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Published: 2018-02-10 05:00:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 270; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 0
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Description Gravel thick, slick with spit
Hate rips from your vocal chords
Cacophonous in your rage
It sings to me with sweet notes of pain
Ringing red in my head your doomsday refrain
I twist the knife just to hear it again
That pure articulation of expressive torment
And you lament
your mouth a gaping vent for superheated hatred
Allowing me to bask in the fire of your discontent
Seething and discordant
I do love the sound of your voice
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Comments: 12

Daiichi [2018-02-12 22:56:05 +0000 UTC]

Your rhythm is awesome here. I would have loved to hear this live, slam style.

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TwistedAnger In reply to Daiichi [2018-02-12 23:43:03 +0000 UTC]

The only time I performed any of my poetry was at my brother's service...lol I don't do public speaking

Thank you for enjoying this one just finished my newest one a minute ago this poem a day thing is rough I took yesterday off to give my brain a break lol

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Daiichi In reply to TwistedAnger [2018-02-13 03:44:45 +0000 UTC]

You're doing better than I. I have two half-finished poems so far ><. You gotta do what you gotta do. 

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TwistedAnger In reply to Daiichi [2018-02-13 04:31:50 +0000 UTC]

Grind until you find it friend. 😂

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Daiichi In reply to TwistedAnger [2018-02-16 16:24:51 +0000 UTC]

Finally finding it

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TwistedAnger In reply to Daiichi [2018-02-16 23:48:14 +0000 UTC]

Yay!!

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IAmTheFortress [2018-02-11 15:36:14 +0000 UTC]

I love it, it's so sadistic and the ending line is perfect!

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TwistedAnger In reply to IAmTheFortress [2018-02-12 22:31:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Glad you enjoyed it

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silentflood [2018-02-11 00:29:07 +0000 UTC]

Another good one.

"It sings to me with sweet notes of pain." was especially well done.

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TwistedAnger In reply to silentflood [2018-02-11 07:15:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you glad you liked it I feel like I'm starting to knock some of the dust off for sure

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silentflood In reply to TwistedAnger [2018-02-11 19:17:55 +0000 UTC]

You are!

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TwistedAnger In reply to silentflood [2018-02-12 22:33:47 +0000 UTC]

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