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RE-Ori [2019-07-01 05:55:06 +0000 UTC]

Hey! I'm from 

I love seeing Miku fanart aah! >v<

The anatomy and shading from the head down are really good!

From the head up, I think the face structure can be improved on. Perhaps the shape of her left eye can be adjusted a bit.
The ribbon, though, is by far my favorite. The shading is just beautiful! ;O;

I also see that you've added a shadow on the grass for the finished piece. That's a good final touch!

Overall, this piece gives me a happy summer vibe, which I'm sure is what you're going for. Awesome!!

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petdan64 [2019-06-27 21:38:19 +0000 UTC]

This is pure joie de vivre, as they say in French
She does seem rather tall and unnaturally thin.
Also, maybe more brighter, red, orange and yellow colours could make it more summery.
Keep it up

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ProtoTEnterprise [2019-06-23 20:31:47 +0000 UTC]

Hi! I´m from   

From the anatomy to the perspective and pose from the back, through the design in the summer dress of Miku as well as in the proportions and how spectacularly drawn and more with its movement that makes it dynamic and more with that softened in the grass green, that only being seen in mega zoom that grass is noticeable.

To this is added the pointillism that is in the background and that thanks to that, it looks like a meadow of flowers of multiple colors respecting what color is such a flower.

And not to mention the expression that Miku does. It makes it totally easy to see
The only downside is that if Miku is walking somewhat diagonally, the flowers are on the horizontal side. It would be more dynamic if the flowers had the same diagonal sense of Miku.

But more than a flaw, its virtues are magnificent. Spectacular and magnificent. You are an artist with a talent to exploit <3

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KrollAK [2019-06-23 18:20:19 +0000 UTC]

If the green thing is grass should end on  the horizont line that is place in the  height of the eye or camera, probably a litle above of  middle of the image.
Otherwise seems like she is levitating in front of a wall but maybe her is levitating, i dont know

Grab a perspective book that will help

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Burke23 [2019-06-23 17:05:36 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!!!!!

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ado-mi [2019-06-23 14:35:27 +0000 UTC]

Hello there !

Colour :
AHH you really know how to chose colors to make it look really appealing! I also really love your color choice when it comes to shades like the colors you chose really make the form pop!
Hmm I guess there's a lot of greens and cool hues in this picture and to balance it out, I see that you used red and warm colors as flowers(?) in the background and it would be so great to see more of that especially in the foreground! Though I read you were pressed for time so it's understandable aw

Concept :
I honestly love her pose so much, it feels so freeing with her back turned and her hair flowing in the wind! Also her outfit is really very summer which helps give of that feeling!
I guess I wish still I could see more from this piece because it just has so much free space for potential! From flowers, to greenery, to even animals it could honestly be anything HAHA but it'd be really interesting to see what you can come up with! 

Construction :
You are really good at shading, poses and colors like.. it really shows! You made it so that the pose isn't too stiff and that the colors from the clothes reflect the background colors to make it look much more realistic and pleasing to the eye.
I guess I would use this point to point out more the background. I know that yeah you were pressed for time so the flowers in the background look like speckled dots in the distance. I'd honestly love to see you do more detailed background pieces seeing as how you do the people is already so detailed and pleasing to the eye.

All in all, this is still really cool and I hope you keep on creating more pieces like this!

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dokta-whawee [2019-06-23 13:12:58 +0000 UTC]

Incredible!

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