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Published: 2014-05-25 07:49:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 350; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 0
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Description And I return here
to this world of words
where emotions run in black
dripping down sheets of white
a dark ichor that leaks
seeps from eyes blinded
dead to the purity of sight

And I shall remain here
in this land of linguistics
mouth full of ambrosia
bitter nothings to nourish
flourish in my immortality
tongue stuck to the roof of reality
dried yet rasping and boorish
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TwistedAnger - Nevertheless
Comments: 11

vikingjon [2014-06-09 17:52:46 +0000 UTC]

The substance in your poetry has never been in doubt.

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Daiichi [2014-05-26 13:34:24 +0000 UTC]

Your visuals are amazing. They remind me of a greek or classical poet . Shakespeare or Dante...It may seem silly, but that's the weight your words carry with me, and I've always loved it.

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TwistedAnger In reply to Daiichi [2014-05-27 05:05:33 +0000 UTC]

you are still full of sweetness, thank you so much as the Greek influence is there in this piece and I'm glad you recognized it. Thank you for always supporting me even when all I write is tragedy  

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Daiichi In reply to TwistedAnger [2014-05-29 02:23:54 +0000 UTC]

Historically people find and learn more from tragedies than they do from comedies. But in any case, as you're a poet, knowing that you write from experience, your bravery is impressive and your view is so well written that I can't help but be thankful for it. I'm glad you returned and as always I hope that your world is happy and peaceful.

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TwistedAnger In reply to Daiichi [2014-06-02 12:09:51 +0000 UTC]

If my world was ever happy and peaceful you would be the first one I told about it  

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Daiichi In reply to TwistedAnger [2014-06-09 09:40:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! That makes me happy, because of course it's all I want for you ><. I'm so sappy aren't I? But I have found that your take on the world proves that you care enough not just to observe but to live, and not just to keep your feelings to yourself but to share..And there was a time when I wrote to share my world because I felt that my view was important...I don't think that so much anymore ><. <3 There will always be a place for your keen eye, both here and elsewhere.

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Y-O-D-H [2014-05-25 21:03:28 +0000 UTC]

Your words bleed from the screen and clot behind my eyes

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TwistedAnger In reply to Y-O-D-H [2014-05-25 21:07:57 +0000 UTC]

it is good to see your words again hun Hope all has been good with you

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notwriter [2014-05-25 14:29:37 +0000 UTC]

Nice to see you back and nice to see you haven't lost your talent!!

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TwistedAnger In reply to notwriter [2014-05-25 20:18:47 +0000 UTC]

thank you for saying so. Good to see your sweet comments again  

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notwriter In reply to TwistedAnger [2014-05-26 09:55:11 +0000 UTC]

No problem, njust happy to see your dark art again.

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