Comments: 12
Ravenworshiper [2005-12-27 19:43:50 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for tellin me about this.
But...I must confess...I'm not too fond of immobiles.
Thanks anyway, I'll be giving you a watch.
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Ravenworshiper [2005-12-27 19:43:47 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for tellin me about this.
But...I must confess...I'm not too fond of immobiles.
Thanks anyway, I'll be giving you a watch.
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dwarfpriest [2005-09-17 16:40:18 +0000 UTC]
Hmm... thats a pretty good drawing.
Some thoughts:
1st: Since she's bare-chested (boob's showing) you should put teh mature content label.
2nd: The angle is really a hard one, but it turned out good. It's just a bit hard to understand her pose. She is just laying on top of her belly, and we are facing her?
3rd: The way her butt "pilled" on top looks good, but her legs are hard to understand what is going on with them
Basically, thats it. Nice job on adding the fat rolls.
You should practice your lineart a bit, trying a more smooth effect, maybe making thicker lines, and make more rounded out corners. A cool effect is to imagine a water balloon 3/4 filled, so you can see how the sides "sags" down, to make it looks more like fat than inflation.
Overal, nice start on big immobiles
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Ubiquitous101 In reply to dwarfpriest [2005-09-17 18:39:45 +0000 UTC]
She's not bare-chested, the clothes are just tightening around her skin. She's wearing her entire costume(if I had colored it it would have been much easier to see), so I didn't see the need to put the mature content label on.
Thank you for the comments.
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dwarfpriest In reply to Ubiquitous101 [2005-09-17 22:23:10 +0000 UTC]
Oh, alright. My mistake. Good details then. And you're welcome.
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Ubiquitous101 In reply to dwarfpriest [2006-09-13 21:43:20 +0000 UTC]
I think Big Horse is the aritst who draw the pic on which this is based.
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