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VegaTDM [2010-10-11 07:44:08 +0000 UTC]
good build up. but no money shot.
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TrustSexySnape In reply to VegaTDM [2010-10-12 02:05:03 +0000 UTC]
yeah, i was thinking that myself. maybe i'll write that over again.
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VegaTDM In reply to TrustSexySnape [2010-10-12 12:49:10 +0000 UTC]
or just continue where you left off.
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TrustSexySnape In reply to VegaTDM [2010-10-12 17:05:55 +0000 UTC]
yeah, but writing it from a first-person perspective in a scene like that would be weird.
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