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Cantdraw13 [2020-09-23 21:10:20 +0000 UTC]
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Curia-DD [2019-11-29 21:09:58 +0000 UTC]
She sounds a lot like me...
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TazLooking [2019-11-29 21:01:24 +0000 UTC]
Awesome story, Kate did not suffer too much, she had more pleasure!!!!
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Shazycrit [2019-11-17 01:14:58 +0000 UTC]
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OSVS [2019-06-30 02:18:58 +0000 UTC]
she became excrement
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poserhorror [2017-11-03 05:55:42 +0000 UTC]
Love this Story 👍
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NECRON74 [2017-05-28 15:16:57 +0000 UTC]
Very interesting. I thought the mix of terror and pleasure was just right. I also hope to read of more escapades with Kate, hopefully they will be feet first as well.
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Fetoani7 [2017-01-07 15:17:55 +0000 UTC]
Well done description. Certainly a tasty meal was had.
I like the way you kept focused on Kate throughout the story.
Thank you
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MayBoredomRise [2015-10-12 03:14:15 +0000 UTC]
I am very glad that none of the people eaten in this series stays dead and I hope that this always remains the case.
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Trenchwar In reply to MayBoredomRise [2015-10-20 06:42:13 +0000 UTC]
kate is too rare a girl to only be eaten once!
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chewyyy [2015-10-11 15:48:22 +0000 UTC]
REALLY good story. I enjoyed the descriptions a lot. Slugs do make great preds - slow gooey eater that allow their prey to have fun as they go down for the last time.
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Trenchwar In reply to chewyyy [2015-10-20 06:43:13 +0000 UTC]
thanks & agreed on slugs!!
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stormnorm299 [2015-10-08 11:06:42 +0000 UTC]
Excellently written and very very sexy! How long did it take you to write this?
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Trenchwar In reply to stormnorm299 [2015-10-20 06:02:21 +0000 UTC]
20 mins. when an idea takes me its pretty quick. issue is the quality and source of ideas
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thisgirlroolzz [2015-10-04 00:10:45 +0000 UTC]
WOW!!!!!!!, I think I mentioned that slugs are one of my all time favorite preds.
I hope that had something to do with this story! In my mind I could feel every single word, transformed into feeling, it was more than amazing!!!!!
Thank you so much for this gift, wheather it was intentionally aimed at me or not!
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