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Tora-Howes — Dandelion Pants 'micro story'
Published: 2010-09-12 03:32:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 395; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description The dandelion buds clung to my rough pants, having threaded their way through the cracks in the grey brick. It was a refreshing change - the sun flared off the grey concrete, turning the surface reflective like a melancholy field of snow.

I could feel the grass reach my fingertips; a touch and a smell that was so far from my daily expectations it seemed almost alien. The hot Arizonian sun buzzed around me, pulsing through the air like a heartbeat, slowly beating and warming my shrivelled and broken soul...

"Get back to work!" the voice bellowed behind me, forcing me to open my eyes and lose that small sense of peace that I had gained.


I brushed the dandelions from my pants and turned back mournfully toward the prison gates.
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Comments: 32

kaila-elisabeth [2010-09-12 04:21:43 +0000 UTC]

I like this, it's awesome!
For me pressure is just irritating so I would not have been inspired at all if we did that in our class.

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Tora-Howes In reply to kaila-elisabeth [2010-09-12 04:45:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much!
I've learnt to work under pressure... adapting is lame but if I want to get through exams, it needs to be done!

Ahh don't worry... English is gonna come back and you're going to be first

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kaila-elisabeth In reply to Tora-Howes [2010-09-12 08:26:05 +0000 UTC]

HAHAHAHAHA first... definitely not.

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Tora-Howes In reply to kaila-elisabeth [2010-09-12 08:30:26 +0000 UTC]

Why not? It's utterly achievable with some of the dipshits in our year group

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kaila-elisabeth In reply to Tora-Howes [2010-09-12 08:45:40 +0000 UTC]

Yeah it's true, but I couldn't beat you.
Maybe I'll get two... haha no that's too optimistic LOL
(and it rhymed WAY too much)

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Tora-Howes In reply to kaila-elisabeth [2010-09-12 08:59:36 +0000 UTC]

Are you joking.
That's the most stupidest thing I've heard in the history of forever.

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kaila-elisabeth In reply to Tora-Howes [2010-09-12 10:22:31 +0000 UTC]

Or the most rational.

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Tora-Howes In reply to kaila-elisabeth [2010-09-12 10:26:15 +0000 UTC]

Nahh. Nahh braah nahh.
You got it all wrong.

See, you'll get ranked first. Yeah brahh.

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kaila-elisabeth In reply to Tora-Howes [2010-09-12 10:29:26 +0000 UTC]

CAAAAAARRRRRLLLLL. No.

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Tora-Howes In reply to kaila-elisabeth [2010-09-12 10:34:00 +0000 UTC]

CAAARRRRRRLLLL says:
"Oh Laddergoat, you so random!"
"NEVER GONNA GIVE YOU UP, CHAAAARRRRRRLLLLIEEEE"

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kaila-elisabeth In reply to Tora-Howes [2010-09-12 10:38:30 +0000 UTC]

Heck yeah.

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shenry67 [2010-09-12 03:43:24 +0000 UTC]

WoW! Love it, great job

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Tora-Howes In reply to shenry67 [2010-09-12 03:45:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!

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shenry67 In reply to Tora-Howes [2010-09-12 03:48:30 +0000 UTC]

Very well thought out and great presentation. It was like the opening scene of a great novel!

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Tora-Howes In reply to shenry67 [2010-09-12 03:49:40 +0000 UTC]

Really?!
Wow... I honestly didn't think it was that awesome - my dA account was going dry haha

But thanks so much!

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shenry67 In reply to Tora-Howes [2010-09-12 03:54:19 +0000 UTC]

spread some vegemitey on it and everything will be fine whats that stuff taste like any way?

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Tora-Howes In reply to shenry67 [2010-09-12 03:59:02 +0000 UTC]

Horrible. Horrible, horrible stuff.
Marmite is so much better!

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shenry67 In reply to Tora-Howes [2010-09-12 04:01:49 +0000 UTC]

Marmite? Isnt that like a big rat too? lol

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Tora-Howes In reply to shenry67 [2010-09-12 04:03:31 +0000 UTC]

HAHA no!
It's a British spread that's on the same level as vegemite... just tastier!

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shenry67 In reply to Tora-Howes [2010-09-12 04:05:53 +0000 UTC]

Watch out for those Brits, i've heard they are a cheeky bunch

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Tora-Howes In reply to shenry67 [2010-09-12 04:09:31 +0000 UTC]

Dayum straight!
We wear top hats and have the most awesome fashion sense ever.

And we own Sean Connery. BE JEALOUS.

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shenry67 In reply to Tora-Howes [2010-09-12 04:13:15 +0000 UTC]

lmao! Tops are cool, but Sean Connairy? He doesn't even spell his first name right. And that fake accent of his,,please!

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Tora-Howes In reply to shenry67 [2010-09-12 04:19:23 +0000 UTC]

EXCUUUUSE ME?!
Sean is the proper way.
Brits FTW.

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shenry67 In reply to Tora-Howes [2010-09-12 04:22:39 +0000 UTC]

Ya and you got Def leopard, the Beatles, Stones, etc... all we got is flap jacks and beef jerkey.

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Tora-Howes In reply to shenry67 [2010-09-12 04:45:54 +0000 UTC]

Sorry man...
You invented Pop Tarts!

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shenry67 In reply to Tora-Howes [2010-09-12 04:53:05 +0000 UTC]

Hey now,, we also have Corvettes, Mustangs, and Harley!

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Tora-Howes In reply to shenry67 [2010-09-12 04:58:36 +0000 UTC]

Yes but we have Austins, BMWs, Bentleys, Jaguars and Aston Martins.
OWNED.

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shenry67 In reply to Tora-Howes [2010-09-12 05:02:44 +0000 UTC]

lol,,
lets face it, two pretty cool places, and you have that cool accent!

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Tora-Howes In reply to shenry67 [2010-09-12 05:03:30 +0000 UTC]

Very cool places!
So do you!

I don't have the cockney accent though... just the plain ol' English

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shenry67 In reply to Tora-Howes [2010-09-12 05:06:48 +0000 UTC]

i gotta hit the hay, so i can run off and shoot some photos in the morning,,, Thank you for fun tonight.

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Tora-Howes In reply to shenry67 [2010-09-12 05:09:15 +0000 UTC]

No problem, HAY
Ooh photos... I want to see!

No problem... thanks for making my study that less boring!

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shenry67 In reply to Tora-Howes [2010-09-12 05:10:47 +0000 UTC]

Smashing good time, goodnight.

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