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Published: 2005-05-29 07:02:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 325; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 40
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Description Don't tell me
Let me know

Take my hand
Let me go

Keep things in
Let it out

Be a cynic
Never doubt

Grow and change
Stay the same

Play with people
It's not a game

Change your fate
Live and let die

Life is forever
The end is nigh

Sing in silence
Bellow out loud

Pray for a clear sky
Thank God for the cloud

Live in reality
Dream like it's night

Fear what's around you
Live not in fright
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Comments: 19

Silver-Al [2007-05-02 13:09:45 +0000 UTC]

This is really really good

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francees [2005-05-30 01:44:04 +0000 UTC]

I know how you feel and this piece is grand

Sing in silence
Bellow out loud <--- wonderful imagrey and everything!!

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Truth-Hurts In reply to francees [2005-05-30 06:46:57 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you so much!

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francees In reply to Truth-Hurts [2005-05-30 18:08:32 +0000 UTC]

no problem its fab might you indulge in taking a look at my gallery? thanks a mil, peace, fm

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evilxofxlove [2005-05-30 01:13:15 +0000 UTC]

very good.....*applauds*

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Truth-Hurts In reply to evilxofxlove [2005-05-30 07:47:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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IamNoOne22FL [2005-05-29 23:10:27 +0000 UTC]

very nice....I think I shall go wander through your gallery now

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alannalivandra [2005-05-29 21:02:03 +0000 UTC]

Life really is a bundle of contradictions! As previously said, it does have a very magical flow to it. You chose these very well, I can see how it could provoke different thoughts from different people. Wonderful!

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Truth-Hurts In reply to alannalivandra [2005-05-30 07:55:07 +0000 UTC]

Thats fine, thank you so much for being so kind

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alannalivandra In reply to Truth-Hurts [2005-05-30 13:16:20 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, and I'm not just being kind!

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alannalivandra In reply to alannalivandra [2005-05-29 21:02:27 +0000 UTC]

Sorry for the double post. . .

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alannalivandra [2005-05-29 21:01:25 +0000 UTC]

Life really is a bundle of contradictions! As previously said, it does have a very magical flow to it. You chose these very well, I can see how it could provoke different thoughts from different people. Wonderful!

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kaitecometrue [2005-05-29 18:16:44 +0000 UTC]

it's fresh. i like it a lot.

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Truth-Hurts In reply to kaitecometrue [2005-05-30 07:57:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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death-in-a-dream [2005-05-29 16:10:45 +0000 UTC]

such lovely contradictions.. its different.. i like it

Elizabeth

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Truth-Hurts In reply to death-in-a-dream [2005-05-30 07:57:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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death-in-a-dream In reply to Truth-Hurts [2005-05-30 23:48:24 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

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sweetheart18 [2005-05-29 14:05:04 +0000 UTC]

Really good poem. It flows really well. I love the lines:
Live in reality
Dream like it's night

Fear what's around you
Live not in fright

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Truth-Hurts In reply to sweetheart18 [2005-05-30 07:58:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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