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TygerStKuan — Living Alone
Published: 2004-01-17 20:20:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 112; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 8
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I am no sisterI have no brother
I live my life alone
Alone I live to ponder.
I do not know, weather to live
Or to die…
I am not to choose
And so in the corner, I cry
But what do I cry for?
Do I cry for a home?
Or do I cry, to be free?
As freely as I write this poem
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the first stanza was beautifully free,
I do not know, weather to live
Or to die…
I am not to choose
And so in the corner, I cry
this: beautifully rhymed, I could tell it was done more anturally rather than forced, but the third . . . meh, it was alright, but I would keep it not-rhyming by changing the last line if I were you . . . the mood is stilll vivid, though, and the feelings still get across beautifully
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