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Published: 2010-08-01 20:24:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 10575; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 11
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Description insects crawl through innards
strewn across a dirty concrete floor
eating away what remains of all his pretty girls
he loves to slice, to chop and break
to hear the screams from those he takes
he dances with their corpses
he dances with his steel
dancing under dismembered parts
hung from the ceiling with artistic zeal
walls dripping red with arterial spray
beautiful splatter painting, a morbid display
he sings to them of love and passion
beneath their skin hides his true desires
those sublimely supple organs, the sweet meat
kidneys, livers and hearts that still beat
fresh or roasted over open fires
drive him into ecstasy when they touch his lips
women are tasty, outside but especially in
softer and more palatable then tough men
butcher, killer
eater of the bodies strung up by their feet
throats slashed, hung to bleed
by the dozens they hang, he dances while he feeds
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Comments: 48

LokoMotives [2011-07-18 16:11:34 +0000 UTC]

Extremely captivating. I'm a horror fan put also a fan of poetry.
I espescialy love your poem

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TwistedAnger In reply to LokoMotives [2011-07-20 02:21:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for the love and the add...horror poetry tends to be my favorite kind to write

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SolusFallenwolf [2011-04-21 03:03:00 +0000 UTC]

mmmm.... om nom nom lol

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TwistedAnger In reply to SolusFallenwolf [2011-04-21 06:21:22 +0000 UTC]

lol Reading through it now makes me want to edit it in places Thanks for the fave hun

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SolusFallenwolf In reply to TwistedAnger [2011-04-21 14:46:16 +0000 UTC]

lol you're not allowed to edit old work, only strive to make better stuff... that way we can see where you'ev been, and where you're at now in writing ... and while i do say i like the newer ones better, this is gonna hold a nice place in my heart as a wonderful lil tidbit of epicness

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TwistedAnger In reply to SolusFallenwolf [2011-04-21 20:02:49 +0000 UTC]

You're too sweet!!

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SolusFallenwolf In reply to TwistedAnger [2011-04-21 22:25:26 +0000 UTC]

my dad knew i was going to be a sourpuss so he dipped in me in sugar lol....

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TwistedAnger In reply to SolusFallenwolf [2011-04-21 22:27:50 +0000 UTC]

Sugar cover sourpuss...sounds like a weird kids candy LOL

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SolusFallenwolf In reply to TwistedAnger [2011-04-21 23:14:13 +0000 UTC]

lol.... but i don't want to be eaten

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TwistedAnger In reply to SolusFallenwolf [2011-04-21 23:16:53 +0000 UTC]

Well then you shouldn't be so sweet!!!

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SolusFallenwolf In reply to TwistedAnger [2011-04-22 00:18:40 +0000 UTC]

lmao... ok... -washes away all the sugar and tries to be a sourpuss-

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TwistedAnger In reply to SolusFallenwolf [2011-04-22 00:22:58 +0000 UTC]

LOL! >_<

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SolusFallenwolf In reply to TwistedAnger [2011-04-22 02:31:29 +0000 UTC]

yah lol.... > o <

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Eremitik [2010-10-03 11:25:08 +0000 UTC]

The rhyming of this makes it all the more dark and fun.
I dont see to many "true" horror pieces here but this is one of them. Very well done!

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TwistedAnger In reply to Eremitik [2010-10-05 08:20:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I love writing "horror" lol it is very freeing

you may want to sneak a peek at
[link] Fate Thief
[link] Ugly Goddess

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Eremitik In reply to TwistedAnger [2010-10-06 03:09:14 +0000 UTC]

I do have a horror type poem in progress but like typical writers, being in progress means I started it but havnt gotten around to finish it yet. I really should

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TwistedAnger In reply to Eremitik [2010-10-06 03:40:05 +0000 UTC]

my newest "horror" type poem just went up today I enjoy writing them...they are a release in a way...

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deaths-slave-1 [2010-08-23 10:30:05 +0000 UTC]

this one remainds me of a dream i once had, or should i say nightmare. the dream was taken place in a butcher's shop and the only thing i could smell was blood and rotting flesh. you have great skills at writing poems, you write in a way that allows us to visulize everything with perfect clarity!

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TwistedAnger In reply to deaths-slave-1 [2010-08-27 02:27:11 +0000 UTC]

Oooo I like vivid dreams like that....Thank you so much for enjoying this piece and I apologize for the delayed response I was on vacation

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deaths-slave-1 In reply to TwistedAnger [2010-08-31 08:10:06 +0000 UTC]

i like them too! you are most welcome, my dear! Oooo, where did you go?

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TwistedAnger In reply to deaths-slave-1 [2010-08-31 12:23:44 +0000 UTC]

St. Louis Missouri

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deaths-slave-1 In reply to TwistedAnger [2010-09-03 23:39:24 +0000 UTC]

...never heard of it, but sounds like you had a good time^^

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TwistedAnger In reply to deaths-slave-1 [2010-09-04 10:37:55 +0000 UTC]

Mid-western united states had a very good time thank you

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deaths-slave-1 In reply to TwistedAnger [2010-09-11 03:13:31 +0000 UTC]

lol, i knew that^^ great to know!

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lcipher42 [2010-08-03 22:02:38 +0000 UTC]

Sweet...it's like a Poppy Z. Brite story condensed to the good parts...

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TwistedAnger In reply to lcipher42 [2010-08-03 22:14:09 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it and I guess I better start reading some Poppy Z. Brite now

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Eremitik In reply to TwistedAnger [2010-10-03 11:17:03 +0000 UTC]

Check Poppy's earlier works. Her newer stuff has not been as good. But one of my fav writers. Also check Kathe Koja- same recommendation, earlier is better. Her style is stream of conciousness. Just fantastic-

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TwistedAnger In reply to Eremitik [2010-10-05 08:15:14 +0000 UTC]

Will do!! I love finding "new-to-me" stuff to read Thanks for the suggestion

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ChristCorpse13 [2010-08-02 18:05:38 +0000 UTC]

HA! I dig this like a grave...very serial!

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TwistedAnger In reply to ChristCorpse13 [2010-08-02 20:08:05 +0000 UTC]

Very glad ya do thanks for liking it

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ChristCorpse13 In reply to TwistedAnger [2010-08-02 23:18:07 +0000 UTC]

no thank you for writing it...very nice, very nice!

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Nex-Umbra [2010-08-02 12:11:29 +0000 UTC]

very cannibal corpse

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TwistedAnger In reply to Nex-Umbra [2010-08-02 20:09:04 +0000 UTC]

LOL one of my favorite bands....they are on my writing playlist at the moment...Good call

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Nex-Umbra In reply to TwistedAnger [2010-08-03 07:31:17 +0000 UTC]

indeed, i could tell, lol, nice work btw

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TwistedAnger In reply to Nex-Umbra [2010-08-03 07:38:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Belatucradus [2010-08-02 08:10:50 +0000 UTC]

awesome, very brutal and powerful.
These remind me of Autopsy's lyrics, very gory.

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TwistedAnger In reply to Belatucradus [2010-08-02 08:13:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you m'dear and thank you for the fave on it

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Belatucradus In reply to TwistedAnger [2010-08-02 08:17:33 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome, and it's really like brutal Death Metal.

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TwistedAnger In reply to Belatucradus [2010-08-02 20:50:30 +0000 UTC]

mmmm metal....

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x-xXNevermoreXx-x [2010-08-01 21:00:47 +0000 UTC]

Morbidly wonderful!
You're so amazing.

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TwistedAnger In reply to x-xXNevermoreXx-x [2010-08-01 21:03:53 +0000 UTC]

*giggles* Thank you so much hun

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x-xXNevermoreXx-x In reply to TwistedAnger [2010-08-01 21:04:32 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Fellgleaming [2010-08-01 20:48:44 +0000 UTC]

Amazingly brutal, this is magnificent.

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TwistedAnger In reply to Fellgleaming [2010-08-01 20:57:20 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks I like brutal

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Fellgleaming In reply to TwistedAnger [2010-08-01 21:00:37 +0000 UTC]

indeed, the more brutal the better

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TwistedAnger In reply to Fellgleaming [2010-08-01 21:04:12 +0000 UTC]

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Lady-Achika [2010-08-01 20:39:00 +0000 UTC]

I always look forward to seeing new artwork from you! ^^ Grisly but lyrical. How do you work such magic?

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TwistedAnger In reply to Lady-Achika [2010-08-01 20:56:40 +0000 UTC]

This one started with a dream and the word innards *laughs* who knows where it comes from Thank you so much m'dear.

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