Comments: 39
Skye8576 [2020-07-25 19:36:51 +0000 UTC]
Where can one get this mirror? Asking for a friend
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SirWriter [2017-12-04 14:59:44 +0000 UTC]
I want that mirror.
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RoarktheHalf-Orc [2017-11-02 21:47:59 +0000 UTC]
So does that mean that the same thing once happened to Jessica? Fascinating.Β
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JaydenTivon [2017-03-25 02:51:45 +0000 UTC]
I love this TG. πΈ
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tg-comics [2017-02-15 13:07:14 +0000 UTC]
I love it!
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TheSpectreParty [2016-12-04 16:52:26 +0000 UTC]
Most of the grammar is more or less fine. It does bug me a little that you used "if I were she" instead of "if I were her", but that's in no way wrong, though right before it you use "it is" which is alright, but replacing that with "it's" is much less robotic sounding. That said, if you're not entirely sure about whether you should use an apostrophe, it can be good to do it that way.
Later on though, you've used "Did his mirror do this" and "I'm wearing his outfit too", which is definitely incorrect. His is generally used to refer to male ownership, and him is what we'd use to refer to a male as a person, without getting into specifics. Her covers both of these for women, so when you say "I like her", it's the equivalent of what him is, but when you want to refer to something a woman owns, it would be "Did her mirror do this", and his would not be used. I'm guessing you're not a native English speaker, so if you have to run this through google translate it could end up being a useless lesson anyways. If you are a native English speaker, please, get learned.
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11thdr [2016-09-25 22:34:44 +0000 UTC]
i want one of theses Β mirriors oh my yes please!
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Vyctorian [2016-07-05 04:23:19 +0000 UTC]
Awesome work on the expression here ^^
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hdhdhdhdhdhd [2016-06-04 10:07:07 +0000 UTC]
nice tg
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Boundwriter [2016-05-30 21:54:47 +0000 UTC]
M y, but I feel soft and cute,
I n these clothes...hey where's my suit?
R unning in high heels is tough!
R eally, these fishnets feel rough,
O migod - round hips and ass!
R arified gurl!Β I'm first class!
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DragonEmperor999 [2016-05-24 20:36:05 +0000 UTC]
*opens up to a news reporter on the evening news finishing his segment* What will happen next? Find out next time on...*listens to earpeice* This just in, im told this doesn't even have a definate date of the next release. I think we can all agree though that we will enjoy seeing more from this artist soon. *fades to black* (Love the art style though)
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puffin-platthy [2016-05-23 14:31:16 +0000 UTC]
Excellent, really cool little story, it is time for that mirror to get to work. Thank you for sharing xxx
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animal-delos [2016-05-23 00:57:12 +0000 UTC]
I feel like there should be more to this. o.o
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UmbraCallistis In reply to animal-delos [2016-05-23 19:55:25 +0000 UTC]
I have some interesting ideas for the next chap. But I'm still not sure >u<
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thunderguy1027 [2016-05-22 20:33:53 +0000 UTC]
*Thumbs up*
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Kazumy [2016-05-22 19:24:43 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful idea and great work.
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UmbraCallistis In reply to Kazumy [2016-05-23 19:57:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! (qο½₯Οο½₯q)οΎβ‘
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MegamanMaster64 [2016-05-22 18:57:53 +0000 UTC]
Nice job friend
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ProAmature [2016-05-22 18:09:39 +0000 UTC]
I want that mirror :3
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Azerak2ed [2016-05-22 13:24:27 +0000 UTC]
I really want you to continue this story <3
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HalpMi [2016-05-22 09:33:03 +0000 UTC]
Lol I might know how to extend a bit, she tries to find help everywhere and they turn into girls too or something :3
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UmbraCallistis In reply to HalpMi [2016-05-22 17:58:03 +0000 UTC]
I was thinking something similar.... Hmmm maybe him dating with another girl or even Jess by herself
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HalpMi In reply to UmbraCallistis [2016-05-22 22:55:46 +0000 UTC]
Yeah that's an awesome idea!
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UmbraCallistis In reply to dugdam06 [2016-05-22 18:03:14 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, i must say jess is kinda inspired by a friend of mine, which has elizabeth's outfit
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forgottenone666 [2016-05-22 09:12:19 +0000 UTC]
I need a mirror like that.Β Β
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