Greenwolf103 [2005-09-09 15:28:44 +0000 UTC]

I can relate. I've felt this only MANY YEARS after being saved, as I wandered from the path but did, eventually, find my way back again. Lovely poem!

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vicentvalentine [2005-08-17 16:45:47 +0000 UTC]

this one is better than your others I like it alot , you have some rhyming stuff in it very cool . sorry for the bad comment from yesterday .

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psyko [2005-08-17 06:19:38 +0000 UTC]

i like it, but at the same time i can see why someone would be scared of it.

i think it can come off as scary to some people depending on the definition of being saved. in a historical context being "saved" really meant having your life spared. those who didn't convert were then killed. in a more modern sense you could think of people who called themselves born-again and are "saved" but who's views are percieved as harsh and unfair by some (not attacking you personally here, nor saying that all born-again christians are bad), so that makes for a sense of fear.

the poem is good though, poems that reaffirm beliefs are usually good things to write, and they can only help us to see who we really are. and to share ourselves with the world.

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demonangelwolf [2005-08-16 23:56:18 +0000 UTC]

...um....it scares me....

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