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Ukariarti — Where Did We Go Wrong...

Published: 2011-09-07 03:27:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 854; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 3
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Description When her feet hit the plank, she began to back onto it, giving 10 the idea that he was cornering her.
"You could do so much better off with us instead of them"
She looked down to the ground, the plan growing in her head.
A laugh came from the stitchpunk in front of her, "What's the matter 11? Afraid of heights?"
11 lit the match against the wood, the sudden light from the flame seemed to blind 10.
"What are you going to do with that?" he asked with a chuckle, fear absent on his face.
When they reached the end of the wooden board, 11's foot slipped. She stumbled for a second, but the match fell from her hand, falling to the ground. The lit piece of the wood, hit the black pools on the ground, and soon beneath them was a fury of flames.
10 laughed once again, "What now 11?" he asked taking another step in her direction. The plan underneath them creaked.
Playing her part well, 11 clutched the spear 10 had once owned with shaky hands.
The creature infront of her eyed the weapon with interest. "Are you going to try and kill me?" 10 said.
11's grip tightened on spear.
"I still do love you 11..." he said in a whisper, his voice almost sounded sad, "...don't forget what we were"
Another step, another creak from the board.
Those words. Words such as those should be cherished, but coming from the retched creature in front of her, they only brought anger.
The fire beneath them flared, It was surprising that the flames didn't lick the bottom of the plank.
"I already have!" she cried and flung the spear sideways. The long metal pole slammed into the side of 10's head.
A cry was heard from the male, and he began to stumble sideways. Trying to stop himself from falling, he grabbed the end of the spear. Instead of ceasing his fall, the metal was ripped from 11's hand, and the male fell.

Another attempt at something cool. Not exactly sure how good this is, but eh....

Anyone remember these two? Fellow 9 fan watchers? Its my very first 9 OCs, 11 and 10. For anyone who remembers it is a scene from my fanfic "Lost Comrade". I was re-reading a bit of it today and I just HAD to draw something for it. I miss these two.

art, 11, and 10 (c) me
Stitchpunks (c) Shane Acker
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Comments: 11

FeretStudios [2011-10-24 15:21:20 +0000 UTC]

A bit bone chilling since I know these two so well and since 10 creeps me out. o.o

Thing is, throughout the little story, he asks like 4 questions before 11 says anything. I'm sitting here screaming 'ANSWER ONE!'

Lol XD

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Ukariarti In reply to FeretStudios [2011-10-24 15:27:54 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I know. My writting sucked when I first wrote this, and I didn't realize I put so many questions back to back....I fail. OTL

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FeretStudios In reply to Ukariarti [2011-10-24 15:35:13 +0000 UTC]

Pat pat

It's all good.

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Ukariarti In reply to FeretStudios [2011-10-24 15:36:17 +0000 UTC]

; n ;

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FeretStudios In reply to Ukariarti [2011-10-24 15:40:19 +0000 UTC]

Truly.

0.0

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CastoroChiaro [2011-09-07 23:25:43 +0000 UTC]

Sadly, I think I got to know you after you'd written this story so I'd never heard of it until now. The picture's pretty awesome, though, I like the lighting on it.

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Ukariarti In reply to CastoroChiaro [2011-09-08 02:37:07 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, this was written a short while after I saw 9 and became a hard-core fan. I met you guys like....a year after this story was started. P:

Thank you very much, mommy. :3

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crazydiary86 [2011-09-07 06:19:29 +0000 UTC]

Oh Wow... I read this piece in your story.
It was very dramatic. The picture is nice. I like how you did all the fire and sparks

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Ukariarti In reply to crazydiary86 [2011-09-08 02:38:21 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I think this is actually my favorite scene in the story, just because of how dramatic it is. Unfortunately, I'm not to pleased with the coloring... It could have turned out better. :/

But thank you.

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Sorinchako [2011-09-07 03:31:40 +0000 UTC]

FFFFFFFFFFF I ACTUALLY REMEMBER THIS FROM WAY BACK! 8D

This looks so cool!

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Ukariarti In reply to Sorinchako [2011-09-07 03:36:03 +0000 UTC]

Haha! XD I'm wondering how many people actually REMEMBER Lost Comrade. I wish I could do more with it, so mabye a few scenes from it will do. :/

Thankies Bane!!!

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