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Published: 2006-01-05 13:29:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 86; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 6
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Description My sweet goddess
Rest your body
Feel the warmth of early morning rays
Shining upon your dreams
With eyes shut tight
I await their opening
To light a fire in my body

My sweet angel
Take me to heaven
Bless me with your peaceful soul
Carry me in your embrace
Hold me tight
In your arms
They light a fire in my body

My sweet beauty
So precious
There with love and care for me
With features so radiant
I never feel lost
In your presence
I belong in your gaze
You light a fire in my body
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Comments: 9

DarkSlinky [2006-01-09 11:09:32 +0000 UTC]

Awwwww so sweet! It's beautiful.
I've fallen asleep a few times in the presence of my boyfriend, I hope he feels more like your poem than disgusted. He seemed amused.

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torturedsoul24 In reply to DarkSlinky [2006-01-09 12:11:58 +0000 UTC]

i see. thanks for liking it and things.

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DarkSlinky In reply to torturedsoul24 [2006-01-12 07:09:58 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome.

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glarawen [2006-01-06 16:53:25 +0000 UTC]

Woah. I mean ... wow. I don't know what else to say apart from that was beautiful.

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torturedsoul24 In reply to glarawen [2006-01-06 22:58:49 +0000 UTC]

heh...thanks heaps.

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Culturalrider [2006-01-06 06:04:37 +0000 UTC]

That was sorta pretty and captivating

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torturedsoul24 In reply to Culturalrider [2006-01-06 09:25:55 +0000 UTC]

thanks.....

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toki88 [2006-01-05 13:54:21 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I can just imagine an angel. lolz, that was the first thing that came into my mind. That is really a wonderful poem, I can feel the emotion flowing from the words.

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torturedsoul24 In reply to toki88 [2006-01-06 05:30:46 +0000 UTC]

wow thanks!

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