o
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Yeah, I tried to stand like her later and fell on my butt! xD
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XD Awww! lol Well, it's ok. You've improved alot! <3
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I think the overall proportions on this look fine. :] The only issue I see is the weight distribution. With both her feet under her like that (or how it appears to be) I don't think she'd be able to lean back that far.
Your coloring is very good, though. :3 ....and also, just a question. Was your line-art originally pencil? I really like how it looks.
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Okay dokay. Yeah, distribution is another thing I'm trying to work on. (Just now, I tried to stand like Audrey, and fell. xD)
Many thanks ^_^, yup the line-art was and a little-bit of shading was in pencil.
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