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Orochimaru is roughless. This doujin feels so in-character. What a treat to read!!
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I love the angles you do and your ability to draw feet. <3
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I feel even more sorry for Sarutobi now
And Orochimaru sounds so Sasuke-ish
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Well... Like teacher like student
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First, excuse me if I haven't commented on latest chapters! I was VERY busy
But finally I'm here 
I love your anatomical study for their bodies!
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Oh, it's TOTALLY ok - I understand that you have so much things to do now... I hope the things are OK with you!!
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It seems that I'll continue with my work for 6 months at least (after March, they will deliver monthly the work for me and the other workers), and I don't know if it could continue in that way or not... but I want to be optimistic! ^_^ in the meanwhile I'll do something on my own
Thank you VERY much
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It does sound optimistic!!
And I have a news that may be interesting for you - I found out that the baby I told you about has his birthday at 23th of November! 
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Yay!!
I'm very happy for you
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Even when I really used to like hiruzen sarutobi, I always hate the way he prefers orochimaru to jiraiya. Sure, he was a genius, but jiraiya was amazing in his own way. That's why I always like that part when hiruzen shows interest in Jiraiya's jutsu, and his perverted qualities
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Well, Sarutobi payed with his life for that mistake...
But I totally agree with you here.
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Wow, I love the angle on the last panel!
poor Jiraya, takin it like a man... 
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Thank you!
Oro was merciless even when he was small, I think...
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yes, he was! Such an interesting mind.
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That bastard snake...Poor J-man.
I love how you arrange your panels, the choice of view is very efficient and the ideas flow clearly. Also nice work on the backgrounds and hatching.
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Well, at least he will get better... But he really should have done the flashback. That +5 would help him out so much.
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*in a whisper* I'm saving his flashback to the very end
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Sweet! Now I wonder if that will help him out or not...
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haha, you've made my day! A knock on the head for jiraiya, more shirtless jiraiya, and news of a nekkid jiraiya!
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Good page!
Poor Jiraiya! He just got beaten by Orochimaru and then Tsunade hits him in the head!
At least Jiraiya's tough when it comes to the pain
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Ha ha, I bet Jiraiya really doesn't like the whole "if you are going to become Hokage" thing!
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Ha, no, he's going to say something else
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orochi looks alitte like a girl....but its goof. Tsunade hit jiraya!
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Well, years later he still looked loke a woman
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Great page
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Yes, he's definitely not a merciful boy... %(
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