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Description I want you beneath my
fingertips, flushed skin like a hushed
prayerβ€”

I want the enjambment of your
sighs, the rhythm
of your each exhaleβ€”

I want your breath
in my chest and your arms
in my arms

and I want to make you
come











to me
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toxic-nebulae - Until the Lamplighters
Comments: 19

FuzzyHoser [2013-12-10 21:04:02 +0000 UTC]

I agree with Nathan - provocative and effective, not to mention gorgeous. Stunning work, ma'am.

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toxic-nebulae In reply to FuzzyHoser [2013-12-10 22:09:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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FuzzyHoser In reply to toxic-nebulae [2013-12-10 22:19:24 +0000 UTC]

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i-am-a-bridgewalker [2013-12-07 12:31:57 +0000 UTC]

the importance of self-love in all its forms.Β 

(love the title, the sounds (flushed/hushed) and the poetic metaphors (enjambment))

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toxic-nebulae In reply to i-am-a-bridgewalker [2013-12-07 18:54:25 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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aldwarke [2013-12-06 21:30:56 +0000 UTC]

Wickedly interesting!

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toxic-nebulae In reply to aldwarke [2013-12-06 22:00:37 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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LionesseRampant [2013-12-05 06:25:26 +0000 UTC]

Teehee. So naughty. I love how sneaky it is, though. This just rolls of my lips in a way that makes me fall in love with it.

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toxic-nebulae In reply to LionesseRampant [2013-12-05 17:41:45 +0000 UTC]

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LionesseRampant In reply to toxic-nebulae [2013-12-06 05:20:12 +0000 UTC]

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Mr-Timeshadow [2013-12-05 02:38:57 +0000 UTC]

Wicked genius! I love your playful naughtiness! Sorta in the vein of "Love and Tensor Algebra". Only you're cuter than Lem...

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toxic-nebulae In reply to Mr-Timeshadow [2013-12-05 03:10:42 +0000 UTC]

<3

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chancerox [2013-12-05 02:18:21 +0000 UTC]

ahh i always love your formatting, it adds so much.Β 

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toxic-nebulae In reply to chancerox [2013-12-05 02:37:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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nawkaman [2013-12-04 21:46:42 +0000 UTC]

very provocative and effective.

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toxic-nebulae In reply to nawkaman [2013-12-04 22:49:17 +0000 UTC]

<3 thank you.

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wallawallaw [2013-12-04 21:28:18 +0000 UTC]

what a way to use the space... works...

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toxic-nebulae In reply to wallawallaw [2013-12-04 21:35:45 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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wallawallaw In reply to toxic-nebulae [2013-12-04 22:21:40 +0000 UTC]

my pleasure

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