star-mac [2013-10-05 21:11:23 +0000 UTC]
The inking isn't all that bad, but next time you draw, you should draw on a blank sheet of paper rather than lined paper. It makes your drawing look like something out of a elementary school art.
Also, as ~Prussianess said, leaves fall all year round. They don't just fall during Autumn. If you want to indicate in your drawing that it's Fall, why not colour the leaves yellow, or better yet, red?
Speaking of colouring, I'm still irritated over the fact that you're still not colouring. You got out of your way to buy an inking pen, but not a box of colouring pencils. Why is that? Did you ran out of money when buying the inking pen? If so, then it must've been the most expensive inking pen that I can imagine.
Overall, it still needs improvements.
3/10
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Prussianess [2013-09-23 01:32:43 +0000 UTC]
Next time, don't use lined paper. It makes a drawing look unfinished.
Also, leaves fall all year round; a few leaves falling doesn't instantly mean that Autumn's coming.
But you drew Oswald well. Much better than how you usually draw him.
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