days-be-strange [2017-04-24 21:05:02 +0000 UTC]
This drawing looks magical. Really nicely done and your story is very interesting. Your English is really good but there's just a few things I picked up on:
It was one of this nights, were seasons change from winterDid you mean 'where'?
far more ecstasizing than anything This isn't an English word. Did you mean exciting?
by that perfect beauty, that standed there.Stood*
Besides that, very good.
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Traue-Niemand In reply to days-be-strange [2017-04-24 22:09:05 +0000 UTC]
Ah thank you so much! I do use a dictionary to learn sometimes. I suppose I got the 'ecstasizing' from there. Or the other possibility is, that I simply didn't sleep enough. xD
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