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Published: 2011-01-06 03:56:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 992; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 2
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Description He lies to you,
   and says he really is in love.
But when you turn around
   he says it isn't true.
He finds someone else,
   that he loves more than he did you.
Out of all the guys, he is
   the one I picked,
I made a mistake,
   but I was never tricked.
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Comments: 25

Dragon-Geek [2013-01-07 02:38:40 +0000 UTC]

My ex did that to me. and i still love her and miss her. so for me it would not be he but she.

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trplegoddess In reply to Dragon-Geek [2013-02-12 03:50:50 +0000 UTC]

I never understood, nor will I ever understand, why people cheat. Why not just break up first? Ah, an answer to that is they don't want to hurt the other person. Isn't that a sort of warped way to think? Especially when they are going out and cheating WHICH WILL HURT THE PERSON?
I learned a long time ago to never try to figure out someone else's logic.. it will drive you crazy.
Take care of yourself and good luck in finding a good woman.

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Zeeba13 [2011-05-21 00:16:28 +0000 UTC]

this describes my situation perfectly...

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trplegoddess In reply to Zeeba13 [2011-07-05 21:29:53 +0000 UTC]

I wish you the best of luck in fixing the situation. Never just settle for the lies and manipulations. You deserve better than that!

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Zeeba13 In reply to trplegoddess [2011-07-10 19:31:15 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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trplegoddess In reply to Zeeba13 [2011-07-19 21:26:59 +0000 UTC]

You're quite welcome.

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ilike2draw [2011-01-12 02:32:30 +0000 UTC]

I'm so sorry.

And yes, your message did come across.

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trplegoddess In reply to ilike2draw [2011-01-13 01:50:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! No need to be sorry. It's the way we weed out what we want in our lives and what we don't want.

Co-Founder of

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ilike2draw In reply to trplegoddess [2011-01-13 02:38:21 +0000 UTC]

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Em0-Ang3lz-gurl [2011-01-11 21:58:06 +0000 UTC]

true...

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trplegoddess In reply to Em0-Ang3lz-gurl [2011-01-11 23:47:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the comment

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Em0-Ang3lz-gurl In reply to trplegoddess [2011-01-12 00:46:47 +0000 UTC]

yur welcome X3

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AnnamaeTezuka [2011-01-11 20:36:03 +0000 UTC]

I like the flow of the poem.

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trplegoddess In reply to AnnamaeTezuka [2011-01-11 20:58:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

Co-Founder of

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AnnamaeTezuka In reply to trplegoddess [2011-01-11 21:45:59 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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007Balel [2011-01-11 18:03:17 +0000 UTC]

Very nice!
You definitely succeeded.
Lying is also a form of cheating.. which can cause rocky roads in a relationship.
Well done

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trplegoddess In reply to 007Balel [2011-01-11 20:05:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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007Balel In reply to trplegoddess [2011-01-11 20:07:17 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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j3nal3x [2011-01-11 07:21:22 +0000 UTC]

hey, this is good
but maybe u could change the second line to "and he says he is truly in love (with you)" whats in ( ) can be added or not
its just a suggestion

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trplegoddess In reply to j3nal3x [2011-01-11 17:03:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I will take your suggestion into consideration.

Co-Founder of

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Mikaioalani [2011-01-11 06:24:43 +0000 UTC]

I'll have to agree wholeheartedly with the previous comment - This is brilliant. I can't say much that wasn't already stated, really. The realization of what 'Cheated' means in this poem is simply... breathtaking.

Well done.

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trplegoddess In reply to Mikaioalani [2011-01-11 17:04:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad you approve. I appreciate your comments.

Co-Founder of

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Mikaioalani In reply to trplegoddess [2011-01-11 17:33:36 +0000 UTC]

You're quite welcome. ^_^

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CloakedSchemer06 [2011-01-11 05:23:28 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. I love how you made a twist on it. Your title leads people to assume it's someone being cheated on, but rather, it's someone cheating their way out of a relationship.

Absolutely brilliant and well written ^^.

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trplegoddess In reply to CloakedSchemer06 [2011-01-11 06:11:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I usually don't name a poem until after it's done. The name just fit.
I'm glad you like it.

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