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Toxic-Mario — Kindness
Published: 2012-05-21 18:54:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 104996; Favourites: 2579; Downloads: 2213
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Oh look a big comic from me!
Oh how I missed these huge comics of win. Find the muffns...ALL OF THE MUFFINS! So this comi-....*manly tears* *hnnnng heart attack from too much cuteness* (end description)
Time spent: 26 hours over 5 days
How I did it: Paper + Photoshop CS5
PLEASE don't steal this. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.
Fluttershy, Derpy© Hasbro
Art © Me
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Comments: 967
I really like the way that you portrayed Fluttershy's kindness to not only animals, but to other ponies as well. From the fact that they are on the ground (and my knowledge from reading various Fanifics) my guess is that Fluttershy and Derpy have been friends since they dropped out of flight school, together I'm guessing? I really like calm setting and I really like the amount of thought and work you put into this piece. Derpy and Fluttershy are two of my favourite characters and I feel that you have portrayed them in this very well e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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(this is my first critique) this is very cute. i think that the idea behind it is a bit played out. However the way you show fluttershy's kindness is very original. like others have said as well you expect fluttershy to just give the whole muffin to derpy. but i like that you made it so that they both could be happy in a very cute way. as for technique i find that the artwork is solid. i didn't see any mistakes. also, the way you draw the fillies is both cute and accurate. this piece is just cute and it has the effect of making you smile when you read it no matter what your mood is. idk if its just the fact that its fluttershy or the cuteness of the fillies either way i think that you captured the real my little pony style and i look forward to seeing your other work.
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Very cute! I love this, it's very sweet. I like how you expect Fluttershy to give Derpy the whole thing, but she splits it in half and Derpy is happy. It was very, very cute.
This part isn't very important as to the theme, but I think that your snouts needs to be a little bit longer. Other than that, you have the perfect MLP:FiM style.
This whole thing really comes to you, it's really sweet how she is enjoying the muffins but she doesn't mind giving one up and splits it with Derpy. It also shows off how Fluttershy is older than the others (hence why she was taller and slimmer than the others as a filly in the same year), and how she can be very polite, even being somewhat timid and... shy.
Not to mention the d'awwness in Derpy's expression on panel 5.
Overall, this is really sweet and adorable.
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omg that is so cute and sweet i was getting teary eyed i love this it is just one of the many lovely comics you have made and they are all very amazing
if you made more i would fave every single one of them and that is the truth they are so cute and funny i love <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 them i give it 2 thumbs up ponies united we will never be divided and that is what your comics have taught me i hope you make many more comics cause they are amazing
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this is so adorable and amazing derpy and flutter shy where both drawn amazingly i cant see anything wrong well actaly one thing derpys eyes they do change angels and one is well now thats that's done this is one of the few things that dont need to be 20 % cooler o and one last thing there wings look a little dissfromed like there sproting out when normaly they have a bone poping out first but other then that i absalutly loved it serolsy its amazing cute awsome and realy adorable i realy like how u did it when they where kids but this still would have been cute if they where aduolts but the fact that there kids makes it amoust perfect thxs for makeing this
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This is my first critique, so please excuse me if it isn't very tolerable.
I really like this comic. Everyone loves the usual filly ponies becoming friends and are nice to each other, and I feel as if this one was executed very well. The artwork is great, you really expressed different emotions between the two, and you made the comic very much worth viewing.
Overall it was a very good comic, shared quite a fine lesson, and had some Daw's in it.
I don't see anything too wrong in it, and it seems pretty straightforward, but I can definitely see someone disliking it. Maybe the lack of speech bubbles, or the subtle "Here have half of my muffin" idea. For some people, they might see it as plain and not very enjoyable, even if the art style was excellent.
I give you 9/10.
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so beautyfull.
that it at excellent work that you made
i hope that vision, passion and imagination ever desapair.
your work reflect how must be the world, without war, hates, and other bad feelings.
that's what makes life worthwhile.
you must go beyond what is at first sight
would be great if you could do a comic that reflects these values and teachings
Put your feelings in every job you do, because that's creations are made of this world.
if you ever feel depressed, try to remember that what he has done so happy and your problems will disappear
thank you
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Raven: ...... Picks up the dropped muffin Throwin' a fuss over nothin'.. Blows on it and proceeds to eat it
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I approve. Food should not be wasted.
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Raven: See, he's dumb, but he gets it.
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Awww this is so cute! :3 YAY FOR DERPY AND FLUTTERSHY!
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Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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Saw a muffin in the bush on the first screen/tile/picture/thing.
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Fluttershy and Derpy as best friends in flight school. Fluttershy is weak flyers and gets made fun of. Derpy is uncorrodinated and gets made fun of...I like my headcannons
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why doesn't she just eat the muffin?
Shes acting like she has never eaten grass before
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This was adorable. Love it! But... couldn't Derpy just eat off the grass? O-O
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no it broke as you ca see
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But couldn't you still eat the broken muffin off the grass?
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no no no no (shushes you ater the seco d you begin to speak)
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dawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww again
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its kinda moar laik generosity bot ok i guess the way fluttershy acted does represent kindness 
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So cute.
Still, it's common knowleage ponies can eat from the ground.
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