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GrowthXXX [2015-01-10 09:11:54 +0000 UTC]
That was awesome
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turboman500 In reply to timing2 [2009-07-30 04:30:46 +0000 UTC]
well for one, natalie has a powerful maternal instinct-she "adopted" malika once she found out how close her daughter, and she's just very protective of children in general because she IS a mother. she didn't eat ev because she saw her good will and intention..her desire to be a mother..how her hsband treated her. just because you're a predator doesnt mean you cant have your own moral code, but you already get that. she'd already overheard everything between the two and she resolved to help the boys, and eva while having her fun.
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sumcoolguy [2009-07-22 20:04:30 +0000 UTC]
again great job the the storey was well put together. It works with those teasers you put at the begining
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trh7323 [2009-07-22 02:30:29 +0000 UTC]
You...my friend...definitely have the power!
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terrorhunter [2009-07-22 01:12:17 +0000 UTC]
i thought it was a wonderful story which gave us more insight as to how Natalie is as a person and I was wondering if you are going to do more with Taylor and his possible story.
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turboman500 In reply to terrorhunter [2009-07-22 09:36:37 +0000 UTC]
thank you for thr kind words ^_^, im not sure whatt i'll do though
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Blazbaros [2009-07-21 22:55:38 +0000 UTC]
My name's Taylor >.>
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sumcoolguy In reply to Blazbaros [2009-07-22 19:58:02 +0000 UTC]
wow realy thats my name
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sumcoolguy In reply to Blazbaros [2009-07-24 18:07:52 +0000 UTC]
OMG IT is also part of my nickname
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sumcoolguy In reply to Blazbaros [2009-07-24 21:29:44 +0000 UTC]
Nm BUT Taylor is my name so to bad for you
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turboman500 In reply to Blazbaros [2009-07-21 23:41:08 +0000 UTC]
only cause you'd come out on top in the end fool
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turboman500 In reply to Blazbaros [2009-07-25 11:01:31 +0000 UTC]
oh yea...thats right! i forgot lol
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turboman500 In reply to Karbo [2009-07-21 23:40:00 +0000 UTC]
it had the desired effect then ^_^ Thank you for your kind words
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lmjvenom01 [2009-07-21 22:50:46 +0000 UTC]
Finally we get to see the softer side of Natalie and its cool!!!
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turboman500 In reply to lmjvenom01 [2009-07-21 23:40:48 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! and it was definately a side that needed to be shown considering
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DeREXslayer [2009-07-21 22:17:59 +0000 UTC]
good god!! Me and Honda would freak if you put natalie in the sequel to me and him trying to find relina again which features relina, malika, crisis, and vivian......... You're not gonna put her in the story are you? 0.0
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turboman500 In reply to DeREXslayer [2009-07-21 22:27:29 +0000 UTC]
prolly not-natalie is abit worse for you 2 than relina...as in deadly worse lol
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DeREXslayer In reply to turboman500 [2009-07-21 23:16:57 +0000 UTC]
if you were to put her in the story, will she do horrible naughty things to me while Honda tries to fight relina?
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turboman500 In reply to DeREXslayer [2009-07-21 23:39:33 +0000 UTC]
either that or eat you on the spot...hard to tell..she varies too much
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DeREXslayer In reply to turboman500 [2009-07-22 03:50:21 +0000 UTC]
natalie would eat a 16 year old human size naga like me?! 0_0
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turboman500 In reply to DeREXslayer [2009-07-23 03:04:00 +0000 UTC]
theres alot of things natalie puts in her mouth that you're prolly better off not knowing lol
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DeREXslayer In reply to turboman500 [2009-07-23 15:44:37 +0000 UTC]
Honda: add her into the story, I wanna see what happens.
He's gonna get me killed for sure
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DeREXslayer In reply to turboman500 [2009-07-25 18:45:15 +0000 UTC]
just please dont add natalie in the story, I'm still a kid even though I'm a 16 year old naga
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