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Mrs-Durden [2010-01-20 19:12:58 +0000 UTC]
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Hello there,
I've fallen in love with this photography! It's brilliant, really!
(please forgive my bad english as I go on)
First off the "environment" is just excellent, the "dirty" (I suppose it must be) staircase fits perfectly with the concept, and the end of it seems so long away, and so dark, it adds a tad of fear and story to the photo.
Then there are the models which are nicely chosen, there could be different possibilities to their clothings and hole look, we can imagine a costume party gone wrong, or just an exagerated vision of good and bad, innocent and evil, dark and light. And for all those concepts, the clothes, the hair, everything is perfectly chosen.
Then there is the pose, the hole display, it's simply perfect, the "dragging" concept, the eyes shut, every detail was thought of, even the missing shoes on the girl (the "food").
I know in most critiques there should be the good and the bad, the things to change or that could be better changed, but I can't seem to find anything in this photo, I mean sure other framings could be quite nice (and you probably have some, i'll have to check your gallery), but otherwise, I couldn't see what you could change.
Except maybe a bit of blood on the bottom right of the stairs, it would add a touch of violence, but that's just a little detail.
Bottom line : I LOVE THIS.
Nina.
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TristanNYC In reply to Mrs-Durden [2010-01-20 21:54:16 +0000 UTC]
Your english was great! Thanks for the in depth critique!
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AmbreAnne [2010-01-20 23:27:47 +0000 UTC]
wooooww this is really an amazing image. my perspective is the darkness taking over the beauty...
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TristanNYC In reply to AmbreAnne [2010-01-21 00:32:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. Nice analysis.
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AmbreAnne In reply to TristanNYC [2010-01-21 02:24:18 +0000 UTC]
anytime=] thankyyyytoo
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