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Published: 2008-06-20 21:13:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 280; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 5
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Description These pictures of my past,
A past I never really had.
They do not remind me,
They only make me sad.

I wonder what I used to have,
I wonder what I’ve lost.
All has faded now,
And yet I do not know the cost.

I see smiles in all the pictures,
I see smiles in all content.
And I wonder what those smiles were for,
And I wonder what they meant.

I wish I could have known,
what I used to smile about.
I wish I could have known,
Why I used to laugh and shout.

But maybe there is good in this,
Maybe this is right.
For now I have a clean slate,
A new chance to find a light.
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Comments: 21

whydoidothiseveryday [2008-06-21 16:23:42 +0000 UTC]

ooo very nice, good luck with the contest, i dont know if i will enter yet...
x

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tyrannusBE In reply to whydoidothiseveryday [2008-06-21 19:54:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks...
Why not?

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whydoidothiseveryday In reply to tyrannusBE [2008-06-21 19:57:48 +0000 UTC]

dunno, depends ow busy i will be lol
x

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tyrannusBE In reply to whydoidothiseveryday [2008-06-21 20:09:18 +0000 UTC]

Busy? Surely nor right after exams?

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whydoidothiseveryday In reply to tyrannusBE [2008-06-21 20:12:45 +0000 UTC]

yeah, i probably meant lazy... lol
x

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tyrannusBE In reply to whydoidothiseveryday [2008-06-21 20:21:55 +0000 UTC]

There we are. I'm not going to judge you, 'cause I'd be a total pot.

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ryfvs [2008-06-21 00:41:16 +0000 UTC]

You don't have to have amnesia to really feel this message ^__^

No matter how many scrap books and photos are kept, the past just can't be recaptured...

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tyrannusBE In reply to ryfvs [2008-06-21 10:21:52 +0000 UTC]

That's true. Amnesia is just the extreme, outlarged version of it. Glad you get that.

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ryfvs In reply to tyrannusBE [2008-06-21 14:51:23 +0000 UTC]

mmhhmm You're welcome, tyran

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godatesomesatan [2008-06-20 22:52:26 +0000 UTC]

I like it a lot. The second to last stanza is awkward, since you seem to like crit.

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tyrannusBE In reply to godatesomesatan [2008-06-21 10:18:04 +0000 UTC]

It is? Thanks for the constuctive crit. And yes, I do like it when I recieve crit. It gives me a chance to improve on myself.

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godatesomesatan In reply to tyrannusBE [2008-06-21 10:24:31 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I do like it. And it makes the scheme go a little haywire. But maybe that's just me. I was in a fairly bitter mood, I'm thinking.

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tyrannusBE In reply to godatesomesatan [2008-06-21 10:29:55 +0000 UTC]

I'll look into it... Doesn't seem awkward to me, but I wrote it, so I'm partial.

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godatesomesatan In reply to tyrannusBE [2008-06-21 10:36:39 +0000 UTC]

You are; very. It's the nature of things. It takes me days to realize my drawings suck.

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tyrannusBE In reply to godatesomesatan [2008-06-21 10:40:40 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, that's the general idea. The 'I rule-syndrome'...

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godatesomesatan In reply to tyrannusBE [2008-06-21 10:43:26 +0000 UTC]

mhm. I think everyone with a sense of self-pride gets it after making something they like. Hey, look at my newest drawing? I like it, surprisingly.

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tyrannusBE In reply to godatesomesatan [2008-06-21 10:48:03 +0000 UTC]

I don't know Fight Club so much, so I can't say anything on how you pictured the character, but the way you pictured the emotion with just the eyes is amazing.

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godatesomesatan In reply to tyrannusBE [2008-06-21 10:49:57 +0000 UTC]

thanks. You don't need to know fight club to appreciate it though.

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tyrannusBE In reply to godatesomesatan [2008-06-21 11:03:34 +0000 UTC]

I'm not even sure what it is... A movie, right?

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godatesomesatan In reply to tyrannusBE [2008-06-21 11:09:14 +0000 UTC]

And a book, a book first. It's the one of the most amazing books I've ever read, and likewise with the movie (a rarity)
The movie is in the top 30 best movies of all time, deserves 10 though. Imdb.com
You should read it. I mean, if GTA is something you enjoy, then this book is for you. And it's short.

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tyrannusBE In reply to godatesomesatan [2008-06-21 14:53:30 +0000 UTC]

I'll see if they have it at the library.

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