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tornadot — Demon Riku-sketch
Published: 2005-06-06 21:53:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 88; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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I tried to imitate the quality of the last sketch...and not so much. I realize her costume needs heavy editing and I will fix that pronto...o_OThis is Riku's evil form...again. Nothing else has changed so move right along...
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The pose is quite dynamic, it's a good improvement so your defenitely on the right track.
Keep up the good work.
You could maybe draw rounded shapes lightly first to form a body and you can edit the pose from there before you draw the first outline. Just a thought.
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Thanks for the suggestion. I'll have to give that a try.
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This is really great! Your showing hugh improvment! I think you really needed to pose your characters more often,I think thats giving them alot of form! Look for lots of poses or get a "Manga Man" or wooden doll thats on a stand to help. But best thing to do is look at a picture with areally cool pose you like and copy it,do your own costume but copy the body and details and it'll help you "feel" and learn the fine details. But keep it up,your doing great!
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Yeah I often use the same darn pose for my characters and yeah I have some ideas I can use as references...so hopefully I can fix that...
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I like it that you did a pose other than simply standing... an action pose.... nice! For the most part, the hand is okay, just try to tighten the grip, 'cause it looks like she just has her hand on it. Do that by showing more knuckle and less finger. Her shoulders are a little broad for a girl, but I think its okay for now... since you're tryiing out a new style, get it in your fingers. =3 The wing also, needs a piece of flesh on top for the membrane to stretch over. Basically, a bony piece and then the rubbery piece where the wings come from. Hm... and also, if you were to finish the wing (basically take Riku out and just draw the wing) its too fat and then slims down too much. Other than that, great job... kay? Keep it up!
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Yeah I noticed her shoulders were a little broad so I must fix that...hmm yeah I guess the wing needs work too, so I'll try to fix those errors and then see about coloring it...
...maybe....
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Yeah I got a picture of a wing in my sketches cuz I was tryign to draw Asthrin in dragon form... or half, either way... it might not be a good sketch since his body is blocking it, but you may be able to at least see what I mean.
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Link please....yes I am lazy...
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Yeah... its a little hard to see, but you can still make out the frame of the top of his wing:
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