Comments: 9
DeborahDay [2017-08-12 03:12:11 +0000 UTC]
Hi I'm from
I like the cuteness and understand you going for that chibi style, but be carefull because even chibis have to uphold anatomy rules. Use references and maybe do some anatomy studies (I know it's hard and boring work, atleast I think so haha but it really helps with all artforms, from realisme to cartoon and chibi-style)
I do want to say that the fella looks to much like batman. Also, I was wondering about something, because in your description she has long golden hair. But in your drawing it's black so maybe I'm missing part of the story and her alter ego has black hair?
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Spider-Bat700 [2017-08-12 00:13:17 +0000 UTC]
So, this is a pic with a Nazi super soldier and an archer superhero? Hmmm....
...I hate Nazis. That out of the way, the Valkyrie looks almost identical to Sif of Marvel Comics fame (same color scheme, same appearance, same headgear, everything). Not a bad thing necessarily, as I like Sif, but if she's actually a Nazi Super-Soldier, that makes me decidedly disinclined to like her unless I am missing something. It says she "believed absolutely in the cause", which to me sounds like a villain rather than anyone I want to root for.
The other chap looks strikingly similar to Batman, but with a bow and arrow, almost as if Batman were going at it more Oliver Queen's way...or if Oliver Queen decided to become Batman (which he basically is in Seasons 2 and 3 of Arrow XD).
It's a cute picture with some nice if not also derivative character designs. My superheroes and villains are based off of pre-existing characters too though, so it's not a big deal. I like the chibi art style, which lends itself to cute, cuddly, and funny very well. Nazis don't though.
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HeardDdragon [2017-08-11 21:43:22 +0000 UTC]
Aww cute
i like the story.
well done
but my I do have some problems with it which include the lady
her hair and cape which look Stiff
and the bow for that the guy
thay tend to be a bit longer
bows are hard to draw some that's understandable
Its nicely colored and well rounded
an amazing job over all.
thanks for sharing
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JamieSenshi [2017-08-11 00:02:24 +0000 UTC]
That is adorable
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kmkibble75 [2017-08-10 23:22:49 +0000 UTC]
Hello! I’m here from ProjectComment.
First, let me say that if an adorable set up was your goal, then you definitely achieved that. This is very cute, and I think you nailed their respective expressions with the barest minimum of line work. That’s really well done, in my opinion. Their positioning and proportions work for me (I’ll admit to not being especially familiar with the accepted rules of Chibi, though) because everything looks like it’s consistent in this picture and nothing is in such a position that I’d wonder about their joints or bone structure – it looks believable, in other words.
My only critique, really, would be the stiffness of Valkyrie’s hair and cloak. They both drew me out of the picture a bit. If they followed the lines of her body more, I think it’d add a softness to the picture as a whole, and it’d fit in much more with Stryx’s cape and the way it hangs around him. It’d also help elimate what is a very solid, attention-grabbing solid emptiness between V’s legs and cape, where it all forms a perfectly solid triangle of emptiness. I think this piece needs to have *something* there, and having her long cape pool behind her might be the way to avoid that.
That’s all I have for now. If there's anything I missed that you were hoping to get a comment on, let me know and I'll swing by again.
Kevin
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ToriTheSpiderKnight In reply to kmkibble75 [2017-08-12 13:23:10 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the really helpful comment! I'll take another look at those sections. It always helps to have another pair of eyes!
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