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Published: 2005-06-04 15:22:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 171; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 31
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Description Silent stoney graveyard
                      Night
             Narrow darkened path              Overshadowed by
Natural arches trees hide the way
                                          Leaves breeze in the sky



Trail leads to a light
            An eerie blaze                          Bright
Voluptuous fallen moonlight
                                           Attraction
                Fantasy soft peaceful glow
Promising a new life                                         Surreal



I stride                                           Past the shadows
                I want to see
                I want to know
                I want to bathe myself amid this gorgeous flow



A fairy kingdom        Forgotten realm        Tiny merry creatures
                Fanciful paradise
                                               I almost run
                               Burst in delight
I hear them whisper                                        “Leave all behind"
                         Their kingdom could be mine also
                                                                                          I think I fly



I finally get there
                  The trees open
                Nothing                                     Bar a lamppost
Casting the shine I was so joyful dreaming on
           A crude white light



Reality has struck with might
Deception                      Delusion
                      Bitterness
And some kind of sour enlightenment
Too close to light       Slays your dreams        Turns you blind.
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Comments: 6

deathisme34 [2005-06-06 10:40:20 +0000 UTC]

lol, must have been fun a lol

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deathisme34 [2005-06-05 10:46:57 +0000 UTC]

hey thats so nice, its really good, sweet and loving sorta, love it

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tranxenne In reply to deathisme34 [2005-06-05 16:45:34 +0000 UTC]

i'm glad you like it. that actually happened, on thursday night. don't ask me what i was doing in that graveyard though in fact a friend of mine wanted us to down a few beers there, he was in gothic mood...

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Knock-out [2005-06-05 07:47:57 +0000 UTC]

i love fairies. so pretty.
nice. very descriptive.
i dont get the "Leaves bruise in the sky" part though.... bruise? as in hurt? or is it meant to be breeze?
anyway. nice.

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tranxenne In reply to Knock-out [2005-06-05 16:42:10 +0000 UTC]

oops yeh u'r right i meant breeze. i've been misleed by convergent sonorities. thkx for telling and for the comment

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Knock-out In reply to tranxenne [2005-06-09 10:38:06 +0000 UTC]

sure! anytime.

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