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Toriichi3 — OC - Miyu
#oc #blueeyes #green #greenhair #nurse #originalcharacter
Published: 2018-09-21 23:04:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 460; Favourites: 40; Downloads: 0
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This is my OC Miyu! She just started out as a nurse and she's determined to do her best!Related content
Comments: 18
I really like the style here, and your color palette. Deep green gives this character some personality.
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You’re welcome. I found it striking.
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Hello! I found your wonderful art through ProjectComment . I hope my comment isn't offensive, I am only making suggestions because your art is already amazing!! I really like your OC. I feel that her eye and hair colors go well together! Her hair is so detailed! It looks beautiful! I love the light effects and shading! It looks as if it came from a professionally done anime! I would suggest adding more detail to her face and clothes, like you did to her hair. It would give Miyu a more 3D and detailed appearance. I also would suggest changing the 'floating part' and blending it into the background, or doing something like www.pixiv.net/member_illust.ph… It would give a more 3D appearance and also make your art look more complex and focus on the important subject. As a viewer, I feel that a slightly different shade of green for the background would be beneficial. Since the background is very similar to the hair, it could be confusing to the audience. Her eyes, are just amazing and I don't feel that anything needs to be changed. I really like how the blue pops out. Maybe, instead of light pastel clothes, Miyu could wear darker clothes so her blue eyes could pop out more? Over all, your OC looks really good! I really like your art style! Keep drawing! I hope you might consider some of my suggestions, although your OC already looks awesome! Good job!!
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You had me a bit worried there! Don't worry, your comment isn't offensive at all! I'm still fairly new to digital drawing, so I still have a long ways to go. I'm really weak with doing backgrounds, so I'll be sure to work on that, thanks! I also tried checking out that link, but it won't work for me 
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Really, you are new to digital!!?? I couldn't tell at all! Your digital art looks like the ability of someone who is pretty familiar with digital! Good job!! Your welcome! I hope my advice helped!! Have a nice day!!
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Hello c: ! I am from www.deviantart.com/projectcomm… and well I found your art in the gallery while trying to find a good artwork that I could comment on and I found yours! Im going to start with the things I like: The character goes well with the background ( you chose a good background that fits well with the character’s colors.), you did a very good job with the hair. You put alot of details in them and I like it really much. The head is well drawn and the shadow are really nice and I love the colors of the character’s clothes and seems really confident. You also did a really nice job in drawin the eyes, I love the details and effort you put in them. Now for the things you should work on: I think you shouldn’t let her float like that, try finishing the body it would look better in my opinion. Also, you should work on the lines, some are not really straight but it doesnt really make your character look bad, its just something I think you should just work on it.Your oc is really original and I like her alot, you should write maybe her story on why she became and doctor and write details about her life. ( For example her age her full name the name of her pet if she has one etc...). Finally, I really like your oc and the way you drew her, there are just really little things you should work on. I hope this comment can help you in your future artworks! c:
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Hello and thanks a bunch for the thoughful comment! Yeahh, I really need to work on my lineart. I only really started practicing more recently, so hopefully I'll get better at it soon ;u;. And truthfully I'm a bit shy about adding backstory, but I think I'll add it in sometime if you think it would enhance the picture!
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No problem c:!
You don’t have to be shy about adding backstory I’m sure it would help other people to understand more things about your character!!
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Hey you did a really job with this one! I like that you use the shaped of the colors to make the hair! It's not very common and it looks nice. The lose strands of hair are a good touch. Also the lines that you do have here are clean and neat.
And the color palette is easy on the eyes. A lot of people tend to choose crazy, flashy colors that don't go together. But you've done a good job choosing colorful, yet calm colors.
The only thing that kinda bothers me is that the forehead looks too small in my opinion. But otherwise, you did a good job.
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Thank you for taking the time to comment! I meant to make her bangs cover a lot of her forehead, but I guess I made her forehead too small x: whoops! Also, thank you for your kind words! I wanted to stick to calmer colors, since this particular character is a pretty mellow person. Glad it came across well!
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She's cute! I like how you did the shadows, they seem real. I think you have could have tried different type of colors in the hair and clothes like you did with the eyes, because they would stand out when you look at her like the eyes did.
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Thank you! I'll be sure to try that out in my future works! I was thinking I should add more detail to the hair, but truthfully I'm not sure how to go about doing it. Ah well, practice makes perfect!
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