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Published: 2014-04-23 04:28:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 725; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 0
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Description lol. I've never done a pixel chibi. I hope it turned out okay. Just something I decided to do to pass the time while I was eating dinner. Now if I can just figure out how to use it . . .

Tell me what you think!

inspiration: The Island-Parade of Lights

critique was added for lulz.
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Comments: 32

Saevaa [2014-04-23 04:48:36 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Very original
//slow clap
no but okay-- the technique you used is incredible. Honestly I had no idea you were this good at pixelating and such. It looks detailed-- and yet sorta simple. I love this style a lot. Have you considered ever doing icons or anything??? You could make moolaaah
Ah and the shirt.. //cries how do you even do that?
Impact-- a four because as I said-- its very detailed. The way you drew/ pixeled it was very unique from what I've seen.

Although it's really good-- I feel like the pose is very awkward. I dont know but the arm just looks a bit stiff-- as though he should be carrying something not simply waving or putting it up there.
And the legs.. hm.. the left knee looks a lot lower and yet they're somehow both to level?? The right side of this kinda throws me off but I can't explain how.

Overall, I would give you an 8 or 9 because you did such a splendid job.
Sorry for my shitty critique but im not up for putting a ton of detail into this
how funny would it be to critique a critique
dont get ideas.
//rolls away

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Tori001 In reply to Saevaa [2014-04-25 01:21:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I didn't know I was good at pixeling either. maybe I should do it more often. Anyway, I can fix the knees, but the rest I'm not sure what to do with so I'll just leave it. Thanks again.

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Saevaa In reply to Tori001 [2014-04-25 01:30:59 +0000 UTC]

no problemo my dunka delic 

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Saevaa In reply to Saevaa [2014-04-25 01:21:40 +0000 UTC]

2 out of 3 thought it was fair?
 ahaaa 
plz 

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SethTree [2014-06-18 01:01:18 +0000 UTC]

I keep expecting him to move lol

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Tori001 In reply to SethTree [2014-06-18 18:44:32 +0000 UTC]

dang, I know I should have animated him.

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DekaTechXtreme [2014-05-10 02:38:11 +0000 UTC]

Sup!

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RedW0lf777sg [2014-04-29 21:09:42 +0000 UTC]

Hello, dear! It's your friend RedW0lf777sg here. And it's been awhile since we last talk to one another, so first off. I really like your drawing did here, it looks quite nice. Great work as always. =3

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Tori001 In reply to RedW0lf777sg [2014-05-23 03:41:28 +0000 UTC]

aw, thank you very much! sorry for the late reply. how you been?

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RedW0lf777sg In reply to Tori001 [2014-05-23 17:28:10 +0000 UTC]

No worries, dear. I know that you're busy with your college life and what not. And I'm doing fine, dear....but I'm not going to lie, I've haven't been drawing lately through. 

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Tori001 In reply to RedW0lf777sg [2014-05-24 05:59:24 +0000 UTC]

Lol, I'm in high school. also, why haven't you been drawing much?

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RedW0lf777sg In reply to Tori001 [2014-05-24 17:10:39 +0000 UTC]

Huh? I thought you said you when in college?

   And I really don't know why I'm not drawing lately....maybe it's either a artist block or a I lack motivation or something.    Point is I just don't feel really motivated to work on any major drawings, except for the occasional doodle here and there. And it's been like this for at least two or so months now. I'm getting the ideas in my head.....but I'm not putting them on the paper and I have so many drawing projects and client requests on hold right now. 

 AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!    It's so damn depressing and frustrating!    damn it!, Damn It!, DAMN IT!


   ...............I'm such failure.........maybe I should quit drawing.

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Tori001 In reply to RedW0lf777sg [2014-05-24 21:25:34 +0000 UTC]

NOOOOOOO!!!! DON'T QUIT DRAWING!!! You're a wonderful artist and it would break my heart if you stopped drawing! You're just gong through some bad artist's block. I'm a writer and one time I had writer's block for an entire year, but I still came back to it eventually and I'm a better writer than I ever was before. You can't give up just because of something like this. It's just a bump in the road. 

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RedW0lf777sg In reply to Tori001 [2014-05-26 03:05:13 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm...Alright then, I won't quit drawing, But how do you deal with your artist's block? 

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Tori001 In reply to RedW0lf777sg [2014-05-30 06:27:22 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, I just kind of sit it out and don't forc the issue. I try and focus on other activities I like such as writing or running.

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RedW0lf777sg In reply to Tori001 [2014-06-01 15:43:59 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...I see, I see...is that all?

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Tori001 In reply to RedW0lf777sg [2014-06-06 19:10:56 +0000 UTC]

Well, there's not much else you can really do. Just hang in there!

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RedW0lf777sg In reply to Tori001 [2014-06-20 19:54:00 +0000 UTC]

(sorry for the very late reply) Alright then, Thank you very much, dear. You're a very good friend and great artist to me on dA.

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Tori001 In reply to RedW0lf777sg [2014-06-21 23:17:17 +0000 UTC]

aww, I try

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KimandAbbysaccount [2014-04-27 20:56:53 +0000 UTC]

hey  

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Tori001 In reply to KimandAbbysaccount [2014-04-28 00:12:46 +0000 UTC]

hi?

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Saevaa [2014-04-25 02:05:06 +0000 UTC]

join.me/527-103-577

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sailormilkshake [2014-04-23 19:51:58 +0000 UTC]

aww kawaii >_< everythings so kawaii >:U~!

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Tori001 In reply to sailormilkshake [2014-04-25 01:54:06 +0000 UTC]

aww, thanks!

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E-lemental-Wolves [2014-04-23 04:57:00 +0000 UTC]

*that is Tori... not is Tori... ._. Phone trying to mess me up yet again

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E-lemental-Wolves [2014-04-23 04:56:24 +0000 UTC]

omg he's not saying "f*ck off" what did you give him to make him not flip the camera off? //shot

But srsly he looks so cute!! That shota, pigeon-toed, derp-hair awesomeness is Tori shall live on forever

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Tori001 In reply to E-lemental-Wolves [2014-04-25 01:54:48 +0000 UTC]

lol!! thanks. I don't know. I'll probably make him say something else. 

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E-lemental-Wolves In reply to Tori001 [2014-04-25 01:56:12 +0000 UTC]

pfft it'd better be clean or else I'll have Kira slap him XD

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Tori001 In reply to E-lemental-Wolves [2014-04-25 02:15:47 +0000 UTC]

hahaha! well, it'd better be clean or else my dad would slap me.

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E-lemental-Wolves In reply to Tori001 [2014-04-25 02:35:29 +0000 UTC]

yeah.... 0_0 yeah he probably would...

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Saevaa [2014-04-23 04:44:04 +0000 UTC]

Wow -- this is really cute!!! 

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Tori001 In reply to Saevaa [2014-04-25 01:55:16 +0000 UTC]

thanks :3

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