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Turn-Back-The-Clock — Dreams
Published: 2010-11-25 16:22:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 724; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 2
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Description Who says?
Who says I can't dance in the rain,
Can't reach for the stars?
(Gravity can't hold me down, now.)
Can't live like it's my last day.

A dreamer.
That's what I am.
I belive I can fly,
I can do anything, anything.

Why should I?
Let them tear me down,
Try to tell me my dreams
Aren't going to happen.
They're just simple,
Never pushing limits.
They don't know the joy,
In jumping,
And never falling back down.

I roll the dice,
Cause if you don't
Push limits,
You'll never go past them.

Do you know how it feels,
To be as free as a bird,
As tame as a wild flower?

If I want to do it,
I can do it.
If only in my dreams.
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Comments: 15

ShoeLaceFishy [2010-11-28 19:36:24 +0000 UTC]

<3

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blueyoshilvr42 [2010-11-26 04:44:04 +0000 UTC]

I love it I especially love the part about flying

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Spuffy12 [2010-11-26 02:47:54 +0000 UTC]

Lovely job!

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Turn-Back-The-Clock In reply to Spuffy12 [2010-11-26 03:51:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Spuffy12 In reply to Turn-Back-The-Clock [2010-11-26 04:27:34 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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GIANTGIRL [2010-11-26 01:33:21 +0000 UTC]

this is wonderful! I find myself holding my breath as I read this poem

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Turn-Back-The-Clock In reply to GIANTGIRL [2010-11-26 01:46:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! That means so much to me considering I'm an amateur.

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GIANTGIRL In reply to Turn-Back-The-Clock [2010-11-26 01:58:20 +0000 UTC]

I found your style to seem so free and proud, I like this, it flowed it wasn't something that felt as if you thought it out and planned it (In a good way) It was like, it just..happened

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Turn-Back-The-Clock In reply to GIANTGIRL [2010-11-26 03:52:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! That's actually my style. I'm sitting there at a blank screen, try to dig out a memory of mine, and then I just let the words flow.

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GIANTGIRL In reply to Turn-Back-The-Clock [2010-11-26 12:38:54 +0000 UTC]

Thats a great way to write, if you try to hard, normally people can tell if its forced You're very good, continue to do well

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DestinyChick [2010-11-25 18:00:57 +0000 UTC]

Grammer issues aside good job (:
Flying is simple, just jump and miss the ground

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Turn-Back-The-Clock In reply to DestinyChick [2010-11-25 18:06:25 +0000 UTC]

I'll fix those grammatical errors.
Thank you!

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DestinyChick In reply to Turn-Back-The-Clock [2010-11-25 20:16:17 +0000 UTC]

No worries

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CarlaKoala [2010-11-25 17:07:34 +0000 UTC]

I really like this poem, first in a while I've seen on here that jumped out at me. The only advice I can think of to give you is to keep an eye on your grammar - ie, their/they're etc. Good work!

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Turn-Back-The-Clock In reply to CarlaKoala [2010-11-25 18:05:59 +0000 UTC]

Ahh! As I'm rereading this I'm quite embarresed. I wrote this on my phone, at 2 A.M., so. Haha! Thank you!

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