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Description WHO SAID WE'RE WACK ASSHOLES?


God, this one took forever. And I'm really sort of dissatisfied with the end product. Some parts I like, but others, like the first two panels, I just want to take an axe to. Grrarr. D<

Also I apologize for the dumb dialogue. I inked the speech boxes before being sure about what I was going to put and then I had to make it fit and... afjbsd. It didn't turn out well. Or maybe I just suck with words, that's a perfectly reasonable assumption.

Okay, no I'm not gonna bitch anymore. This is basically an exercise to teach myself how to use pens better anyway. And it's really working. I've got a whole list of things I can and things I CANNOT UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES do with pens now. I'm learning! 8D

As always any critiques are greatly appreciated. And comments in general. <3

Two more pages to go!



First Page: [link]
Second Page: [link]
Third Page: HERE
Fourth Page: [link]
Fifth Page: COMING SOON



Lamont and Worth belong to the oh so tolerant and loverly *vert-is-ninja
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Comments: 39

AlliaSterling [2010-08-13 20:02:54 +0000 UTC]

I think they're even clearer than last time

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trout1992 In reply to AlliaSterling [2010-08-14 07:21:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad that I'm improving!

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AlliaSterling In reply to trout1992 [2010-08-14 14:57:40 +0000 UTC]

yup, you're welcome!

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Iiyama-Katetori [2010-08-05 10:27:00 +0000 UTC]

I'm really liking this. Hope to see more soon, though it looks very labour-intensive!

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trout1992 In reply to Iiyama-Katetori [2010-08-05 17:16:39 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad to hear you like it! They really do take a while to make, but it's so satisfying when a page is finished. (:

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Lori-Ayona [2010-08-03 01:23:33 +0000 UTC]

CAUGHT IN AN EPIC BROMANCEEEE
<3

I loveeeeeeeee the way you draw noses. I find Lamont's nose oddly sexy...
And I couldn't help but think "NO HOMO" in panel 10...I'm so childish sometimes, heh.


You make me love pen. <3

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trout1992 In reply to Lori-Ayona [2010-08-03 05:15:10 +0000 UTC]

AWWWW YEEEAAAA

Ha ha, thank you. I didn't know that so many people could find noses sexy! I'M NOT ALONE

I had to keep that up as a mantra in my head when planning this out. I don't ship them at all, but the slasher in me finds it SO EASY. *grabby hands*

Eee, I feel so accomplished now. <333

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Lori-Ayona In reply to trout1992 [2010-08-05 20:04:25 +0000 UTC]

SOMETHING ABOUT A POWERFUL NOSE...IT'S A SIGN OF A MANLY MAN!

Dude, right? I try not to ship non-canon, but there's seriously some INNER FANGIRL within me that's just like "sex sex sex" whenever I see certain couples. Sigh. I think it's a disease.

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trout1992 In reply to Lori-Ayona [2010-08-05 21:23:44 +0000 UTC]

YES. JUST MOTHERFUCKIN' YES. GUH.

Oh god, THAT exactly. That is just... IT, so bad. That's what it feels like when I'm in a fandom. I don't want to ship something, even unseriously, but the inner fangirl just keeps running around and frothing at the mouth over it. We need support groups, for real.

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thekyrianne [2010-08-01 04:55:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh fuck yes cigarette sex that is so sexy unf unf.

Yes I have weird kinks stfu xD

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trout1992 In reply to thekyrianne [2010-08-01 22:39:25 +0000 UTC]

Heh, if you're weird then I'm weird. It took all my willpower to not put a ridiculously sexy lead-up to that panel. xD

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thekyrianne In reply to trout1992 [2010-08-01 23:30:22 +0000 UTC]

Heeee

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HysteriaBound [2010-08-01 02:51:37 +0000 UTC]

What are you talking about, the dialogue in this is great!
I was a little confused at first with the change in angle in the first panel though.

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trout1992 In reply to HysteriaBound [2010-08-01 03:03:58 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha, thaaanks~ :'D
Oh gosh, I know I pulled that angle off terribly. I inked Lamont and then was like, "Wait, where does Worth go, wait THIS ISN'T RIGHT ARRRGH D8<"

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HysteriaBound In reply to trout1992 [2010-08-01 03:05:37 +0000 UTC]

DARN IT WORTH ALWAYS GETTING IN THE WAY

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trout1992 In reply to HysteriaBound [2010-08-01 03:17:43 +0000 UTC]

HE'S SUCH A PAIN. ALL THE TIME. AND THEN HE HAS THE NERVE TO LAUGH AT ME AND STEAL MY GRILLED CHEESE SANDWICHES.

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HysteriaBound In reply to trout1992 [2010-08-01 10:54:20 +0000 UTC]

THAT IS SO TYPICAL OF HIM.

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keeptrying [2010-08-01 01:07:19 +0000 UTC]

Still lovin' this.
Favorite panels THIS time: Lamont in panels 5 and 6, and the cigarette-lighting at the bottom. Very expressive. c:

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trout1992 In reply to keeptrying [2010-08-01 01:23:15 +0000 UTC]

So happy to hear you still dig this.
Ha ha, and again you choose my favorite panels. I'm ridiculously proud of how those panels came out.

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Ed21 [2010-08-01 01:06:06 +0000 UTC]

I love the panel when their lighting each others cigarettes...SO much.....its not even funny. <33333

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trout1992 In reply to Ed21 [2010-08-01 01:10:21 +0000 UTC]

Hee, I'm really glad you like it~ C:
I was so afraid of fucking up that panel. I ended up doing it with my eyes half-closed, like when you're watching a scary movie. Which is complete nonsense. D:

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Ed21 In reply to trout1992 [2010-08-01 12:22:35 +0000 UTC]

That's pretty ridiculously awesome then. And you did NOT fuck up that panel, in any way shape or form. Also, Just the pose and concept that they're best friends is just just.... <3~

I look forward to the next page <3

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mimiru91 [2010-08-01 00:49:18 +0000 UTC]

hey pall mall! i know ppl who smoke those

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trout1992 In reply to mimiru91 [2010-08-01 00:55:59 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I'm surprised the text was still readable!

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mimiru91 In reply to trout1992 [2010-08-01 03:36:48 +0000 UTC]

yea, i can read diffrent kinds of texts sometimes

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mizumomochi [2010-08-01 00:08:16 +0000 UTC]

YESSS!! cant wait to see the next one!!

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trout1992 In reply to mizumomochi [2010-08-01 00:10:49 +0000 UTC]

Glad you're enjoying these!

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mizumomochi In reply to trout1992 [2010-08-01 00:18:00 +0000 UTC]

i love these!!
these, sugar and spice, and the dancing veser fanfics
i think they keep me ocupied till tessa makes more to the hanna comic

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trout1992 In reply to mizumomochi [2010-08-01 00:29:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes, sugar and spice. <333 Thank god for the hanna fans who make the passing time more bearable.

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mizumomochi In reply to trout1992 [2010-08-01 00:33:01 +0000 UTC]

it takes a lot for me to get into a fanfic with a story, and that has it!
yes yes, its like the hanna fans are a big family and we keep each other company XD

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trout1992 In reply to mizumomochi [2010-08-01 00:43:44 +0000 UTC]

It definitely does!
We comfort each other during the hard times and rejoice together during the good.

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mizumomochi In reply to trout1992 [2010-08-01 02:58:41 +0000 UTC]

yes! i think thats why the hanna fandom is so awesome and people stay for so long

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Mary-Garden [2010-07-31 23:59:06 +0000 UTC]

Is it weird that I keep staring at that close-up of Lamont's nose? It's so fabulous...

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WaltzQueen In reply to Mary-Garden [2010-08-01 00:53:21 +0000 UTC]

It's not strange at all.It's a lovely nose!

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Mary-Garden In reply to WaltzQueen [2010-08-01 01:32:27 +0000 UTC]

That it is~

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trout1992 In reply to Mary-Garden [2010-08-01 00:08:08 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely not! Noses are fabulous. I've crushed on people just for their noses. I'm glad mine is worthy of such perving.

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Mary-Garden In reply to trout1992 [2010-08-01 00:24:05 +0000 UTC]

Hurrhurrrrrr

<3

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LoveOfLiterature [2010-07-31 23:58:02 +0000 UTC]

I think this is fabulous! I love your style! Its so dark yet comfortable....Please keep up the pen exercises!!!

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trout1992 In reply to LoveOfLiterature [2010-08-01 00:04:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, thank you! Dark yet comfortable... I've never thought of it that way, but it's exactly what I aim for. Thank you again!

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