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Published: 2015-08-21 02:51:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 610; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Description concept sketch for my next piece 
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Monstersaround [2015-08-21 03:36:42 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


At a first glance it looks simple, but that is the beauty of this piece. The piece also focus on the women in the water, making it more mysteries, making the person who looks at the piece question who is she? But now to the straight forward kind of critiquing. The originality of this piece seems to be lacking because it feels very familiar. The technique is great, it shares the meaning of the piece toward the onlooker. The impact; it just hits you the more you stare at the piece you recognize that its more of a dream than a scene of something happening. The bleariness of the piece just concludes the dream. Nicely done! Just a hint you might just want to make the ship part of the background and not on the foreground.

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tturqueza In reply to Monstersaround [2015-08-21 03:44:11 +0000 UTC]

mahalo for the honest critique, that familiar look/feel is something I kinda tried to do i wanted to do something that had a classic "Hawaiian/Polynesian" pin-up look kinda modern classic, i just blocked in the ship will be detailing this piece soon, this was done really quickly actually this whole piece is a ruff that i did really quick about a Hour or so

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bear48 [2015-08-22 00:36:11 +0000 UTC]

nice job 

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tturqueza In reply to bear48 [2015-08-22 08:06:26 +0000 UTC]

its getting there 

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