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Published: 2005-10-02 05:45:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 106; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Just practicing drawing anime in flash, took about 10-20 mins to draw, and i was surprisingly patiant with it to.I didn't get pissed off at it that much at all, and didn't spend to much time redrawing stuff so thats good.
Things Wrong with it:
- The eye is too big
- the nose is too big
- face lacks detail
But other than that i kinda pleased with it, i guess.
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Comments: 2
The face detail has all to do with what kind of character you want for this instance.
The nose isn't that big, it is only a little out of proportion.
The eye, yes for this particular character, is too big. This guy, to me, seems like an angry type of person, so the angle on the brow is good, but make the eye sleek but not too much so he has little slits for eyes.
And unless the scene calls for it - you do not need a lot of detail on the face. Trust me it will tire you out if you put a lot of detail in every picture. In some anime and manga the artist will deliberately leave some detail on the face out. This adds to the scene in many ways.
(In Summary: It doesn't matter if it does lack detail.)
I like this picture, and it's good that you are pleased with your work. Keep at it, I await the next one with
eager anticipation.
P.S. what did you think of my classical critique? did I sound posh enough?
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ur critique was good, helpfull. This is what most ppl should say about my work this is what i want to hear, what need improvement and/or changing to improve my work. Thank Breaden.
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