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Published: 2016-03-27 13:49:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 2071; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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zdlkfjgkldfj;sdg Soooo apparently even though I own Photoshop my computer deems it a trial because I can't find my fucking keys. So I couldn't use it to crop the image nor add any of my usual lighting/contrast effects but here it is, another character of mine. I've got another twenty or so drawn up but they may be lost forever ;-; Still tabletless, and apparently programless, so this is how it's gonna be for a bit.I'm fixing to open up commission-work, so if any of you wanna help me out send some new watchers my way!
04/02/2016 edit: much better
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Yes!! Fuck yes!! Hell yes!! Finally YAAAAAAAASSS!!! I've been looking forward to when you'd post critiques again. Okay enough fanboying time to get in to this.
The vision is a 4.5 It's very well visible but his right eye looks a like t's kinda not there somehow. Oh well that's just me.
The Originality is a big old epic 5. This guy is just pure creativity mixed with warrior stereotypes. Bulked up check, tough demeanor check, scars check, awesome factor check!
The technique is a 4. The body over all is great but Even the grosteque parts of him are perfectly drawn too. But like I said earlier his looks like it's not there and it looks like a part of his left shoulder is missing. Not to mention color!! I know you don't color all your works but maybe one everyone now and then would be great.
And the impact is another solid 4. Don get me wrong the barbaric look is great on this man. But there's something missing to him. Maybe sandals would have been a nice touch but oh well I'm not the artist.
Your art makes me crave critiques dammit. I wanna see what other amazing shit you're gonna make! Keep it coming!!
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I always enjoy reading your critiques.
He's got a shiner, and I thought it wasn't very clear myself.
I'm always improving my technique! I'm not sure how I wanna do it yet, but I am planning on using some color in my future works.
This is the first concept image of Daango and I do plan on updating his outfit at some point in the near future. Maybe then he'll have shoes of some kind (?). Aaj and Guerri are both barefooted for-the-most-part, so maybe Daango needs to break away from the gang.
I'll have another couple posted this week I'm sure.
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Good to hear, always glad to throw in my imput.
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WintersRead can we go to post orifice tomorrow please
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o yes please
also you need my new address
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GOT IT ON FB THANKΒ
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Yeah, he's a "tribal warrior" of sorts
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His attire gave it away.
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Daango is a character in one of my books I really enjoy. He's very headstrong in a not-so-helpful way.
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Which is? I'm willing to listen.
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Ya asking about the book or the character?
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Both please, I'm bored.
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The story is a series of books I'm writing, the working title being "Bloodline" (yeh, generic I know, but I needed something to slap on it while it's a WIP). Bloodline is a fantasy pastiche littered with transgressive elements whose foundation is built upon the characters's stories that make up the book's world.Β Mohfheriik is a world where dougen, a largely misunderstood race known for their warrior-rich culture and strange magics, and humans, normal as we know them, coexist. All dougen seek to earn citizenship in the grand city of Mesttodraaga, the largest dougen nation in Mohfheriik. Zyyrake, our protagonist, is a citizen of Mesttodraaga - but his "lofty" home comes at a hefty price. Peoples are conquered, crimes are committed, war is raged, and a false god-king is conjured up over the course of Zyyrake's story as he tries to maintain a peaceful lifestyle.
Daango is a member of a dougen tribe that may as well be anarchists - the Ne'Nett. The Ne'Nett have a sordid history, and maintain that Mesttodraaga is a city that breeds nothing but evil for all who are involved in Mesttodraaga's well-being. Guerri may well be their tribe's leader, but Daango takes it upon himself to instigate fights he believes will further the Ne'Nett's goals: the fall of Mesttodraaga. Β
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Man that's a interesting idea. Hmmm I might check this out.
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I'm about 60% done with the content of the first book
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Tell me when you finish it.
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