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Ty-Chou — Flowery Yuki and Kyo
Published: 2005-06-10 08:13:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 1334; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 141
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Both sides I drew for a Fruits Basket music video I'm working on. I'm not sure how much I like these pics any more, but , whatever. I guess they're okay. But I think I could do better. Honest Critiques welcome.Related content
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Hey i like this picture. Kyo's face looks slightly out of proportion and his neck looks a little bit too thick. And his arms are just a little off.... Yuki looks really good though and either way this is a good drawing XD
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I really like this picture. 
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That's so cool. Kyo's my fav. Yuki reminds me of Subaru from Tokyo Babylon and X ^__^ Hehe.
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*drool* I luv Kyo sooooo much!!!!!!!! *drools more* 
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Love the pic- but, I guess one this is that.. Kyou's shoulders could be a bit broader- and that's where the rest of his body got messed up. He looks *super* anemic. He's thin, but he's not a girl XD Also, his neck's a little bit *too* long.....Otherwise, his face is alright.
Another thing, is Yuki's shoulder's weren't drawn proportionally correct to eachother, even if he's on an angle. It looks wrong.
That's... all I can *really* say is *immediately* wrong with this picture though. <=3
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I totally agree with all of that. This definitely wasn't the best pic I've ever done. Thanks for the honesty. I'll keep those points in mind as I keep drawing. ^.^
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no problem. XD I think I have some odd quircks in my drawings that I just.. can't figure out. (And I've felt stuck in my art for a year so... it's really agitating n.n0) When I get the chance to help other artists, I like doing so, 'cause then they won't *have* to be stuck.
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*nods* And there's always some things that, no matter how much you look at the pic, you will never catch. You always need an extra set of eyes to help you get. So It's nice to have someone who will be honest and help you out. ^.^
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oh thats so cool!!! Yuki and Kyo are the best^.^ i love this pic and i have to fav^.^
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