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TwiggyTeeluck — Learning to Fly

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Description The model is my friend, Melissa.
Taken and edited by me.


© 2009 Twiggy Teeluck

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Comments: 20

dagger3000 [2009-07-31 18:28:24 +0000 UTC]

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Several things in this photograph work great together. Although there is a lot of texture and it would be easy to get overwhelmed with the plants, the light, and of course the model, everything fits in perfectly. The ground has a lot going on, but it's not overt enough to draw too much attention to itself. Likewise, the model isn't overpowered by the light so much that we loose her in the glare. In fact, the glare itself is more dynamic than most photos I've seen. It was an actual shape, almost as though it's reaching out to the model.

The colors also blend wonderfully together, and that little spot of green from the bushes helps to fill in what might have been a blank spot in the image. Symbolically, I think of the model working towards the light while the plants on the opposite side likewise use the sun to grow and nourish themselves. The symmetry is really quite beautiful.

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Zimmrie-Kanoah [2009-06-24 06:33:59 +0000 UTC]

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A lot of your photos center around the train tracks so I'm not entirely sure how original this really is. That one detail aside I find the photo to be moving and inspirational.

The meaning behind the title holds a lot of significance to me as it can mean learning to fly after a great fall. Moving on to something greater or better beyond the moment you are stuck in.

The light coming from in front of her is very powerful imagery, and the train tracks seem to pull the imagination towards the possibility that one can indeed move on, forward, past any unpleasantness and find a better, happier place to be. Into the light and love of a brighter, newer day and future.

Wonderfully done and the angle you chose to do it in was a wise choice indeed. It wouldn't hold nearly as much meaning any other way. Keep up the wonderful work and sharing it with us watchers.

~Zim

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Maby8 [2009-06-23 03:53:42 +0000 UTC]

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Instead of critiquing upon the focus, the color, the hue, the blah, blah, blah; I will instead give you my impression (since I claim to know nothing of the prior).

I think that this long walk along that thin white line serves as vision filled imagery. I get the impression that this, Melissa, is heading somewhere. The bright light, to me, is so powerful, so intense. Such light exists in all, but in this case it seems to represent the future.

This of course, takes me to my next consideration, of where that future is and where that future may lay in the vision and originality of imagination in your art? I suppose only you can answer that question.

Unless of course, the light is the end all, be all. If that is the case, the photo is perfect.

-Truthfully,

-Maby

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TwiggyTeeluck In reply to Maby8 [2009-06-23 04:14:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the critique.

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Maby8 In reply to TwiggyTeeluck [2009-06-23 04:40:50 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome. I see that you very involved with DA so I wanted to share my thoughts with you.

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karsac28 [2011-11-23 02:31:23 +0000 UTC]

Amazing, I love the sunlight.

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BriceChallamel [2010-06-07 19:48:21 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful image, very direct and striking. Also, interesting how many photo titles we have in common with very different photographs though... [link]

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kira-meki [2009-12-29 07:15:45 +0000 UTC]

The lighting is absolutely lovely.

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JOe-AWESOMEness [2009-11-26 15:59:46 +0000 UTC]

wow. love it.
breathtaking image. <3

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andrewsgirl123 [2009-09-21 23:56:48 +0000 UTC]

This is beautufil! the lighting is very awesome

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catsrule10 [2009-08-23 15:20:28 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful, you should check out this song. [link]

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4dreamer [2009-07-23 16:14:35 +0000 UTC]

awesomeness!!



the angle, composition, light, and colours are perfect..
truly a masterpiece.. ^^

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TaylorHarmon [2009-07-18 22:02:31 +0000 UTC]

I've featured this here [link]

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devianb [2009-06-22 04:01:35 +0000 UTC]

Wow that is a bright spot.

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Asereth557 [2009-06-21 19:50:16 +0000 UTC]

I love the colors of this photo

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Yankee84 [2009-06-21 18:07:06 +0000 UTC]

run to do sun or away god picture...

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FanArtistik [2009-06-21 04:45:05 +0000 UTC]

This looks great, interesting picture, for me is a positive way of face the life. Good work.

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mikopol [2009-06-21 00:24:46 +0000 UTC]

The title of Your picture reminds me one of Pink Floyd songs

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SiddyQ [2009-06-21 00:14:51 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful shot! I love shooting into the sun but it's so hard to get good ones, this one is wonderful.

Any chance you would share some tips for editing? Your photos are beautiful and I would totally love to know how you make your photo's pop!

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etherealdelirium [2009-06-20 22:45:49 +0000 UTC]

I love that this still has a lot of darkness and contrast in it despite the sunlight. It's a beautiful picture and a beautiful title to boot.

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