loupil100 [2019-07-09 12:03:58 +0000 UTC]
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There is a probleme in the body structure. The neck is too long and the legs too small.One leg is the size of a torso. But be careful do not mix the basin and the torso together. It's two different things. Although I am not very strong on the clothes fold I know they follows the movement of the body. For who's eye I noticed that your character looks at the total void. To not give this impression the holes of your eye must cross very lightly. Oh btw do not forget the shadowit creates volume in your character. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
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GayHuman [2019-07-08 22:57:55 +0000 UTC]
The structure of the character's torso where it meets the legs is a little shorter than it should be. The crotch looks a little odd, but I think it's because you didn't want to draw any genitals which is understandable. You might have wanted to just put a small circle or blur over that area, it makes the crotch on the clothed version look a little odd. The clothes look somewhat painted on since it mainly follows the lines of the man's body, some more wrinkles along the outside of the clothing, around the sleeves, torso, and legs would give it more of a 3D effect. Other than that, this artwork it really good and I can't wait to see more art from you!
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trying-to-be-cool In reply to GayHuman [2019-07-08 23:11:11 +0000 UTC]
I agree with the part of where his genital part and so I fixed it and thank you for the critique! ^^