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TristanNYC — don't play with your food .7

Published: 2010-01-20 18:45:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 2066; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 0
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Description Models: Aleece Martt
Ashley Pagliuso

Description: This shoot was a concept by Aleece. The idea behind it is to make a loose story based on the title "don't play with your food". As well we knew there was BLOOD and an entire WAREHOUSE at our disposal so we HAD to shoot. This is the outcome.

Enjoy!


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Comments: 22

Mrs-Durden [2010-01-20 19:12:58 +0000 UTC]

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Hello there,

I've fallen in love with this photography! It's brilliant, really!
(please forgive my bad english as I go on)

First off the "environment" is just excellent, the "dirty" (I suppose it must be) staircase fits perfectly with the concept, and the end of it seems so long away, and so dark, it adds a tad of fear and story to the photo.
Then there are the models which are nicely chosen, there could be different possibilities to their clothings and hole look, we can imagine a costume party gone wrong, or just an exagerated vision of good and bad, innocent and evil, dark and light. And for all those concepts, the clothes, the hair, everything is perfectly chosen.
Then there is the pose, the hole display, it's simply perfect, the "dragging" concept, the eyes shut, every detail was thought of, even the missing shoes on the girl (the "food").

I know in most critiques there should be the good and the bad, the things to change or that could be better changed, but I can't seem to find anything in this photo, I mean sure other framings could be quite nice (and you probably have some, i'll have to check your gallery), but otherwise, I couldn't see what you could change.
Except maybe a bit of blood on the bottom right of the stairs, it would add a touch of violence, but that's just a little detail.

Bottom line : I LOVE THIS.

Nina.

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TristanNYC In reply to Mrs-Durden [2010-01-20 19:24:46 +0000 UTC]

Wow.. thank you sooo much, and i agree a little more blood could have been an excellent addition

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Mrs-Durden In reply to TristanNYC [2010-01-20 19:29:14 +0000 UTC]

It was my pleasure, if my english wasn't that bad and what I meant got through right then i'm glad

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TristanNYC In reply to Mrs-Durden [2010-01-20 21:54:16 +0000 UTC]

Your english was great! Thanks for the in depth critique!

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Mrs-Durden In reply to TristanNYC [2010-01-20 21:56:19 +0000 UTC]

Ahh well good, i'm always worried it won't be understandable!
And you're welcome of course

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B31Photography [2010-10-05 22:42:50 +0000 UTC]

First class
I like the way the poor rabbit? is being dragged out of the light and into the gloom at the top of the stairs to be devoured.

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TristanNYC In reply to B31Photography [2010-10-07 02:38:02 +0000 UTC]

yeah nom nom nom

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B31Photography In reply to TristanNYC [2010-10-10 18:39:13 +0000 UTC]

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HoshisamaValmor [2010-06-09 19:22:28 +0000 UTC]

amazing shot

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TristanNYC In reply to HoshisamaValmor [2010-09-10 23:03:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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dorguska [2010-05-10 18:43:07 +0000 UTC]

[link]

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TristanNYC In reply to dorguska [2010-05-19 03:27:10 +0000 UTC]

aww thanks

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Kenshobu [2010-01-21 00:21:10 +0000 UTC]

i like my women alive, even if i was a vampire ;O

I think her arm ruins the picture a little,
it doesnt realy look like your pulling her (her arm isnt straight).
you see she is holding his forearm with a grip (isnt she suppose to be knocked off or something)
Other then that, its pretty dark like a nasty dream

PS: no offense, i just want you to improve the art (doesnt have to be perfect, just more realistic if possible)

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TristanNYC In reply to Kenshobu [2010-01-21 00:32:48 +0000 UTC]

Totally agree. I had a couple iterations of this where the arm looked a little more dead like, but this had the best composition so i did compromise a bit on that. But good suggestion Thanks!!!

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AmbreAnne [2010-01-20 23:27:47 +0000 UTC]

wooooww this is really an amazing image. my perspective is the darkness taking over the beauty...

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TristanNYC In reply to AmbreAnne [2010-01-21 00:32:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Nice analysis.

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AmbreAnne In reply to TristanNYC [2010-01-21 02:24:18 +0000 UTC]

anytime=] thankyyyytoo

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RoMaGrafix [2010-01-20 19:31:15 +0000 UTC]

That' s a really excellent picture

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TristanNYC In reply to RoMaGrafix [2010-01-20 21:53:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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capricious23pictures [2010-01-20 18:46:13 +0000 UTC]

beautifull picture gorgeous

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TristanNYC In reply to capricious23pictures [2010-01-20 18:46:22 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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capricious23pictures In reply to TristanNYC [2010-01-20 18:52:51 +0000 UTC]

no prob check out my gallery when you are free

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