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Torqual3D β Penelope - Working Late 32
Published: 2011-06-17 13:55:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 39069; Favourites: 195; Downloads: 927
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Who saw that coming? Not Penelope...
I'm spoiling you...
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What a great left cross! Lot's of oomph behind it, you can tell by the flying glasses from Lady P's pretty face. Normally, I cheer for the blonde, and I still am, but a nice crisp results oriented shot like that has to be admired! Nice work Torqual!
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Funny that you have only just discovered this, after you enjoyed the Catfight sequences so much!
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Mmmm wow! I'd love to see this boss do this to an in-disguise Supergirl. Imagine what a thrill for her when she discovered just who she's been successfully bullying and dominating!
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beautiful artwork just outstanding!!!!!!
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Thanks. Β It's quite old now this story but I did enjoy making it.
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nice ass could have
her sliding off the desk
and hitting her head against a wall
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Well she needed experience, and there's no experience like a punch in the jaw...
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The one suggestion I could make is that if this is intended as a one-punch knockout, the "whack" sound effect in the handwritten font doesn't come across as a powerful blow. It's "a" punch, not "the" punch.
I would suggest putting a black outline around the sound effect, and maybe using a bolder sans-serif font. You could also try decreasing the space between the letters until they run into each other, and/or increasing the font size for each successive letter by 4 points, so that you get a more dynamic look to it.
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By the way - we don't know yet if it's a one punch KO. It may be. It may not.
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I tried a lot of things with this sound effect, but really I want the viewer to be drawn to Penelope's face, not the text. I do like your idea of reducing the spacing between the letters. About the outline round the text, for some reason I cannot workout how to do that in Photoshop. Any suggestions?
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Try this tutorial:
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a story puts the picture in context, thus giving it more relevance which, in my opinion, makes it even better! stories rock
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did not see that coming. Quick, decisive, and to the point (of the jaw that is.) I enjoy reading these continueing stories and have gone up to your site at least 5 times a week to see if there is a new picture. Keep the story going.
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There's no need to keep checking if you +Watch (button at the top right). That way, any time you log in to DeviantArt, if there is an update here it will show in your messages.
It's great to know that you're so keen to keep up to date. I guess it must be frustrating that, sometimes, weeks go by and there is no update. But this summer I will definitely finish this story, before I start or continue anything else in 3D. Sometimes it annoys me that I cannot give time to other characters and ideas but, if I allowed myself to wander, there is a great chance that stories like this and Amanda Jones in the Cellar would never be finished.
Don't be surprised if this one runs over 50 images. 60 is quite possible.
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no one saw that coming. Quick, direct, and very effective. Down for the count. I thought thee coffee would put her under and then we would be treated to a nice carry. Or maybe after she got real sleepy a soft clorophorm rag or injection. I love the detail you put into your pictures. Fantastic job.
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Thanks again. I try not to telegraph too much what is going to happen. And by the way, whilst staying within the overall plot I do very my script based on watchers' suggestions.
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Ding-dong! Great angles and choreography there. I love the little touch with Penelope's glasses flying off. This is great stuff!
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AH! The pictures on the laptop were foreshadowing! Nice!
I also like the parallels between the image of Penelope unconscious on the computer, and her current pose as she is getting knocked back.
This is good stuff! I like that you are making a more sophisticated production out of it. And I find your choices to be interesting. You really are making this work!
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I think you might be taking these comments wrong. I think by "at last!" they mean they are excited to be seeing the ko finally crop up, not that they were ever bored or that they disapprove of your long form storytelling. At least thats how I took it.
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Thanks; I spend a lot of time on my girls' makeup.
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Morkos don't take offence - this is not aimed specifically at you....
I'm genuinely surprised by the number of recent comments along the lines of 'at last', or 'about time'.
Seriously folks, shall I just stop with stories and churn out a bunch of standalone unconscious pictures? I already did standalone sets of 4 or 5 for Amanda (both outfits) and Penelope (suit and Black Arrow).
In fact there are plenty of other 3D artists out there just doing standalone images. I am just trying to do something different.
Maybe I should just write text fiction for those few that want to read a story.
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Sorry. Maybe I should have added a smiley face on my comment. It was meant to be a humorous comment.
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Ignore me! As I said, it wasn't even aimed at you. I've had enough reassurance now that stories taking 5 months to get to the KO are very much in demand...
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I think you're on the right track, and I think the emphasis on characterization and production values make this story stand out.
If we say "At Last!" perhaps it's because you have successfully held us in suspense, and we are excited to see the storyline unfold.
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With the drug in her system plus the earlier knock out her brain really wasn't up to pair. At least that's what I think.
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Thanks. You'll find out the red lady's name soon.
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Noooo...not the glassess lol, great pic man.
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The glasses were only in the last 31 pictures in preparation for this moment
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Ouch! Nicely done, well posed and great expressions. You can really feel the weight of that punch.
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Yeah, my own jaw is hurting from that!
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altough i never liked stories .. (you need to wait to long for the end ) .. i like this one
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Good then - you're learning the value of patience
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