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Published: 2009-08-01 04:46:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 909; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 18
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*note* this story takes place after the next 2-part episode of Targeted! In which someone will be in charge of the bad girls, and Veran will end up being in charge of the good guys-with cameos still from other deviants when I do the series. The two main OC’s/Deviants that this series will feature are Myself/Turboman and Trh7323 (he‘s the lone ranger…you‘d have to know him to get why I did this )-mostly because rivalry of the protagonists makes any good survival story funny ^_^. Anyway, I’m going to give this a whirl while I continue the other series-lets see how it works.

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Nick and the Lone Ranger  stood at the ready as the sound of the police siren intensified. Behind them their charge waited as well for the inevitable fight. The abandoned facility had been chosen to keep any casualties down, and to give everyone the ability to fight at their maximum capabilities…

“He’ll come crashing through that door any moment now.” Tyler said as he looked over to Nick who smirked.

“Let him, I’ve been wanting to text out this exo-suit anyway. I really gotta find out where you’re getting this stuff.”

“I know a guy.” Tyler said with a shrug. “Be ready to take out that crazy assassin chick…the charges in those pistols should be able to hurt her defenses…and atleast incapacitate her. So we can put her back in the high security box she crawled out of.”

“Yea…just don’t take all the fun.” Nick replied as he took aim at the garage door in front of him.

Everything grew quiet suddenly, the sound of the siren stopped along with the sound of the engine. Both guys narrowed their eyes in expectation.  The sound of heels on the ground could be heard approaching the door suddenly. Tyler and Nick braced themselves as they heard a few sounds against the door, then the creaking and moaning sounds as a massive force began to push it from it’s hinges. The two barely managed to dive out the way-Tyler yanking the other with him as he moved-as the door came flying by where they were. Nick stood up, pistols at the ready as a slender silhouette appeared in the doorway. ..

“Boys I know you’re hiding in here…just give me ???? And I’ll be on my way without harming either of you-even Nick who should already be dead,” Krye said with a hint o sincerity

“You really think with all hand him over because you asked nicely?” Tyler replied as he stepped into the light.

No, not at all-but at least I can say I tried right?” She replied with a grin.  “I would like to know one thing before you die though.”

“Well, no one’s dead yet…so go ahead with your question.”

“How does it feel to be caught in the back fire of your own trap?” She mused before she burst into laughter.

Nick was about to answer with a clever retort when the wall beside Tyler erupted and a blurred form charged him. He barely had time brace as he and David rolled across the ground and stood up eyeing one another.

“So it’s true after all…explosion didn’t kill you?” Tyler said with a smirk.

“Far from it… I’d actually say it made some…improvements.” David replied cracking his neck some.

“Not enough to keep me from kicking your ass again.” Tyler replied as he leapt into tee air with a flying kick.

“Underestimation nearly cost me my life… I don’t plan to let you be so lucky.”

Despite the fact that all he had on was a pair of jeans, black biker boots, and a ripped black vest, David managed to surprise Lone Ranger with a counter attack that sent him flying across the room. Nick as about to help but Krye had already moved in for the kill, knocking his weapons away and leaving him to fight barehanded. With a grin she charged him again, attacking full on with an amazing display of her martial arts skills. S this continued in the back ground, David began to walk towards Tyler as he stood up, and before he righted himself-he took a punch squarely to the chest that sent him sliding back deeper into the abandoned facility. This time instead of walking, he began to run full on towards Tyler-who was ready for him this time. He leapt to his feet via summersault kick-which knocked David back some, before attacking with another roundhouse. The contact sent him spiraled to the side, where he quickly popped up and bum rushed Tyler through another door and into a wall; they never noticed the strange markings of the chamber they entered….

“It’s just you and me now…boy”.” Krye said as she began to circle Nick like a shark. “How do you want to die?”

“I hadn’t planned on that today…” Nick replied casually as he slowly reached behind himself.

“Ohm…bad move.” She said with a grin as she lashed out at him suddenly with a blade made of her own psychokinetic energy.

“Always carry a spare!” Nick replied with a grin as he blocked her attack with a beam saber of his own.

“You’re a smart one…but you still don’t stand a chance against me…. No human does!” She growled as she opened her hand to his chest and grinned.

“Oh shit…” He grumbled before the force of her blast knocked him back into a pile of old pipes and scrap metal.

“Too easy… Now…where is that little bastard ???? He has a date with destiny.” She mumbled as she looked around.

She had barely taken two steps when she heard a sound and quickly moved. She turned around to see ???? with a shocked expression, as he held onto the metal pipe he’d just missed her with.

“Bad move boy…you should have run-who knows…you might have prolonged your life another 5 or so minutes.” She said with a grin before she knocked him back with a small portion of her power.

As he scrambled to get up, he was kicked in the side hard and then kicked again by Krye who grinned sadistically the whole time.  He went to reach for the pipe, but she kicked it away then kicked him in the chest, sending him tumbling abit further away.  She sauntered over to him slowly and crouched down, lifting his head up gently ,and looking him in the eyes…

“How do you want to die today?” She asked with a sinister grin. “I can eat you…I can suck the energy out of your body until you’re nothing but an empty shell, I can break your scrawny little neck, or I can blast you. I’ll give you a moment to decide before I chose for you.”

“You’re…not going to get away…with this.” He grumbled defiantly looking her in the eyes.

“It’s so adorable when people think that…but humor me…what makes you think that?” She asked with a smile.

“Him…” He said pointing with a smirk.

Her eyes widened as she turned her head and saw Nick aiming at her with one of the old fire hoses the building had. She was about to grab her prisoner when her let loose with the powerful stream of water which sent her flying back up the hallway and into a strange control panel. She completely smashed it upon impact, but that didn’t seem to stop it from activating the strange machinery in the warehouse. When she regained her senses, she quickly put up a shield to block the water, but turned around when she heard the door shut on the nearby chamber. She scrambled up and ran to the chamber door when she heard David and Tyler’s voices coming from within for  a moment, before they suddenly stopped….

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“What the hell is that noise…” David asked as he heard the door shut and the chamber began to activate.

“You got me…you’re supposed to be the evil one…you mean you didn’t have this planned?” Tyler asked.

“I might want to terminate you...but why would I risk my own neck to kill pond scum like you.” David growled back.

“That’s a good point I suppose…but if you didn’t do it…then who did…and what the hell is going on.”

“I don’t know…perhaps we should post pone this little match until we get out of here…I cant claim victory over you if we’re both dead.”

“So then it’s a truce?”

“Yea…for NOW…after we get out of this thing…you die.”

“Yea sure thing…” Tyler replied as he looked to the door. “Hey…the door is gone…how can that be…”

“You’re shitting me…what the hell is this place…what is this thing we‘re in.”

“I don’t know…but…it’s not killing us…I just feel funny…”

“I…argh!” David yelped as he dropped down to one knee. “What the hell was that?! I just lost….all connections at once…every satellite…uplink point….all of it…gone…”

“What are you talking about…?” Tyler asked abit concerned.

“It’s a long story…”

“Tell me when we get out of here….the door is back…” Tyler replied as he cautiously moved over to it.

“It’s your fault anyway…you may as well find out….holy….shit…” David stopped as a whole new round of data began to come in. “This… this can’t be right!” He growled as he went and knocked the door open.

“What are you talking about I-….wow…something tells me we’re not in Kansas anymore…” Tyler replied as he looked out into the clearing, only to see lush jungle everywhere.

“I hope you know where to get some damn slippers from then.” David said as he stepped out and began to look around. “Cause we’re going to need them and a bloody miracle.”

“I thought I was the impulsive one…” he replied as he followed suit. “You know…if it weren’t totally impossible…and highly unlikely…I’d almost swear we’re on another world…in another dimension or something…because I’ve never seen anything like this on earth.”

“My scanners have more than 100 reasons you might be right…” David said as he backed towards Tyler cautiously.

“What are you talking about…I have a scanner in my helmet too…I’m not getting anything at all.” He grumbled.

“Yours must be on the fritz then….here…perhaps a visual.” David replied as he turned around and his right eye glowed bright blue.

As Tyler watched on, a 3d holographic image formed showing the clearing they were in, along with everything around it as a hologram. There were 2 small yellow figures in the center of the image, standing next to an image of a crumpled structure-which was identical to what the around them. Tyler was just about to ask what was the point, when David made a motion and the image spun to an area just outside the clearing revealing a massive red image. A few moments of refreshing the scanner definition and the red object began to take shape on the image. Both guys’ jaws dropped when it was finished. The image according to the scale of everything else would have made the object in question easily over 80 ft tall,  and according to it’s features…a naga.

“No…friggin’ way…there’s just no way I’m stuck here with you.” David growled.

“I feel the same way…but…if that’s true…it depends on who it is as to how severe our situation is.” Tyler replied. “Remember I did write a survival guide on DA about this…”

“Yea I know, but I already checked local data...sightings…old memories of art and other archives…and we’re totally fucked if we don’t get out of here…like right NOW.” David replied as he began to back away from the direction the unseen object was.

“You already know who it is?” He asked as he began to follow suit.

David was just about to answer when their unseen watcher burst into the clearing with a big cheery smile on her beautiful face. She was perhaps the most beautiful woman either of them had ever laid eyes on-least her human half was anyway. She had beautiful long and blonde hair, dazzling blue eyes, and a beautiful smiling face. Her snake half was covered in beautiful and bright teal green scales, with large golden scales on her under belly. She was also pretty well endowed and totally nude to boot. She smiled and waved at the two…

“Hello!” Crisis said with a big grin, as she eye the two confused men.

“This…is going to be long day…” David groaned.

“What makes you say that?”

GROOOOOOOOWWWWWWLLLLLLLL….

“That…”

“Oops…sorry…my tummy is telling me to put something in it…and you two are right here…soooo.”

“Running would be a good idea…” Tyler said under his breath.

“For once I agree with you…” David replied as the two bolted.

“Ohm games AND lunch! This is gonna be fun!” Crisis said with an even bigger grin as she went after them…

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Comments: 25

CrisisOperations [2013-01-26 00:27:23 +0000 UTC]

Nice, i love how you use deviants as your characters

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turboman500 In reply to CrisisOperations [2013-02-07 17:50:07 +0000 UTC]

thanks - it makes for rather interesting scenes

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trh7323 [2009-08-04 03:26:26 +0000 UTC]

You freaking suck...you really are trying to kill me!!!

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turboman500 In reply to trh7323 [2009-08-04 04:47:18 +0000 UTC]

nooo....I -was- trying to kill you...now Crisis IS trying to kill you ^_^

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trh7323 In reply to turboman500 [2009-08-04 17:38:14 +0000 UTC]

You wrote her to try and kill me...just you wait...I will mindcontrol your malika to get you!

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turboman500 In reply to trh7323 [2009-08-04 17:44:49 +0000 UTC]

she wouldn't dare ^_^ she knows who feeds her, keeps her sexed, and got her someone special

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trh7323 In reply to turboman500 [2009-08-05 04:18:29 +0000 UTC]

My powers exceed her loyalties!

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turboman500 In reply to trh7323 [2009-08-05 05:48:23 +0000 UTC]

riiiight

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trh7323 In reply to turboman500 [2009-08-05 20:32:20 +0000 UTC]

Just you wait...I have a couple stories almost finished...when I post those...you are belly food!

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turboman500 In reply to trh7323 [2009-08-06 00:38:59 +0000 UTC]

i eagerly await you

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trh7323 In reply to turboman500 [2009-08-06 03:26:25 +0000 UTC]

You fool...you rush to your doom!!!

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turboman500 In reply to trh7323 [2009-08-06 11:56:38 +0000 UTC]

a little doom never hurt anyone...besides...what doesn't send you to the next dimension...makes you stronger

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timing2 [2009-08-02 01:16:24 +0000 UTC]

An assassin taken out by a fire hose - I'm not sure that move is officially sanctioned! You're lucky they used it before being transported to Felarya, otherwise I would have to site you for breaking canon.

J/k - That was a truly bizzare preview. I had to laugh at the DA survival guide comment. Anybody who tries to go by that thing is doomed. I was actually hoping those two would wind up in a less popular area of Felarya, but since this is a preview I'll wait and see where it ends up.

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turboman500 In reply to timing2 [2009-08-02 01:19:25 +0000 UTC]

^_^ well i figured landing on the outskirts of Crisis' territory would get the point of urgency across, and put them into a hairy situation almost immediately. It'll get alot worse in the reg story though lol

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timing2 In reply to turboman500 [2009-08-02 01:58:14 +0000 UTC]

Worse, eh? I can only imagine.

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turboman500 In reply to timing2 [2009-08-04 04:45:55 +0000 UTC]

hehehe

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Karbo [2009-08-01 09:59:03 +0000 UTC]

Yay Crisis
Can't wait to see what will happens next

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turboman500 In reply to Karbo [2009-08-01 12:47:54 +0000 UTC]

i figured there wasn't a better greeter than her ^_^ she's still one of my favs

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VeranForscythe [2009-08-01 06:10:13 +0000 UTC]

Well, you kinda said who I was in the Note part anyway. Go for it. It doesn't bother me.

Great preview and I'm anxious for the real thing.

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turboman500 In reply to VeranForscythe [2009-08-01 12:46:57 +0000 UTC]

oky doky ^_^ i kinda thought i had, but ok...thanks it makes writing easier

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DeREXslayer [2009-08-01 05:03:57 +0000 UTC]

can't wait till the actual story, it must be hard having to cooperate with your enemy in order to stay alive

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turboman500 In reply to DeREXslayer [2009-08-01 12:47:27 +0000 UTC]

ohhh yea lol we're always at each others throats in a rival sort of way

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DeREXslayer In reply to turboman500 [2009-08-01 17:58:01 +0000 UTC]

I see

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turboman500 In reply to DeREXslayer [2009-08-04 04:45:33 +0000 UTC]

u will see

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DeREXslayer In reply to turboman500 [2009-08-04 05:54:32 +0000 UTC]

ok

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